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By : Hestia
  • From ANON - meadowspeak on September 27, 2006
    Still this is an awesome story. I dont know how you mangae to come up with these things and then on top of that still have Ibiki appealing(not that i would go for him but still.)I cant wait to see what the couple comes up against next. It would probably be weird if htose too got married and had kids.gah! but it oculd happen i suppose.anything is possible with you and this story.
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  • From ANON - tsukashi on September 26, 2006
    OMG, I had several chapters to catch up on, and I have to say that this fic is still awesome! I loved Ibiki blushing! I cringed with embarassment when she walked in on Shino. I died laughing when Tsunade said get outta here, you 2 are an embarassment. I melted when they made love. The image of Ibiki in the "Party outfit" was hawt as hell! And I'm still wondering who she is. I had thought it had to be Tenten, since she has said pretty much e1 else's names (except Anko) but I just can't see this being Anko, she seems to be part of the Rookie 9 crew.
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  • From ANON - akasha on September 24, 2006
    wow, alot has happened since i got to read last. i was really hoping for a ibiki X gaara X ? sandwich. perhaps later? anyway, i really love this story. i hafve to honestly say that this is the first ibiki fic i've ever seen let alone read. i love it!
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  • From ANON - Katsuyo on September 23, 2006
    I am delighted to hear that you have decided to keep writing about Ibiki and his one woman harem for a little while longer.
    I have really enjoyed the antics of the master of interrogation and his submissive slut.
    You're a telented writer, Hestia... keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - krickets on September 23, 2006
    SQUEEEE!!! i didnt think you were going to update and you did!!!
    lol ha ha ha its awesome and i love you no im serious i do.

    Anyways you can feelf ree to send me as many emails as you like dont worry about it i love emailing and talking to people.

    I especially love my stalkers...not saying your a stalker but i have so many stalkers who are afraid to talk to me but want to, its very sad and i like to let them know that not only do i not mind but i LOVE it.

    Ok anyways im ranting

    Wonderful and screw working...ive never cared for it
    Krickitat
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  • From ANON - kenjikitten on September 22, 2006
    Wow! Great story and I agree with the one person who said that they didn't care who the girl is at this point. I'm eagerly anticipating more updates.
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  • From ANON - Allys on September 22, 2006
    Lady, you just keep on keeping on. But don't neglect your work too much, things like food and computers cost money and I'm enjoying this way too much.
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  • From ANON - Shocked on September 22, 2006
    Brilliant, inspired ending. I didn't want them to go to Gaara's party either. I couldn't see Ibiki sharing her with a subordinate (Shino). Not into BSDM AT ALL. But great story. Fits the extreme beings inhabiting the extreme edges of Naruto's world. Just so twisted and lovely that they could end up where they did given how they came to each other. Never in a million years would I think I would write this tyoe of comment about such a story. Bravo! and Encore!
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  • From ANON - Angst ( again) on September 21, 2006
    Hmm, another twisted chapter in the affair of Ibiki and Ms. nameless. You know I kind of like the fact that she has no name. It sort of suits her submissive role as slave. Her whole identity then becomes slave. God, I'ld worry abotu the psychiatric bills of those two.
    Hmm also, I'm rethinking my vote. You know as strange as it seems at first Shino may be the more plausible answer. it mgiht be dangerous to play those type of sexual games with heads of state. That and Gaara is attemptign to control his infliction of pain on others. He has grown aware of it. I think this type of sexual experience may excite him but also distrub him.
    Shino, I can see as being punished by Ibiki. Also, Ibiki may want to see Shino humiliated because at a certain point She deos consider f'ing Shino.
    You know what, doesn't matter if it's Gaara or Shino, as long as they don't end up with the vibrators up theirs. -.-;;;;
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  • From ANON - There s enouh Yaoi on September 21, 2006
    Look there is enough Yaoi for Naruto as is on this site. Fuck let, Naruto have some ass and not of the male sort for once. Dayum why he always got to be any bodies bitch?? Give him a GIRL!!!
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  • From ANON - Dominic Shade on September 20, 2006
    1. apartment
    2. normal
    3. fucking Shino yo! I can't see Gaara taking orders from Ibiki or sharing something
    4. no subplot, they suck and take away focus from the main story
    5. Naruto should so be with Sai...but like a beginning relationship ya know? Flirts and stuff

    So yeah, very hot. Good times and rock on babe.
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  • From ANON - Angst on September 20, 2006
    Hmm, this ussually isn't my sort of thing. However, I cannot say that I'm not enjoying it. Hmm, as for the questions...
    Note to all my wonderful reviewers--thanks!! I actually have to work for the next couple days, so I probably won't be able to add anything new until Thursday night or Friday. So feel free to post suggestions or email me to them. I don't know what I want to do with Ibiki's place--maybe I better rewatch that filler stuff about his brother--I can't remember if they were a big clan that got killed off or a small family. I like the idea of a big empty mansion--like most Sasuke stories--but then an underground apartment in the basement of an ANBU building could be pretty cool too. So I guess what would help to know is
    1. Should Ibiki have a house or an apartment? Houses have a sense of permenancy that I really don't associate with Shinobi's that often. It's something I don't really see Ibiki having. If he did I imagine it would be very bare. Building attachments to places and objects would perhaps be viewed as a weakness. Also, the sense of home can really result in a false sense of security, one that isn't afforded and active Shinobi.
    2. If an apartment, should it be in an ANBU building or somewhere normal? Anbu, again so as not to build too many attachments. That and somewhat irritating dealing with neighbours who are secretly ( or atleast they try to be) afraid of you.
    3. For a potential threesome--ANBU Shino or Gaara? Hmm, neither of them are really that appealing to me. However, you seem to have put in more hints toward Gaara. I can see Ibiki turnign it into a contest over who can cause her the most pleasure and pain. Ibiki would win, and perhaps in the act concrete his control over her 0.o;;;

    4. Put in Ino-Chouji and Shikamaru-Temari subplot info or no? Yes, please!
    5. When I write Gaara's party, who is Naruto with--Sakura or Hinata? (Sai can have whoever Naruto doesn't want since this is a Het. fiction.) OR should Naruto be with Sai?? Hmm, Maybe Naruto is there to see Gaara and get jealous with Gaara's flirting with the girl. As for who he would coem with. I imagine he would coem with his whole team. As for sexual tension you could have it all around. I remember reading that you were thinking of writing a Hinata Sai story. You might start some of the seeds of that here. HAve the stories be connected in a way. Not that you would have to read one to understand the other, but just to have some relationship. Therefore, you could have Sai flirt with Hinata a little bit. He can bi right, I mean he could drop his relationship with Naruto later on, realizing he was using sexuality as a way to express his love, but a love that was actually rooted in friendship not in deep desire.
    Gah, woman you have me thinking such twisted thoughts. You have perverted my once "almost' innocent mind! Thank you ^^
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  • From ANON - Daniel Strook on September 20, 2006
    Naruto with Sakura

    and Sakura ain't a slut
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  • From ANON - lq on September 20, 2006
    naruto should be with sakura and hinata
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 19, 2006
    APPARTMENT
    ANBU SOUNDPROOF
    BOTH (GAARA AND SHINO)
    YES FOR SUBPLOTS...AND SUBPLOT SEX
    HINA/KIBA? SAI/SAKURA/NARUTO

    SO MANY WAYS TO HAVE FUN I HAVE TOTALLY TRUST IT WILL ALL WORK
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