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Reviews for Duty Calls

By : Legacy
  • From Firebullet19 on April 04, 2008
    This story is really good it kind of hit a soft stop and I like your a good writer and I can't wait to read more of your work.
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  • From ANON - spiritwolf on December 01, 2006
    Yeah your right there aren`t many Naru/tsu stories out there and even less of Naruo/Shizune I wouldn`t mind seeing more of them and thos yaoi stories they are way way to many of them oh well keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - anne on November 27, 2006
    well i like this chapter alot. i felt for naruto!! i was feeling sorry for him. good job!
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  • From promise2003 on November 20, 2006
    I love it and I'm crying. I can't type when I'm crying, so I'll just tell you that it was a wonderful ending and I am very pleased with how you wrote it. Great job.
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  • From ANON - blacky on September 20, 2006
    Great. Another fantastic TsuNaru in the works. I couldn't help but snicker when you wrote "several years" in the age difference.

    When he was twelve, she was already pushing 50. So.. add maybe a decade to his age.. several years is a vast understatement.

    Hah.
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  • From ANON - roxas on September 18, 2006
    so many words/sentences were cut off
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  • From ANON - animechick262003 on September 08, 2006
    OMFG!!!! You did it again. Beautiful...Beaitful writing. Omg I am speechless. And I mean no offense by saying this but it is rare to see a male have this much depth in his story. Man you are good. I will say the opening was a wee bit choppy but you quickly smoothed that out and worked it out!!! I hope to read more form you soon. Good JOB!
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  • From ANON - nonengel on September 08, 2006
    very nice, the emotions and mood of this came across well as did the descriptive portions
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