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Reviews for Naruto's Disaster

By : ChaosLord
  • From ANON - guest on September 12, 2016

    Kill yourself, virgin.


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  • From ANON - .... on October 26, 2006
    this is a good story i hope to read the next chapter soon
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  • From ANON - Josh on October 16, 2006
    Hopefully the messanger is Shikamaru but it is your story.. Hope to ehar from you.. E-mail me so we can talk at JTB8834@aol.com I would like to know a few things since you will be tied up with a few things... Like the update but I have a few suggestions for you if you want to hear them
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  • From ANON - Josh on October 06, 2006
    Hey I like the story I hope you update it soon. I like the way everything was going. The part of Naruto letting the Kyubi taking over so Sakura can be happy was very touching cuz of Naruto's character and then she realizes she loves him too late then he comes back to them and hopefully things get better for everyone..... Update soon e-mail me at JTB8834@aol.com
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  • From ANON - Beastboy the Jedi on October 04, 2006
    You have a great story line here, but you do need some work, for one, you're not descriptive enough, not a big problem, also, you use their names almost all the time, I would suggesta rewrite where you use , her, they, and others more often, also, you need a bit of work on your grammar, if you decide to follow my advice, I would also suggest a beta

    Just makes good sense.

    Catch ya on the flip side
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  • From ANON - Jebus on October 02, 2006
    It shows that you are a math person and not really a writer. This isn't to say it's bad. This is merely to say that you possess, albeit cliched, a small talent for romance. Cliche isn't bad, your story has just enough tenderness to keep us going. I suggest a beta, or a freind who is very specialized in english writing. That way you can sit back, write, and they take care of awkward phrases and the like.


    Ja!
    Matthew
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  • From ANON - mu on September 25, 2006
    You gotta work on your grammar and writing style. It's exhausting to read~
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  • From ANON - Because I Can on September 23, 2006
    I really don't have any sujestions because all the ideas i can come up with will change the story to much but if u don't like any of the other ones u get just email me and i'll fire so much at u u'll be bound to find something worth while.

    Anyways i like what ur doin and keep it up.

    Because I Can
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  • From ANON - narusaku_69 on September 21, 2006
    kick ass keep updating it.
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  • From ANON - mel on September 19, 2006
    Great chapter! Keep updating.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 16, 2006
    wtf why did kakashi and jiraiya not eviscerate the bitch for talking to them like that
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  • From ANON - WS on September 14, 2006
    Good story, I like the plot so far, but it could use a little more detail during the chapter- they're, uh, kind of short, not that that's a bad thing. So, in conclusion, keep going damn it. *Steals a shocky monkey and tells it to keep you working* Meet Josh, the most evil creature you will ever encounter if you don't keep working, now if you'll excuse me, I'm going to go run away like a scared little girl because he's a monkey armed with a tazer. *Clucks and disappears in a chicken shaped puff of smoke*
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  • From ANON - Katharine on September 13, 2006
    I like the plot of the story so far. I want to see what happens next.
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