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Reviews for Two Different Worlds

By : Natsuhiko
  • From ANON - Shosuro on September 22, 2006

    "please please oh pretty please"

    ****tears flowing from big pleaing eyes****

    "with sugar on top!!! Please update as soon as you can!!! I shall be here waiting until you do!!!!

    * thanks *
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 20, 2006
    hey i just started reading ur story and i think it has five great first chapters i like how the story sound please update soon ill look forword to more of the story
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  • From ANON - Loveless_Beloved on September 19, 2006
    What the hell? So alternate Naruto AND alternate Itachi are in the original Naruto world? I really like the new chap, despite the evil cliffy. I wonder if Naruto and Itachi will get some alone time at the hotel? This chapter was longer than the others also. Keep em' coming!!!
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  • From ANON - Loveless_Beloved on September 19, 2006
    Nice chap. I like the cute little kiss in the resturant. It was a nice scene.
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  • From ANON - Shosuro on September 17, 2006
    AHHH it like crack but better!!!!
    I finally get my fix!!!!
    I just want to thank you for updating soooooo FAST!!!
    I come home from a hard days work and I get to find out
    what is happening to my favorite characters!!!!
    But the cliff hangers are killing me....(like I am the one to talk...I do the same thing with my stories)
    But really is this gonna be a happy ending or what?!?!
    Is the "real" Itachi gonna get with the "real" Naruto???
    I can't wait until next time!!!

    great work!!!
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  • From ANON - Hellagoddess on September 16, 2006
    This is getting really interesting and i'm always excited to see a new chapter!

    Keep it up!

    Hellagoddess
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  • From ANON - Bookworm51485 on September 16, 2006
    You don't suck. This sucks: http:// www. ficwad. com/ viewuser. php? uid= 22970. That's what someone who sucks really looks like, not only in writing but in attitude and response. Your doing well so don't worry about it.

    I see now we have Other World!Itachi. Complications abound. I can imagine him waking up, if he does wake up, and thinking that This WorlD!Naruto is his Naruto and freaking everybody out. And then Sai confronting Naruto.... I can't wait until your next chapter comes about.

    Have you had any luck finding a beta?
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  • From ANON - Shosuro on September 15, 2006
    Ahhhh that is the fix that I so desperately needed!!!
    Its like crack and its great!!!
    You are going to make me cry when Naruto finds out where he is, and Itachi is gonna be sad!!! ***tears*** Argh!!! Who is gonna end up with who??? I can't wait!!

    As always great work!!
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  • From ANON - Aoi-sama on September 15, 2006
    kyaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh!!!!
    it's getting exciting. don't worry your doing just fine.
    i luvvvv how twisted it was!!!!!
    hope the other it-chan still alive. itll be sad if he dies.
    pleeeeeeeeeeese make it ItaNaru ending. it just sssoooooooo sweeeeeeeeeeeeeettttttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Bookworm51485 on September 14, 2006
    You don't suck. I know crap, I can show you crap, and believe your story is not it. So don't feel bad. Putting Sai in actually wasn't a bad choice in my opinion. It's a way for the two Naruto's to be introduced that doesn't take excessively long and isn't ridiculous.

    About the betas, you could put up a notice in your story. If you go to the group, you just post a notice saying that your looking for a beta and give a description and a link to your story. You can also go to the forum and ask there. Personally I prefer the forum, the people there are nicer. If you can't find a beta at those places, I'd be willing to do it for you for a bit, but I can be slow with it depending on what's going on at the moment.

    On Neji and Gaara, *sigh* I've read so many stories that portray them as delusional, obsessive almost stalkers. Liking Sasuke isn't a problem, but there's no need to put down Gaara or Neji in an attempt to build him up. And it's not just the author's but the readers too. I have two specific examples. In the first, this author wrote a story where Naruto had a secret lover and the readers would vote in a poll to decide who he was. She had maybe 10 other options, but Sasuke got more votes than everyone else combined. In another story, Naruto had a secret admirer. It was supposed to be a mystery and we would guess who the admirer was based on clues. Even before clues were given, there were a ton of people asking for Sasuke. Then when clues were given that eliminated Sasuke, they were still saying it was him. Then when the author specifically said that he had been eliminated and that it was final, they were still asking for Sasuke. And then when the admirer was revealed as Neji (though stupid Shikamaru stole his thunder, grrrr), they were still saying Sasuke. And now she's started a sequel where another admirer has popped up and the Sasuke single-mindedness has started again. I can't wait until the people in the Naruto fandom gain some imagination and realize that it doesn't ALWAYS have to be Sasuke. I mean I like SasuNaru, but come on. Lack of variety leads to boredom and I'm getting bored.
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  • From ANON - Loveless_Beloved on September 14, 2006
    It would be nice if the chapters were longer, but you are updating rather fast it appears, so thats understandable. I was wondering if there are going to be any actual 'Lemons' in this story. Hopefully there will be. You should have a small ItaNaru moment where things are almost escalating to something sexual, but then have Itachi stop it to explain that he isn't who he appears to be. It would be interesting. Otherwise I like the way things are going. It seems very interesting. I just wish I had read the manga. I looked up some info though, so I'm not as much in the dark.
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  • From ANON - Loveless_Beloved on September 14, 2006
    Ok. Interesting, very interesting.
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  • From ANON - Loveless_Beloved on September 14, 2006
    Good, but.... WTF???!!??
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  • From ANON - Evans on September 14, 2006
    Of COURSE I'd review your wonderful story. ;] I've never seen a plot like this before, you know. Two Narutos' in the same timeline.

    ...Disturbing. xDDD

    I'd like to suggest that Naruto [Ita-Naru one] learns about his predicament early, so he can better understand what he's supposed to do. I'm sort of impatient to see what would happen when Naruto from that reality, and the Naruto from the 7-year-old-knew-Itachi-joined-Akatsuki-reality. A promising start, really.

    Keep up the good job
    Evans
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  • From ANON - Shosuro on September 14, 2006
    AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    ....ok.... i think i am fine now......

    At first I was like....(what the F*&@!!)
    Now that I read the First Chapter I am hooked!!!
    I've read my fair share of fics and they are ALMOST always the same.....
    but this!!!! This is something I have yet to read!!!! I was never a big fan of Naruto + Itachi, because it never made any sense to put them together as a couple, but YOU have a good vaild reason why they are together!!!! Different dimensions!!!! Its just GREAT!!!! I can't wait to read your next chapter!!!
    Good work!!

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