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Reviews for Secret, Inevitable Love

By : plizama
  • From ANON - Skyler on September 14, 2006
    lol. I didn't know Iruka could have such realistic imaginations. Wish I could have that. I'm really enjoying the story so please update ASAP
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  • From ANON - lo on September 14, 2006
    This is really sweet, it makes me grin. Nice work, though a little ooc but nice.
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  • From ANON - lo on September 14, 2006
    I like this first chapter. I can't wait to see how you develope this.
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  • From ANON - Curious on September 14, 2006
    Wow, I really like your story so far, I'm wondering if Itachi is going to kill his clan in this one, I guess sasuke isn't a jerk here because his brother is still alive and so is his clan. Well keep up the story, you're definetly doing well.
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  • From ANON - Sasuke_pimp on September 14, 2006
    Update soon please, I so love this story right now. Hugs and kisses much xoxoxoxoxoxoxo
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  • From ANON - Sharon808 on September 14, 2006
    OMG So kawaii. I simply love it, keep up everything your doing ;-)
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  • From ANON - Ash on September 14, 2006
    Another great chapter, it's very sweet with Naruto's and Kakashi's relationship. And Iruka now being introduced into the story, I love it. And Sasuke's actually nice. Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - punkin02 on September 14, 2006
    I love the way you have Sasuke and NAruto interact with eachother. Hope you update soon
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  • From ANON - trabeck on September 13, 2006
    I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! i can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!update soon please!!!!!!!!!^-^
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  • From ANON - Cesia on September 13, 2006
    Oh wow. I love the story line so far.^^ Can't wait to read more! ^o^
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  • From ANON - DA on September 13, 2006
    I really love your story, and I can't wait to read more, hope the next chapters soon. Will Naruto be a bit more mature and less dumb? Either way, I'll be here waiting.
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  • From feisu on September 13, 2006
    love the story :3 update soon will you? :3
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  • From ANON - punkin02 on September 13, 2006
    This story sounds pretty good, hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Bookworm51485 on September 12, 2006
    Actually I do have one more question, why would the people invading come ask Naruto's mother where the Hero Water was and on top of that, when she says she doesn't know give up? I get the impression that they're outcasts in the village so I don't understand why he'd come to her for answers instead of looking for a village leader. And also the transition from him questioning her to molesting her is a bit quick.

    I'm feeling a bit wary about leaving this bit of con. crit. (I just had a bit of an incident with an author and her reviewers over some con.crit. I left for her that involved me getting nasty emails) but I decided to go ahead and leave it anyways and I'm hoping that you take it the way it's intended.
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  • From ANON - Bookworm51485 on September 12, 2006
    I like your beginning. I've only seen a few stories with Kakashi raising Naruto and I've loved the well-written ones. It's sweet. I have a question though, is there no kyuubi in this story? And I mean not only sealed within Naruto but in connection to Konoha at all. Does that make sense? Sometimes I just can't say what I mean to in a few words. I'm wondering if Kyuubi isn't sealed in Naruto, is he sealed in one of the other kids? And if kyuubi doesn't exist in the story at all, does that mean that Yondaime is still alive? I don't figure there is, but I figure I should ask anyways.

    I have to say my personal preference would be if Kyuubi isn't sealed in Naruto then he just not exist within the story (I read one story where Kyuubi was sealed in Sakura. Ugh, that just bothered me so much. I didn't like that female being put in such a position of pity. If it's not obvious I can't stand her. Oh well moving on), but it's your choice. I just like reading stories with Kakashi and little Naruto, so I'd probably read it anyways even if you chose to put Kyuubi in Sakura *cringe* because I really do like your beginning so far and the focus wouldn't be on her. Wow, I'm rambling now so I'm going to try to wrap this up. One thing that did bother me is the formatting. At points there are just big chunks of writing, it would be easier to read if it was more spaced out on the page.
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