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Reviews for Stolen Innocence

By : Kennaki
  • From LunakaWren on May 25, 2008
    Write more damn you!

    Now. *Pokes with stick* I'm not stopping 'til I get another chapter!
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  • From animekid on July 26, 2007
    hey I read this before; oi continue please!
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  • From ANON - dark_bloody_angel on January 03, 2007
    OMG!! Gai's a prevert!! I hope you update soon. (I want some more GaaLee action ^_^)
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  • From ANON - Nail Kitty on December 08, 2006
    Write more! NOW!
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  • From ANON - Akatsuki on November 27, 2006
    yo...update already...I'm dying to read more...x3
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  • From ANON - Nail Kitty on October 27, 2006
    Meep. O_O

    love. love love love. I was literally grinning when Gai showed up. LOOOVE it.

    PLEASE write more soon, I need it. NEED! (I'm an intense Lee fangirl, and this is probably the only GOOD yaoi story about him)

    I have a suggestion too: It would be AWESOME if Lee taught Gaara to masturbate, since he never has. Eeeee! Can't wait for more. Love!
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  • From ANON - Luthien Wildglen on October 09, 2006
    Ok, so I admit that I'm still a bit put off by the fact that Gaara raped Lee. However because next to Naruto/Sasuke, Lee/Gaara is my favorite pairing, I decided to give this fic another chance. I still really wish that someone had been impersonating Gaara and developed the relationship from there, but I suppose this isn’t bad. I still think that the love between the two is a little forced, but then again, developing love out of rape isn’t exactly easy. I thoroughly agree with Shinigami24 and would not like to see any type of Lee/Gai situation. Student/teacher parings are just not cool. Yes I realize that I am on ADULTfanfiction.net but that would truly ruin the fic. Anyway though, I’ll read the next chapter if you write. Sound like a good deal to you?


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  • From animekid on October 09, 2006
    whoa this is coming along nicely; I see you have improved your storywork over the chapters! That's wonderful!

    Ah this is interesting; so many hints of everything XD really wouldn't mind seeing what gaara is going to do...at first I thought it was gaara watching lee O_o;;;; heh

    Kakashi is inutative (sp? >_
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  • From ANON - sunsparked on October 08, 2006
    very good. i love it so far! not many lee/gaara stories here. keep up the good work

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  • From ANON - Koea on October 08, 2006
    Amazing writing!!! I always look forward to reading the next chapter of this fic! I hope to see more chapters coming soon! Update ASAP!!!! =^^=
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  • From ANON - mel on October 07, 2006
    Lee likes Guy kinda .Garra likes Lee . Lee likes Garra . Are they going to fight over Lee or will they all find a happy middle ground? Threesome????????
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  • From ANON - Shinigami24 on October 06, 2006
    *desperately tries to erase the last few paragraphs from mind* Argh! I really didn't need that in my mind! I have no problem with GaaraLee. But Gai-that's way too much! Since last I checked teacher-student relationship is unethical! And Lee looks like he could be Gai's son! Anyway-can you pls update and put GaaraLee lemon in, it? *grins* So I'm your favorite reader, thanks! Naruto and Sasuke are rivals, then how come they left together, and Sasuke nearly died saving Naruto's life during the mission to wave. Naruto seems to want to impress Sasuke. Everyone say Sasuke is a jerk. But he acts more human in the manga! I have yet to read the part about Itachi, because he has yet to show up in the manga...If Sasuke is so obessed with revenge, then how come he jumped in front of Naruto when they were fighting Haku? And when Naruto thought Sasuke was dead, he lost conrtol, and Kyubi's chakra overtook him...The same thing happened with Iruka. We know Iruka is like a father/brother to Naruto. So I think Sasuke is more than a rival to Naruto, but he has yet to cough up his feelings about Sasuke...
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  • From Kennaki on October 05, 2006
    You're one of my favorite fans, Shinigami24. x) I had absolutely NO idea that Gaara was afraid of Gai-sensei! That might be of aid in one of my future chapters... *cackle*
    And to be honest, the serial rapist isn't the main plot in this story. I guess I used it as a way to get the story rolling smoothly and get some type of uh...suspense?
    Ok ok thats all a lie... I'm actually just making up the story as I go along! xD I'm one heck of a disorganized writer.
    And about the timeline...err...well, I've only watched up to ep. 160, and I've stopped watching because I pretty much stopped watching cartoon series. But even so, my memory of the whole naruto series is becoming more and more of a fuzz because I watched the entire 160 episodes in about a month or two. I guess the Leaf/Sand village have formed an alliance already, and Sasuke is beck. (If he DOES come back, that is.) Oo

    @Kitsune - hai hai mochiron, dekiru yo! ^-^ Trust me I don't plan on abandoning this story anytime soon. >:3

    I've been working on chapter 5 and man is it turning out great! Might be my best chapter yet. :D Expect it tonight or tomorrow~
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  • From ANON - protogirl on October 04, 2006
    protogirl here...oh man I thought it was going to be Gai instead of lee XD but this is still interesting. I wonder what kakashi is going to do....something tells me that gaara and the sensei are going to be fighting or....maybe kakashi's team is with him? O-o;

    the timeline here is weird....I think it's after sasuke left, (my guess,) and when gaara is kazekage....but it could be before gaara saves suna..or something...it's best for me not to think about it and just read the smut -__;;;;

    I think too much......it's a habit

    oh and I guessing that kankarou might show up soon as well....

    well keep it up! and if you need help just email me or something....
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  • From ANON - Shinigami24 on October 03, 2006
    *blinks into confusion* I'm confused does Temari's reaction means she's a homophove if so how disappointing... PLS have Gai be open-minded! But, Lee better not tell him what Gaara did, or Gai might try to kill Gaara...And if i recall manga volume 11 right, Gaara's scared of Gai! That or Shukaku is. i'm not certain which...*points to chapter 97* See! Read the manga if you don't believe me! Most of the Naruto info I have comes from either the Naruto manga or Naruto wikipedia. I'm still trying to figure out who the Leaf rapist is...At the moment, I need more clues please! I do know who the rapist cannot be! All the females are off my suspect list, unless you decided to add this twist...I strongly doubt a regular ninja from another village would go to the trouble of sneaking into Leaf to rape women, unless it was a missing nin...The rookie 9 boys are defintely off same applies to Neji. We know it's defitnely NOT Lee! PLS have another attack occur when Gaara is with Lee or doing his kazekage duties! That way we will know that no way is he the mystery rapist! Since Gaara will have an abibi! By the way, is Sasuke with Orochimaru or not? Pls clear this up in the next chapter...
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