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By : sasukeskyuubi

From ANON - Mayana on January 29, 2008
Oh! I like it so far :D Keep up the good work and I'll be waiting for the next chapter =3
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From CianisDeRolionus on January 29, 2008
Wow! This is a great fic! I just read like all 16 chapters wondering why I haven't read it before!! Absolutely wonderful! I am eagerly anticipating the next chapter! Keep up the great work!
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From ladygizarme on January 29, 2008
holy fucking evil cliffies, batman!! WRITE MORE NOW!!!! i loved the part in naru's part where he was like "if i wanted to die, i'd be dead. i'm a smart guy" i love his sass, even in these situations. did naru tell kakashi about sasuke? what will sasuke say?? are sasori and dei staying for it?? i neeeeeeeed the next one nowwwwwwwww, pppllleeeaaassseee!!! sasu and itachi's convo was, as usual, titillatingly fucked up. and why do i love sasu's self harm so much? and omg, with his FINGERNAILS! i love the way you describe it and his feelings about it.

now channel sasuke more and WRITE THE NEXT!!! (please?)

~ lg
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From Allys on January 29, 2008
LOL, Vhick you cannot possibly get any more emo than this, *Glomps u* YaY!!! You updated XD. I really do love this story and we're just getting into the really good stuff *Huggles* I hope you pdate soon cause you're killing me with these cliff hangers *chuu* ♥
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From dolphi99 on January 02, 2008
Great story, I can't wait to see what's happening next, I love how you're doing each one's point of view, and good job working other characters in to the story.
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From leanne on September 13, 2007
Okay well I can't really say I liked the Uchiha incest stuff but it goes with this plot and usually when something like this is so dark and seems to have no redeeming quality (at least at first it seemed that way) I usually quit reading and move on to something not so desturbing. Orochimaru needs to die Uchiha Itachi needs major counseling or maybe he needs to die also. Sasuke needs major counseling too and at least he has redeemable feelings of guilt over what he's done, but Itachi doesn't care he just loves torturing his brother for some reason. I mean Sasuke's rich now right? He's a major rock star lead singer He could have left the band and started another band if he wanted. Sasuke is in so much pain and is so fucked up by his brother its horrible and I just want to say why does Gaara or anybody do something about the abuse thats going on between the two brothers, and that psycho orochimaru, I mean Itachi acts so like he doesn't even love his brother and for him to even allow Orochimaru to touch Sasuke, to beat him up I mean come on! what kind of brother lets that happen? If Itachi is as possessive as I think he is over Sasuke than he would have killed Orochimaru or something. I mean I know that he stopped it after twenty minutes but still...

What I found is myself being drawn in to Sasuke's character here becuase he does know it's wrong to be with his brother, he doesn't want to be like him, and it hurts him to be with Itachi psycological and physically. I think Sasuke's having a break down he knows inside himself things have got to change that he's not happy at all with Itachi or the band or the situation he is in, he is completely powerless here because he's been strangled by his need to be with Itachi because he thinks he's the only one person who is able to love him, or something to that affect I guess, I don't really understand the mind sets of the abused and the raped, the way Sasukes mind has been warped, and he's been made to be weak and dark and warped, but there is good in him that could grow if given that chance.

But now he's in couseling and Naruto is there for counseling too I think. And thats going to be really fascinating to read. I hope there will be some healling going on for Sasuke and also for Naruto. They both hurt a lot but then Sasuke seems to hurt more than Naruto only because he's been suffering in hell for the last six or so years with his brother undermining his self esteem and his intelligence and his self worth, that kind of damage is going to need a lot of help to heal and hopefully Naruto will be able to forgive him in do time as well as help him with his own recovery.

Dude, all I got to say is you are one dark gem thats' got me hooked on wanting to know whats going to happen next. Update soon please.

