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Reviews for Mate

By : theyoungestuchiha
  • From sedna1 on April 23, 2008
    sexy :D


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  • From animeaddict666 on February 15, 2008
    I really adored this. It was a beautiful examination of their relationship and their rivalry and their dynamics as lovers. You did an excellent job with description. VERY VIVID. I loved it!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 28, 2008
    (I review as I read.)
    Dang, interesting beginning. I like the metaphor. . . . I like the slow picture of the scene forming. Just little by little, the scene becomes more and more clear to the reader. . . . I’m a little confused, but the story’s interesting. . . . Very poetic. . . . Some of the colors used in description earlier were kind of confusing. I think you were going for one thing, and I was getting a different image or something. It’s coming more clear now, though. . . . Whoops, “With a grin dancing across his hips” You mean “lips.” . . . “The concept was mutual. “It was the truth.” Good point. . . . I’m a little confused when the POV wavers from one to the other. It’s kind of hard to tell who’s thinking what. But maybe that’s the point? . . . Oh, that’s a good one: “a title that the guy never allowed him to use.” . . . This is cool.
    This is one of the most poetic stories I’ve read. B E A U T I F U L.

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  • From ANON - kms on November 21, 2007
    This was good. A few parts were confiusing as to who was thinking. But the whole thing was Naruto, right? I really like the part with the headband, how Naruto held it and left for a few days to have it be like new, but it still had finger marks... I hope you write a lot more stories. I agree there aren't enough Narusasu stories; and definately not enough where they're both in character.
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  • From riddlestar on October 29, 2007
    really well written. im glad i read it. :)
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  • From AliceInuzukaAburame on September 22, 2007
    so. very. amazingly. hot.....wow.....i mean it too....that was just wow.....
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  • From ANON - HakuMomochi on December 17, 2006
    That was beautiful. Excellent characterization.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on November 09, 2006
    Men and our power games,in this case justified.Wonderful vocabulary.Solid grip on the dynamic of these two.Kudos.Stages Avenger?
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  • From ANON - wendyghost on September 17, 2006
    what can i say it was powerful,poetic! Damn good job!
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  • From ANON - Neko-Chan on September 15, 2006
    i love it!!! Fabulous job!!! Very poetic ^^
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  • From ANON - SeveredWings on September 13, 2006
    *sighs*...that was beautiful. Thank you for that.

    SW
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  • From ANON - DreamWyvern on September 13, 2006
    ...oh. Oh-me, oh-my, oh dear me. Thank you for gracing the fanfiction world with your talent, and your rawness. Seriously: thankyou-thankyou-thankyou.

    Freakin' sizzle right there, that delightful mire of insane and irrational passion contrasted against the simplicity (and abruptness) of your dialogue. "You cum at the mere sight of me" (forgive me for not remembering the actual wording, but the impression remains) within all that... what rhythm!

    Friggin' SUBLIME, my friend. Your words are weapons.

    Plz write 3965797 more fix by tomorrow, kthx. (lol)

    - DeeDubya
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  • From ANON - Kayo on September 12, 2006
    OMG that was wonderful! I havent been to this site in a while and finding a story like this so soon was quite a treat! I love the way you wrote the story, its different than most. There is sooo much emotion there--it flavors the whole thing. I love it so much, definately one of the best one-shots I have ever seen!!! YOU ARE AWESOME--this story was fantastic!!!!! Keep up the great work!

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  • From ANON - arichang on September 12, 2006
    shit. that. was. amazing. i don't even know where to start. it was beautifully written. made me smile at times, others it made me go, quite simply, "wow". i'm in awe at the quality and total subtlety of this piece--one can very nearly call it a piece of art. bravo. just... wow.
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  • From ANON - Flippy on September 11, 2006
    ooo me loves de lemon, la details, ooooo SEEEX *Drools* j/k i really liked it! Is there a sequal?
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