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Reviews for The Traveling Pussy

By : Hestia
  • From LadyNightshade on December 14, 2006
    I really enjoyed this, though it took me forever to figure out it was an original character you had. Honestly though, this story has turned Shino into an amazingly sexy image in my head... I think your Shino has done a number on me, and might possibly lead to some interesting pairings of my own in the future. :3
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 23, 2006
    ahhhh soooo short!!
    Was it supposed to be that short?

    ANYWAYS!!! thank you thank you thank you for updating! i am so glad you finally did i saw you working on your other stuff and all i could do is hope.

    So please let there be more! ending right there at the fisting was.....ah i like it
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  • From ANON - Allys on November 23, 2006
    Wow... That was kind of scary and sad and hot all at the same time. Thank you soooo much for the update, it's tripping me out that that hand thing was the same, yet Totally different from one story to the next. You really are super fucking talented. If you ever decide to break away from fan fiction and write an actual book I will totally support, buy it and recommend it to everyone I know (Well maybe not my mom, but everyone else :D !)
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  • From ANON - Angst on November 23, 2006
    Wow, I'm so glad to see you've updated I really enjoy this story. God, wiow the sexual makes me wince('m not the s&m type) and at the same time it is very exciting. very well done. I liek the emotions you put into the characters. It's not all about dripping body parts but there is feeling and a strange psychological need within it.
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  • From ANON - Janice on November 03, 2006
    Hey, I love this story. Could you possibly finish it. I'm so anxious to know what happens. Thanks!
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  • From ANON - Feylin on October 23, 2006
    i cant wait to see were you are going to go with this
    Please post the next chapter soon.
    I am begging with puppy eyes.
    I really love the idea of this fic.
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  • From ANON - krickets on October 13, 2006
    Ahhh more great work!

    sorry i havnt been reviewing everychapter like usual i have just been a little bit behind on my reiviewing...got a few bad replies and i was only trying to help...sheesh

    anyways sorry to hear school is slowing you down but you have to do what you have to do. Dont let our eager anticipation draw you off track XD

    Anyways i REALLY really look forward to the next installation and please please please i pray its soon (ahh the glory days of two sometimes three updates a day) im glad that she has decided to chase her desires instead of giving up.

    And BTW i thought the fight scene was amazing but i dont really understand why she was fired...maybe they thought she was too unstable? maybe some clarification although im sure you had already planned on elaboration.

    Anyways! BONZAI! you have done a wonderful job!

    Looking forward to more
    Happy writing
    Krickets/krickitat NSI
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  • From ANON - Feylin on October 12, 2006
    that last chapter could not have been more depressing
    totally angsty
    but i guess it works. You do have this going an interesting direction

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  • From ANON - Dominic Shade on October 09, 2006
    ...who's point of view are we in? Sakura's? Because you keep mentioning another Sakura.... And if it is Sakura, why would she be fired from being a shinobi because she took out an ANBU? Sure she'd get in trouble, but it seems like it would make her look more promising as a ninja. And is Sakura not being trained by Tsunade? Yeah...bit confused.
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  • From ANON - Angst on October 08, 2006
    She's really evolving. I'm starting to feel empathy for her. Strange isn't it. Before, I was enjoyign her brashly honest commentary and the bizzaire relationship between her and Ibiki. These last few chapters have really started fleshing her out and giveing her more detail and depth.
    I'm still not sure of what to think of her as a mother though. I haven't really seen her interact with any of these kids.
    Still, I would also like to see her get reacquainted with Ibiki. I want ot see what he's been doign through all of this.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 04, 2006
    very nice story, i like how you write, and i suck at writing reviews. but is this the last chapter, i hope not.
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  • From ANON - SweetDisparity on October 02, 2006
    Yay! You updated! She is so right, an angry Shino is extremely hot. Nice twist, I definately wasn't expecting it.
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  • From ANON - CChatsworth on October 01, 2006
    I love this story! What happened to the regular updates? Please don't say you've given up on it!
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  • From ANON - krickets on September 29, 2006
    OH! i just cant wait to see what happens!
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  • From ANON - Angst on September 27, 2006
    Hehe, she jsut seems to have an incredible case of bad luck. Although, the only bad part about it to me would have been the being caught. Of course, she just broke master's rules. This isn't going to end up into a foursome is it? I don't tihnk I've ever read one of those. I knid of like the fact that they haven't slept with others and have been faithful to each other so far. Ohqwell, it's your story, do whatever you wish to do to it.
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