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By : Hestia
  • From ANON - Krickets on September 19, 2006
    I go with liquid inspiration...thats what i do whenever i update. i just get rip roaring drunk and then pound away on my keyboard, rum helps...it really really helps. And as for all that stuff you know when you start to write it will come to you and it willf eel right, truthfully i get away from asking my readers this stuff cause i just end up doing what iw ant any ways XD

    Anyways i ahve to tell you i LOVED the new chapters since i updated last and ic ant wait for more, and yea you update like serious pro...i mean it a PRO. MAkes me feel aweful in a way and yet im fine with that, ill eat it and love it and savor it and then maybe hurt myself with it later....mmm yummy.

    So anyways have fun writing and ill wait patiently for your next work.
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  • From ANON - fan of the story: The Traveling Pussy on September 19, 2006
    NO SHIKAXTEMARI PLEASE! truthfully i'm sick of the pairing... but SaixSakura NarutoxHinata would be fine, and InoChouji! i love that pairing. so... wait... if you do wanna use shikamaru, try pairing him with sakura and sai with temari... hehehehehe! omg! that would be funny
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  • From ANON - Allys on September 19, 2006
    Lady you got positively f#@#ing POETIC for a minute there, that stuff about Ibiki and the death God, Wow, do it again! do it again! And to answer your questions, I like the privacy of a house, I also like the idea of a house because they have cellars, and oh mann, the stuff that you find in cellars (Sigh!) As for a 3some, my initial choice would always be Gaara, because I love him... but the scaryness of Shino may have more potential, especially since he's more likely to let Ibiki order him around. Oh and Never discount Kiba - parties seem to be his thing, and with all eyes on him, bad slave may need to be punished. As for other couples, I LOVE Shikamaru and Temari everyone else: interchangeable. Anyway keep up the good work!!! you remind me of my favourite series - The Sleeping Beauty chronicles by Ann Rice.
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  • From ANON - SweetDisparity on September 19, 2006
    Excellent, as always. Nice explanation on the genjutsu, that sort of thing would be handy for Ibiki.

    1. Should Ibiki have a house or an apartment? Hard call- I vote an apartment

    2. If an apartment, should it be in an ANBU building or somewhere normal? Definately in the ANBU building, and all soundproofed and whatnot

    3. For a potential threesome--ANBU Shino or Gaara? Gaara

    4. Put in Ino-Chouji and Shikamaru-Temari subplot info or no? (For example, if they go to Gaara's party, should these be the couples to talk about)Subplots are always fun, so yes.

    5. When I write Gaara's party, who is Naruto with--Sakura or Hinata? (Sai can have whoever Naruto doesn't want since this is a Het. fiction.) OR should Naruto be with Sai?? He should be with Sai, het be damned.
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  • From ANON - Fuck'n A on September 19, 2006
    This is the best story EVER! I mean that. Not only is each chapter enjoyable but your updating skillz are...phenomenal. Every sexual encounter is new and creative and so far form boring generic sex. I'm so not about vanilla. At first I really wanted to know who the chick was but know I don't even care. And wow Ibiki, there is no doubt in my mind he knows how to do fucking right. Oh god yes.
    Thank you so much.
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  • From ANON - akasha on September 18, 2006
    i like jealous ibiki. i think that it would be a nice twist for gaara to show interest in mystery girl just so ibiki will get jealous again!! keep up the good work! ; )
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  • From ANON - nacht on September 18, 2006
    I think it was the title that caused me to not read your newest fic. However, that has obviously changed.
    I love this story. It has all the things that I secrectly lust over -scars, Ibiki, bad relationships with the emotional highs and lows. Overly dominate men. *drool* Ibiki..
    The teapot scene between Shino and Ibiki was perfect, read it three times. I really had to wonder about Ino and company showing up, though Ino's panties.. ewww. And who hasn't found someone or something to obsess over? Her trying to find someone other than Ibiki was just too funny.
    I am very curious to see how Ibiki reacts to her being around Gaara. Was the little display about mine is the only cock you touch etc for effect or was the man actually a bit concerned?
    I don't think I could be even remotely calm enough to do anything but stare at the man while he slept.
    Babble aside, I am truly sorry that I passed this story by the first time you uploaded it. I could talk about each chapter but I hope to keep this to a polite thank you for writing this.
    Maybe after I read it a third or fourth time Ill have something better to say than fangirl-ese.
    Nacht
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  • From promise2003 on September 17, 2006
    I just started reading and am on the end of chapter 2, I have to say that it really isn't my style. But damn you for sucking me in with the need to find out who the person is. "You’re a suicide looking for a weapon" was a great line and there are some really great parts within the story. I just don't like the domination aspect of it, but I'll keep reading it cause you sucked me in.
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  • From ANON - Tsukashi on September 17, 2006
    Possessive & jealous, and even a dash of vulnerability, yum yum! I envy your ability to pop out chapters so quickly!
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  • From ANON - crazy...slightly insane on September 17, 2006
    k...one sentence describes it all:

    THIS IS A FABOULOUS MASTER PIECE!!!

    Keep the updates coming...(^_^)...

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  • From ANON - sweetdisparity on September 16, 2006
    Wow, your stuff is just mindblowingly good. If you have a beta I am so jealous of them right now. Your BDSM stuff is so exciting to read. Every time I sign on AFF I look to see if your stuff has updated. I could go on forever, and while I would love to leave some form of constructive criticism just to make this useful, I honestly can't think of anything to critique. So I leave you with this, you rule.
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  • From ANON - akasha on September 16, 2006
    i really like how this is turning out! so, ibiki is a closet romantic, huh? go figure. it only seems appropriate since he is the embodiment of a total hard-ass! can't wait for another update!
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  • From ANON - Allys on September 16, 2006
    Oh my GOD.... you rock my world bitch, write as much as you want, you are fucking A++. Wow! Lady you just made fantasies I didn't know I had come true. 10 points I am so going to be reading this to the love of my life, he'll be extatic and who knows I might find myself tied to a kitchen cupboard. Hey, one can only hope, right? Anyway, on to more constructive criticism... You really know how to make a mood, and keep it. All the best S&M traits are present:
    the co-dependency, the absolute desire to please, you've got this, I can't think of anything I'd change and for me that's amazing, feel flattered.
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  • From ANON - Josie on September 15, 2006
    Great story! Great pairing!
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  • From ANON - Tsukashi on September 15, 2006
    I am still loving this story. A lot of stories loose me after a few chapters, but I love your Ibiki and can't wait to read more.
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