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Reviews for Facade

By : KitsuneNoMari
  • From morbiDreamscape on August 18, 2007
    Interesting plot, I like how you built up the suspense between Kakashi and Naruto, even if it took several chapters... :P You have quite a few tense errors, but otherwise, technically-speaking, your story is fine. I like how you brought all the other characters into the story.

    Anyway, updates are good. :D
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  • From MasterofPie on July 19, 2007
    yay another chapter - just a lucky day i have had (this is the second story that has updated that i keep tabs on)
    Oh a six man group ... i hope sasuke isn't in it - that would be weird for some reason (two brother's working together - just odd), i hope Garaa is in it (i love him ^__^)
    Oh did Kakashi say naruto was just a kid, or meant nothing to him?? Now i wanna know
    And poor Shika got hurt
    Can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Ilene on July 18, 2007
    I've read 4 chaps so far, but now it's 2 in the morning and i'm tired, so i'll finish it 2morrow-i really like it so far though-
    especially the hominess of Kisame, Itachi and sasuke, plus ur story is just really funny! It's always nice 2 see a pairing with naruto other than sasuke (honestly I think that one's played on too much)
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  • From kati on July 17, 2007
    cool!! you updated!!! *dances* I love this story!!
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  • From Pyrokage on July 10, 2007
    I think that you will have Kakashi and Itachi on Naruto's team. Do I get the cookie?
    Please send me an email when you update this story.
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  • From ANON - leave_me_again on June 24, 2007
    i really like this story! I HOPE YOU WILL UPDATE SOON! I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU ACTUALLY ENDED THE CHAPTER LIKE THAT!!! I WANNA KNOW WHAT'LL HAPPEN NEXT!
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on May 18, 2007
    Noooooooo! Update soon, you can't leave us hanging like this!!!!
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  • From ANON - Pain aut Chocolat on May 18, 2007
    Saa...Itachi and Kakashi with Naruto being the captain! That's my guess :D
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  • From ANON - carpedraco on May 18, 2007
    You know I was a bit wary of this fic, but I took a chance and believe you me....I'm not disapointed...Good job and keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - jewel on May 17, 2007
    grab that muse and handcuff her to you!! I love this story and can't WAIT for the next chapter. I'm very curious about what happened to make Naruto leave and I'm drooling that the thought of the scenes between Itachi and Kakashi when they realize that they're both in love with Naruto.
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  • From ANON - kati on May 17, 2007
    hey, this story is so cool, but just to say, i dont know any japanese really and sometimes it gets a bit frustrating not being able to understand what is happenning fully...but apart from that, who is naruto gonna end up with??? xx
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  • From ANON - chineseartist on May 17, 2007
    kyaah! so much fun! i'm so glad you're working on this story now. i thought it was off to such a great start, and it was so wrong to just leave it hanging there, but it's not a problem anymore, now is it? good luck with the rest of the story!
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  • From anapana83 on May 17, 2007
    Wow i was wondering what happened to this story!!!!! It's been awhile huh. Well i for one am glad you updated. So finally we hear from Kakashi again. I can't wait till he and Naruto see each other...and what about Itachi!! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - anonymous reader on March 05, 2007
    hey i know i reviewed like when obviously you either discontinued or just forgot of this fic, however i really like this story so far!!!! and considering how this is AFF i was kinda hoping for atleast a lemon on the fourth ch but the appearance of itachi has well made me not hate this fic cuz of the absence of said lemon ^-^' so to put it bluntly UPDATE SOON OR ILL.....cry -_____-' plz?
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  • From ANON - harryhollow1 on December 19, 2006
    please e-mail me and I just can't wait to read what happens next!! So please update soon!!
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