P.S. I hope I didn't offend you or make you think this was some kind of flame your writting is really well done and doesn't feel constricted like a robotic form of writing. It has fluidity and a pain in it that is carried over to the reader, that's talent.
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From Chria on September 12, 2007
The plot in this is soooooo good. I love it. You are a great writer because Naruto is doing alot of things that one wouldn't normally do in that situation. But due to the introspection of his mind it all makes so much sense. I'm left reeling. The same goes to Sasuke. Their interactions are always so intense. Woo. I can't wait til next chapter. Much Love~
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From Ladelle on September 10, 2007
Ha! Am I sensing a fellow Coloradoan? And yeah, most of CO can be considered the boons. Anways, I like the fic and will continue reading.
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From ladygizarme on September 10, 2007
omg omg, you tease! lol, ah but hey, sometimes it takes small chapters to move to the next phase, ne? and at least you are updating! i'm really curious about what sasuke told kakashi.. and what naruto's reaction will be to seeing him/sasuke apparently ignoring him/if it'll effect his meeting with kakashi. and what sasuke plans to do when he finds out where naruto's room is/why he's there...

and on another note, i'd LOVE to see (err.. hear? ..read..) gai as a radio personality! it'd so fit him

great updates, dude, now i really wanna write more on SMFO! (which i was already doing before, but now i'm even more gung ho, cuz this fic somehow gets me fired up!)

&hearts
~ lg
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From ladygizarme on September 10, 2007
wow dude, i figured naruto would end up overdoing it on those pills.. yep yep.. despite the situation, i like how you managed to keep it at an undertone rather than over the top reaction from tsunade or whatever.. her concern was genuine, with a decent amount of parental chastisement. and you still managed to make me chuckle at things that are so true, like telling time from how many shows pass, etc. and this especially tickled me although judging by the fact that his insides were still decidedly on the inside of his body, his aunt had not heard him.

and now... DUM DUM DUM! sasuke and naruto, face to face again! *goes to next chap eagerly*
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From ladygizarme on September 10, 2007
ch. 13:

so, i was right, i had a few to catch up on! had to look at the rev's on TONFA to see where i'd last read.. apparently it was ch 12! but since you haven't updated past ch 13 there anyway, i will review here..

so, them coming together in the same chap was awesomely intense.. i loved the details of both their reactions, how sasuke's hand shook when he signed the cd and how he couldn't take his eyes from naruto, and how naruto felt intense and then couldn't go through with exposing sasuke in the end. their reactions/actions afterward were also appropriately extreme. just the right touch of angst and "self-medication" on both their parts. of course, uchihacestiness is always a bonus to me even (especially) if it's caused/accompanied by angst.

and nowwwwww... i will read the other chapters!! brb!
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From Allys on September 10, 2007
Hey XD, I'm just glad you're back to updating XD. I can't wait until they get to meet again, I really freaking wanna know you would say in this kind of situation. Gai as a radio personality fits perfectlty in a hysterical kind of way XD, it promises to be fun. Thanks again for the update sweetheart XD. Hope you make it back again soon *Hugs*.
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From NaoAngel on September 10, 2007
OMG i dunno why AFF wont let me leave reviews *sigh* I hope it works this time. Anyway, i really really love your fic, I love the idea, your writing, and how you described Sasuke's personnality, everything is just great^^ you so have to continue, coz it's amazing. aw, yeah it's short, but don't worry, i really enjoyed this chap!!! I love Kakashi, he's great like always XD i cant wait to know what's gonna happen with naruto :-)
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From marquesgue1 on September 10, 2007
you updated! now they're in the same hospital, Im not sure how Naruto's gonna take it when they're alone together - Sasuke's pretty much made everything in Naruto's life go wrong but then Sasuke's life is pretty screwed up aswell. And there was blood everywhere? I'm wondering if it was Sasuke who did it to himself. *sigh* Anyway, thanks for the update ^_^

Hina xXxx
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From llyoung on September 09, 2007
Thanks for the update. Your story continues to be very interesting.
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