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Reviews for Two Different Worlds

By : Natsuhiko
  • From ANON - Lilith on September 14, 2006
    this just keeps getting better and better! my favorite part was when naruto stared into it-chan's eyes. awesomness. i totally saw that in my mind. oh, btw, do u already have a beta?
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  • From ANON - Bookworm51485 on September 13, 2006
    The two Naruto's really are similar aren't they, both a bit dense. And you just can't help wanting to squeeze him for it. Moving on, you make me very happy and I agree with you, SasuNaru stories are starting to get a bit old for me. They have to be well-written (and preferably not a triangle where they portray Gaara and/or Neji as losers) or they drive me nuts. I'm also with you on seme!Naruto, at least with certain pairings. ItaNaru definitely being one of them. I can buy some NaruSasu stories (though they're usually AU or the characters are OOC) but unless the author seriously frigs with Itachi's character, there is no way he'd ever be an uke to anybody, including Naruto. It would just be too weird. Anyways I liked your new chapter, I can't wait until Other World!Naruto figures it out or the two come face to face. Though I am wondering about Other World!Itachi. Is he going to show up at some point or is Other World!Naruto going to get with This World!Itachi or is This
    World!Naruto going to get with This World!Itachi and Other World!Naruto and Other World!Itachi get back together? Did that long sentence make sense? Oh well, you probably don't want to give anything away and that would be giving things away. I did notice a few grammar problems but you did say that you don't have a beta. I'd suggest going to the yahoo group they have set up to match betas with authors in need:)
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  • From ANON - kyuubigirl on September 13, 2006
    (not to be confused with other kyuubi person) *random squish* I like this. I don't care if the chapter was short, it's nice when an author is eager. I think the story's really fun so far, and I like listening to Kisame and Itachi talk with out of timeline Naruto. You'd think they'd be hardasses but it's obvious from the manga there's quite a bit of humor within the Akatsuki. So, I think it works! Poor Naruto, in a world where he's dating Ita... although I'm also a fan of ItaNaru (and SasuNaru), so yay!
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  • From ANON - lilith on September 13, 2006
    awesome story ! i cant wait to see where this goes!
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  • From ANON - Bookworm51485 on September 12, 2006
    So there are two different Naruto's, one Akatsuki and one not? Well that's going to be complicated isn't it. I can't wait to see what you write next, I love ItaNaru stories. Though I'm guessing this will also be a SasuNaru story. Again complicated. Oh well, as long as there's ItaNaru in it and hopefully the Akatsuki Naruto will stay with Itachi I'm happy. There aren't enough non-SasuNaru stories out there.
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  • From ANON - Hellagoddess on September 12, 2006
    OOH! Update! Please! Now! IMMEDIATELY! This looks to be a reallt interesting story if it's going the way i think it's going! Yay for NaruIta! *snuggles* Please update soon! I know i'll be an avid reader!

    Hellagoddess
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