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Reviews for Fox Hunt!

By : Ashrey
  • From ANON - Vivi & Venny on April 09, 2007
    Vivi: O.O

    Venny: O.O

    Vivi:.....That

    Venny: was

    Vivi:SO

    Venny: HOTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!

    Vivi: Naru-chan is sexy,ne?!

    Venny: Very, very!

    Vivi: -drools- I want him!

    Venny: me-......wait. no Sasuke would kill us.......

    Vivi: Kay, then I want him to give to Sasu-kun!!

    Venny:Better.

    Vivi: I love it.

    Venny: Really truly we do! SO much!

    Vivi:.....SO MUCH.

    Venny:I love you.

    Vivi: -backs away- ok, can't agree with that, since I'm not a guy and not into like that....

    Venny: But I am. -gets down on one knee- will you marry me? If your already married, its alright! We'll runaway together!

    Vivi: >.> With what, stupid? Your broke.....

    Venny:Shut up. Ohhh, this is getting long!

    Vivi:Ok, getting to the point!WE LOVE IT!

    Venny: I LOVE YOU!

    Vivi: -.- PLZ UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE! ^-^

    Venny: I LOVE YOU! OH! SASUxNARU FOR EVER!!!!!!! more so mpreg!

    Vivi: Don't mind him, he's crazy. JA NE!!!!!!

    Ja ne from: Vivi & Venny (THE SASUXNARU LOVERS!!!giant hint right there)
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  • From sainaru on April 09, 2007
    oooh great story keep going i wanna know who wins hopefully gaara but kiba and naru-chan are so cute together to bad he isnt in the competition :( i just hope that fucked up uchiha doesnt win but its your story *SERIOUSLY THINK ABOUT IT LOL* but i really love ur story though
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  • From ANON - z on April 08, 2007
    i thought you already had a beta? if you're submitting this beta'd i'm afraid i'll have to advise you to get a new one. there are plenty of SIMPLE mistakes. obviously, your beta isnt very experienced. the plotlines pretty nice and the grammer mistakes are ruining it. find a new beta.
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  • From ANON - Damp on April 08, 2007
    Ooh! I can't wait to see what happens in this ^^. I can't believe Neji had the NERVE to do that to Naruto! he really was digging his own grave ^^ I here over there in Jerusulom if they say to a women "women" it's a form of repect...and the way Neji said the word "women" it didn't sound not at all respectful. I sure hope Naruto kicks everyones' *who was stupid enough to attend and not tell Naruto about the little get-together* asses ^^
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  • From ANON - lo on April 08, 2007
    Please have someone chech your grammer and sentence structure. At least proff read you work. This has potential but, the grammer is below a high school level. Keep on trying.
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  • From ANON - AoiKitsune on April 08, 2007
    YAY!! i love this plz update soon. best of luck!!
    AoiKitsune =^-^=
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  • From ANON - Forsaken Guardian on April 08, 2007
    Oh hell., they're in for it now!
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  • From ANON - Kryin on April 08, 2007
    This definately an interesting story and I look forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - NARUE on April 08, 2007
    I WANT SASUKE TO BE THE SEME!!!!!!!AND HIS MATE AS WELL.........PLSSSS PLSSSS PLSSS PLSSS PLSSSS...BE SASUKE.....I WANT GAARA AND SHIKAMARU ENDED UP EACH OTHER ^^>>>i wonder where itachi is?
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 08, 2007
    Hahah! Love this! Definately the amusement my day sorely needed!
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  • From ANON - chineseartist on April 08, 2007
    where's this going now!
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  • From ANON - mikoto on November 20, 2006
    lol!! love it! naru is soo funny!! hehe! please update soon!
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  • From Kaishiou on November 19, 2006
    lol. i must say this is rather interesting and amusing. so do update more and soon. ^^
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  • From ANON - Carla on November 17, 2006
    I like the theme of your story. I hope the next chapter tell us about Naruto and Gaara's connection. He certanly seems to have an advantage...I want a Naruto/Sasuke pairing! Please, please, please! I want to see also, everyone's techniques for seducing the fox! Please update as soon as you can!!! Mmmm...also, do you have a mailing list that I can suscribe to? I want to know when you next update! Please let me know.

    Carla
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  • From ANON - gabs on November 15, 2006
    THIS IS SUCH A FREAKING BRILIANT IDEA FOR A STORY YOU KOOKED ME FROM CHAPTER ONE. I'LL BE LOOKING FORWARD FOR THE UPDATES. OH POOR SASUKE HE LOST ONE POINT. PLIZ CLEAR UP HOWW IS IT THAT NONE WITH THE EXCEPTION OF GARA KNEW WHO THE UZUMAKI HEIR WAS IF THEY KNEW NARUTO FROM SCHOOOL?????
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