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Reviews for Salvation

By : OliviaBenton
  • From ANON - puff on September 26, 2006
    wow this is a good story but one thing that could improve this story is the use of less elaborate words and composures. I feel like i'm reading a translated shakspear novel teehee but other than that this story follows a really good plot!!! keep up the good work!
    your number one fan puff
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  • From ANON - akasha on September 25, 2006
    i'm really digging this story. i want you to update soon! i want sasuke to suffer 'cause he's an ass, i want to see sakura fall in love with kakashi... please don't make me wait too long!!
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  • From ANON - CianaRui on September 24, 2006
    Nice second chapter. I look forward to the next installment.
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  • From ANON - mel on September 16, 2006
    Great start. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update again soon.
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  • From ANON - akasha on September 16, 2006
    i really like this first chatpter... it's full of promise and intrigue. i can't wait to see how this is going to evolve. i love kaka/saku stories! you have a great way with words that makes the story seem to be playing out in a big screen in my mind's eye. awesome! update soon please!
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  • From CutieSakura on September 16, 2006
    Wow. That's all I can say to this. What a fantastic beginning to what I'm sure will be an amazing story. Your description of the settings, as well as the flashbacks, was precise and beautiful. You effectively conveyed each character's thoughts and emotions with excellent skill. Not to mention the premise of the story, which is enthralling from the first moment. I can't wait to see where you take this! Update soon! ~Lily
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  • From ANON - Monkey Lady on September 16, 2006
    A bit depressing so far, but well written. :) You've set an interesting mood. Will it continue? I look forward to seeing where you take this. Looks like it should be an interesting and creative story. Not the same ol', same ol' kind of the thing. (Not that I don't like those too) :) Nice work so far.
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  • From ANON - kakashilover on September 16, 2006
    Dude!!! This is friggin awesome. I can't wait to read more
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  • From ANON - CianaRui on September 16, 2006
    Wonderful description and rich language. I could almost see the battlefield through her eyes. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From promise2003 on September 16, 2006
    soooo good....more more more more more. I did really enjoy it though. The pictured that you painted was filled with such carnage, but at the same time hope. I really hope that the next chapter comes soon.
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  • From ANON - ronsmyhero on September 16, 2006
    Hi. Nice beginning. Looking forward to more.
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