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Reviews for Angel's Touch

By : ArtemisSensei
  • From ANON - mirandler43 on December 25, 2006
    Hey you! For some reason I missed the update for ch. 17, so you'll be seeing two reviews from me today, one for 17 and one for 18. :D This chapter was, I think, the best I've seen from you so far. You described Naruto's new environment exceptionally well (side note: all of this is just based on my opinion and my likes), with enough to give the reader a clear picture without over-describing, if that makes sense. It's very common to be at either extreme: little description, where the author gives just enough so that the reader can maybe see it in their head, but they'll have to come up with the details themselves (my tendency); and too much description, where it's almost boring too read, being filled with a lot of details that probably don't matter. You balance the two very well. You also did a good job with the last half, with the search team and how they were "lost". You kept that illusion going for the reader for as long as it took Sasuke to figure out. (I'm such a nerd, but I love that kind of stuff. It's very easy to foreshadow in a really obvious way, but, again, you managed to keep that in check.) So far, this is the best chapter you've put out as far as grammar and spelling and all of that fun stuff. I'm very impressed! If I were to edit this, I would have to look very hard for errors. Well done, and I'll see you in a few minutes! ;)
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  • From ANON - ClosetEmo on December 25, 2006
    Can ya beleive christmas is almost over already...

    Soon its gonna be the new year!

    Where has all the time gone?

    Awwwww Sasuke and Naruto kissed under the mistletow sooo cute!Oh and I loved it when Sasuke kicked Sakuras ass on the gamecube LOL!

    I really enjoyed the christmas special

    Okay now im gonna play on my new wii I got for christmas YEESS! I got Zelda twilight princess but im already stuck on it I cant find all the damn monkeys at the forest temple grrrr....

    Cant wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - Shadow on December 25, 2006
    :3 -lurve- I like this a lot so far! X3 It's funny how jealous Sasuke gets -evil snigger- Uh, this may have been answered before, but uh...whose Neji-chan gonna end up with?

    And is Itachi going to show up? -big huge Naruto-style puppy eyes- Please say yes...because Itachi....is god. -falls over-

    Don't give me that look Sasuke. Itachi is too god. -fanboys-

    ^^ Anyway, Merry christmas and keep up the good work!

    PS. Am I the only one who thinks Neji/Haku would be the cutest couple ever? Or am I just seriously messed up? -looks around warily- Don't tell Zabuza I said that -shifty eyes-ninjas away-
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  • From ANON - CommGonn on December 25, 2006
    YAY I was the first christmas box thingy ^^
    First of all, great job on answering all those reviews, you must have had at least 5,000 words =P
    Second of all... Keep up the good work in adding the little side stories that make this thing funnier =D

    Merry Christmas! ^_^ *hands a cookie over*
    -Kenneth
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  • From ANON - bloodyrose on December 23, 2006
    very nice! It seems our naruto is very popular! keep up the good work, oh and if you don't have a beta or your beta suddenly goes on vacation i'll be glad to do one of your stories ^_^. Now this is my question [when will Iruka and Kakashi get it on? same question goes for Sasuke and Naruto.] no. 2 [when can neiji get a clue that naruto doesn't like him?!] and lastly [i think lee and gaara make a cute pair but how come there's no Kiba and Shino?]
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  • From becca on December 22, 2006
    Hey, great story you have here, I read the whole thing in one go! Umm, I was wondering, do you still need to read the manga, cause if you do; you could watch it on youtube you know? I put it up, and so do several others. We're up to chapter 336 now. Please Email me if you have any questions. I love the fact that Haku is in the story, as soon as you started talking about him at the begining of the story, I knew it was him. X3
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  • From ANON - Crackers on December 21, 2006
    haha. is Neji plotting to kill sasuke while he sleeps?
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  • From ANON - innerchild on December 21, 2006
    when i read that the tengu was haku, i was like wtf? it's cool and everything, but i definitely wasn't expecting that. and he's so cute, while naruto's kind of oblivious. they'd be so cute together... but i'm still a rabid narusasu yaoi fangirl. and i've never been a big fan of gaara and lee (if that's the direction you're going in), but for some reason, i could totally see them together in this story.

    so, i guess my question would be to gaara. *do you like lee's bushy eyebrows? are you jealous of them? if he could help you grow yours out like that, would you?*

    those were kind of stupid, but i can't think of anything serious yet. so, can't wait until you update. i'm really looking forward to the holiday special!

    merry christmas, happy hannuka, happy kwanza... lot more of 'em, just can't think of them. so, happy holidays!

    -inc


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  • From ANON - summerwind on December 20, 2006
    PLease update soon!I love this story
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  • From ANON - Yuri-san on December 20, 2006
    >.>' ...Maybe I'm a bad person, but I really enjoyed reading them fight. (Or maybe you're just a good writer ^^) At least Sasuke figured out they were in an illusion... though I find it hard to believe Kiba wouldn't have seen it first...
    I do not remember the bunny at all. O_o I got who the bunny was taliking about (Akamaru) right away; I thought it was hilarious! XD
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  • From ANON - Anna on December 19, 2006
    I'm afraid that you're right, they can't work together for their lifes! Too arrogant to do that.
    Ohhhh well, Haku is immune, but I will be surprised if Naruto's whinnes actually affect him.
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  • From ANON - ClosetEmo on December 19, 2006
    Wow so the tengu was Haku I did not expect it to be him but im glad it is because I love Haku.Will Zabuza be in the story as well then?

    I hope Haku does not meet the same tragic fate as he does in the anime and manga though so I hope you give him a nice ending like becoming Zabuza`s wife or something LOL

    I love Sasuke`s and Neji`s fighting over Naruto does that Naruto know how lucky he is to have two hot guys fighting over him like that?

    Okay and I have a few things to ask Naruto and co...

    1.Naruto who would you like the most to kiss under the mistletoe?
    2.Sasuke do you think Naruto would make a good wife?
    3.Kiba you seem to be a big dog lover what do think about Shino`s bugs?
    4.Neji when you looked at naked Naruto at the hotspring were you pleased with the size of Naruto`s errr ummm biceps?

    MERRY CHRISTMAS EVERYONE!
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  • From SilverPhantom on December 19, 2006
    I like this story! I'm amused that Sasuke is now practically a ninja again ^^ I figured that Sasuke got his ability to use chakra and his Sharingan from his near brush with death. But meh. Your story, your plot. I look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Donedin on December 19, 2006
    Thanks! Ya.. ok. So Sasuke is not dead but he has the ability that only dead should posess... right. I'll just let you explane that one when the time comes then LOL. And ya, Haku was quite OC but that's ok cause I love him. And a question... humm. How come Naruto doesn't know he is a saint beast? Shouldn't he know? Does he find out?! Ok, that's 3 questions but oh well. Can't wait for the next chapter!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Sama on December 18, 2006
    Well it is about a week before christmas! LOL but I loved your chappie!!! That was totally awesome just like the last one! Great plot so far! I LOVE IT! LOl. Update soon!
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