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Reviews for Angel's Touch

By : ArtemisSensei
  • From ANON - Passing Reader on November 24, 2006
    I dident mean your Gaara is bad!!!! I like your Gaara!!! I just thought you wanted him to be...well...more Gaara ^^; I thought that was what you had said? Im sorry ^^; I'll be good and shutup now...sorry again!
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  • From ANON - Jadejj on November 23, 2006
    The cursed Sharingan that a good one :D The normaly it's a gift good chapter
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  • From ANON - Yuri-san on November 23, 2006
    Gah! *wracks brain* WHAT is Sasuke! I have no idea and I have a feeling that it's completely futile for me to even guess...=_=
    X3 As soon as I get around to it (ie. when hell freezes over -I'm so good at procrastinating *holds up procrastination trophy*) I am SOOOOO gonna draw a chibi picture of Naruto, Gaara and Sasuke in kyuubi, tanuki and kitty PJs!! XD (and I'll even trow in Lee if he's in the story by then XD)
    FUN STORY!! I'M SO HAPPY THAT YOU EVEN HAVE THE FUTURE STORY OUTLINE PLANNED!! Notwithstanding an act of God, maybe now there'll be a story on aff that actually updates regularly. XP
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  • From ANON - Anna on November 23, 2006
    Sasuke is jealous, Sasuke is jealous! ahem, sorry for the childish rant, but I couldn't help it!

    Sharigan!! Ohhhhh, I surely hope that you'll write that ^^

    Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 23, 2006
    I'm scared, you're scaring me. I almost didn't read the chapter I was that scared. Sad... ending? Even if it's the first part! Blah I still haven't recovered from ThreeAlls. Oh well, I won't wig out yet, but gah. I thought it was fluff. Although you said the second part if you split it up would be happy... oh god though, I'll cry a river if Sasuke gets trained to fight with the good guys and then suddenly goes off with the bad guys. Waah. I already get that in the manga. That aside, this was cute. I like a jealous Sasuke, so I thought Neji asking out Naruto was... fun. Although I would've liked to have seen Naruto's reaction to Neji asking him out. I think Naru would've been so confused and cute!

    But, I did really like the way Sasuke developed his sharingan. Ahh makes me think back to the first episodes and those were my favorite! I just really liked the way you described it at the point where his eyes hurt and how his hands moved toward the ball. Right away I knew what was going on and yet I hadn't expected it. Glad you're feeling a little better!
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  • From ANON - littleolmee on November 22, 2006
    Another wonderful chapter. LOL, Neji is now after Naruto, is he really interested or is he just trying to stir up Sasuke? The Sharingan makes it's appearance, can't wait to see what you have in mind to explain Sasuke having it. Keep up the good work, sorry to hear you've been feeling ill; hope you will be 100% very soon. Hope you have a happy turkey day!
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  • From ANON - CommGonn on November 22, 2006
    nice basketball scene,
    but if all you really do at your college is play halo tournaments,
    y not somehow put that into the story also? =P
    (just a thought)

    -Kenneth =D
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  • From ANON - CommGonn on November 21, 2006
    High school basketball - seperated into 3 teams
    freshmen, JV, and varsity
    varsity plays around 30 games a year, with about 15 players per team.
    Hope you get better soon (^_^)^ (high fives =))
    -Kenneth
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  • From ANON - niguara_chic on November 21, 2006
    well sorry about your allergies. I hope you feel better really soon. and the basketball thing,sorry i don't know a thing about basketball I just like to watch it the other peeps can probaly help you,so update really soon and hope you feel better
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  • From ANON - Yuri-san on November 21, 2006
    I would if I could, Artemis. My sister used to play high-shool B-ball, but I was, like, seven and have forgotten everything ^^;;
    Good luck with those allergies...
    C=
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  • From ANON - Rasengan22 on November 21, 2006
    Don't do that to me. I almost had a heart attack when I saw there was an author's note. Usually that means bad things. Um, I have a suggestion. Looks like the person before me said pretty much more than I can say... so yeah Naruto would be a lousy post. Sasuke would make a good point guard. I'm sure he could handle the ball pretty well, and plus he's a leader. (I don't know if you're making them play basketball or they're watching basketball or what)... So rather than go through some stupid little things that will be confusing, I suggest you do what I did when writing a soccer scene. Go to wikipedia and simply type in basketball. It explains it in really simple language and will give you specific categories about positions, scoring, etc... It will help you A LOT. And feel better! I've missed you updating!
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  • From ANON - Mizuti on November 21, 2006
    Well to start off in high school they have a Varsity and a Junior Varsity or JV team. there are 5 players from each opposing team that play on the court. Ummm.....i don't want you to feel like i'm making u sound stupid so ummm...so if you have any specific questions then ask cause i don't know how much you know lol :).....But anyways for term wise in basketball there are time outs that coaches can call 5 per game three 30sec time outs and two 1min time outs.....There are point guards who handle the ball and call the plays there is usually a main one there usually small in height and quick and then two guards that are pretty well with a ball and can shoot from the three point line and wings or corner of the key......ummm there are post or forwards that are usually near the hoop and are usually the tallest of the team they get the rebounds or do layups they also protect the basket...Lastly there is a Center who guards the middle on defence or helps rebounds on offence. There are subs that can go in when ever the ball stops in play which usually means when the ref. has the ball. For high school basketball they have a stop clock which means that when a team has the ball they have 30 sec to shoot the ball. as soon as the ball is shot and hits the rim then the clock starts over. I don't know what else i can say i've played basketball for 6 years and have been a team manager for a boys high school team. so if you have any questions ask cause i really like this story and i want you to continue .
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  • From ANON - Donedin on November 20, 2006
    Aww sorry to hear you are sick... and no I don't know anything about basketball. @_@ sorry I suck at sports in general. But good luck! And feel better soon! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Passing Reader on November 20, 2006
    Dont know anything about basketall but I hope you get better ^^'
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  • From ANON - kawaiicrimsonkitsune on November 20, 2006
    Now I review ^^ Ok really, whos Gaara going to be paired up with. Thats a #1 must know right now. Please, no rock lee. Nothin against him, I just don't like that couple ^^; But hurry and update.
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