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By : KitsuneNoMari
  • From ANON - jasmin on December 18, 2006
    write more please..
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  • From ANON - Shadow2008 on December 07, 2006
    Wooooo! Cant wait till the next update WOOOO :D
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  • From perfect_blue_rogue on December 07, 2006
    yatta! i love this story! hehe a love triangle between kakashi, naruto, and itachi in all their smexiness..... -drools over the sex scenes flying thru her head- omg that's hot....-passes out from nosebleed-
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  • From ANON - kallipso on December 07, 2006
    damn keep it coming. I love what you have so far it is going to be entertianing to see KaKashi and Itachi fight over Naruto while running from Mother hen Iruka while attemping to keep naruto from being groped.
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  • From ANON - kallipso on December 07, 2006
    Kazama or Kazara Arashi was the Yondamines name. I have heard it translated as both. great chapter so far.
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  • From ANON - shouta fairy on December 07, 2006
    hey you know, if you want to change everybody's personality, whatever. stories with horrible characterizations are still a lot of fun to read. i have a personal mental block that calmly pretends kyuubi doesnt giggle like a school girl or make sarcastic "witty" banter in naruto's head also. your plot is even fun and interesting. itachi and kakashi fighting over naruto? in cannon it'd never work, but a little semi-AU author magic and it's cool. i mean, believable or not, that's one sexy mental image...::nosebleed:: whoops, i guess i should watch out for iruka now, huh? the one thing i gotta complain about though is the way you make Naruto talk. blergh.

    btw, people don't change; they mature. if a person could change, then what makes them who they are inside? c'mon. anyway, kids are idiots most of the time, teenagers are self-centered and moody, and (hopefully) they grow out of it and become awesome, self-actualized ppl (with really cool ninja skills). my point is, while your vocabulary may increase, your patterns of speech aren't going to drastically alter. monosyballic angsty boys don't just become chatterboxes, and loud-mouth rude brats may improve their manners, but they're not going to start using pretentious speech patterns and round-about grammar, example: "I demand that you stop it right this instant!" or "I would really like to think this over." and "I don't want to disturb your training any further" eh, they arent exact quotes, buts that's pretty much what u made him say. Naruto never talks so passively. he would say, "cut it out right now!" or "I'll think it over." or something about being sorry you interrupted/troubled/bothered them. Can you really imagine naruto's voice saying those things?? disturb you further...::mutters::

    and why do you have to disrespect naruto's hard-earned skills and work ethic by making up some ridiculous omnipower bloodline limit? can't naruto be good and kick everyone's ass without a bloodline limit?? he needs to be able to see the past, present and future, and have all the powers of neji and itachi combined? thats over-doing it, just a bit. jeex. it's much more impressive if he can beat up a byuakugaan(sp?) user with damn amazing stamina and guts, or if he can match a sharingan's analyzing speed with pure physical demon-chakra enhanced muscles. sound familiar? he did all that as a loser 12 year old against neji and sasuke. by 18, he really must be awesome. and all without magical eyeballs from his mom, marisu...or what did you name her?

    sorry if i went off on you a bit. i actually really like your story. it made me laugh, and it has a sexy pairing(threesome??). i just get really annoyed when ppl find it necessary to make naruto talk all high-handed and have a bloodline limit when i find his straightforward --datte bayou! speech cute and endearing and i think his cannon ninja abilities show more than enough potential to make him the next hokage. rasengan in one week?? ::fans self:: thats hawt. o well. keep on writing please!! and please don't get all offended if you don't like what i said. :/ maybe just keep it in mind?
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  • From ANON - Chaos Raider Tenshi on December 07, 2006
    Wicked, I love it, loved the whole 'mother hen' mode with Iruka, it would be so funny if that happened in the anime/manga. lol, anyway.... -pauses as Kakshi sneaks past looking for Naruto- okkkaaayyy weird as I was saying... -pauese again as Itachi walks past also looking for Naruto- again weird, anyway as I was saying please update as soon as you can, I'm hooked. -watches as Kakashi and Itachi spot Naruto as he comes out of the shower- oh dear -sweatdrop-
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  • From ANON - Jordan on December 07, 2006
    Great Fic and all but hasent this chapter already been posted and when will the next be out
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  • From ANON - lilithwolf on December 02, 2006
    -squeeeeee- i love it! this is so cute and i can;t wait to read more! please continue with this fanfic, for i will be your devoted slave for life if you do! -puppy eyes-
    lilithwolf@excite.com
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  • From ANON - kujo-san on November 12, 2006
    Sweet crap of the gods, this is awesome! Don't worry, the second chapter wasn't boring at all. I thought it was a lot of fun, and is exactly how I'd picture everyone responding to Naruto's return. At least, if their universe followed the rules of my perverted mind . . .


    Kujo
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  • From ANON - ranni on October 01, 2006
    This is like the perfect fic... I hope you will continue it!
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  • From LadyNarutoChan on September 13, 2006
    Can't wait to see the next chapter ! Hope you will update soon !!! =^-^=
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  • From ANON - MasterLenx on September 12, 2006
    Ano... Umm.... I LOVE IT! *squeals* ^jumping up and down^ Hooray! Hoorrrahhh! ^_^ *insert some cheerleading* Yep... I like it THAT much. I'm a HUGE fan of Agni, but the other one I haven't read. Hmmmm.... Yep... OH well! It's all cool. Could ya update soon love? It'd make me smile! *for you* Yep... Also.. The pairing... Is it Kakashi/Naruto?
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  • From ANON - fareys delight on September 11, 2006
    I'm watching this on fanfiction.net. I think I'll keep my eye on this here to. Good luck.
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  • From ANON - Ashleigh on September 11, 2006
    Please update!!!!!!!!! Brilliant plot line!!!!
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