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Reviews for Stolen Innocence

By : Kennaki
  • From ANON - Anon on September 26, 2006
    Eh... I don't Lee would love somebody after being roughed up and sexually forced... well not that fast anyway. ^_^; I can see Gaara confusing it as love since there's so many meanings to love and you mentioned he watched his brother (plus I don't think Kakurou's the gentle type).

    Oh well... *waits for the next chapter*
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  • From ANON - Niko-chan on September 21, 2006
    I have to admit after getting critisisms early on I was a little put off and decided that I wouldn't write anymore. (I can take art critisism but with writing...well, for one thing I'm NOT a writer, and don't plan to be one. So it feels more like a personal attack on me. ^-^;)
    But seeing that so many people like this and want me to continue- heck theres no way I can just leave this as a cliffhanger.
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  • From ANON - Ehhh on September 16, 2006
    You had better write aother chapter! Or... or.... or I'll send Gaara after you! O.o.... Nevermind, but pleaase write another chapter, I loved the story so far!
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  • From ANON - protogirl on September 13, 2006
    curious on how this will turn out Dominating!Gaara is.....sexy and a turn on O_O;;; but....I hate N/C! ARg...oh well...

    still this will either be....Dominating!Gaara goodness and not really romance, (more or less lee getting banged a lot by formentioned,) or someone else was doing this...since well gaara usually doesn't do that...unless it's shukaku going nuts again goodness -_-;;;

    Still keep on going because I really want to know what happens next! (arg naruto and them do not even know what is going on! But kakashi, Gai, and tsunade might know *nod nod*)
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  • From ANON - gypsie_curse on September 12, 2006
    i am *underline that* reading!, please second chap ^^
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  • From ANON - SuperCatnip on September 10, 2006
    Hey! Wonderful story! Full of delicious descriptions..

    I recently fell in love with Rock Lee when I started watching Naruto, so today I searched for lemons of him.. this is the first one I read and I looove it~!! Amazing, original, neat concepts.. I would love it if you came out with more chapters and turned this into a romance, so please email me if you do so! (I don't have an AFFnet account..)

    Much love.
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  • From ANON - Akatsuki on September 10, 2006
    omfg this could be the seed of an awsome plot. Please make a chap 2. PLEASE!!! I am reading this, isn't that enough? *flails*
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  • From ANON - silvina on September 06, 2006
    omg!niko chan plz don't stop i lovrd your writing style!i hope lee falls in love with gaara because i think they make cute couple.plz keep it up

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  • From ANON - Anon on September 05, 2006
    i like your story alot,i hope you'll make 2nd part of it. ^^ and excuse for my bad english ^^
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  • From BrucesGirl on September 05, 2006
    I have yet to write Gaara into any of my stories for two reasons.
    1) I couldn't keep him in character if I tried. Gaara is notoriously hard to write, and there's only two authors that I can think of on here that can write him and Lee together as I see them.
    2) Gaara is not fun to write. He's harsh, uncaring, and he doesn't like anyone. Except for maybe Kankurou.

    I love the Gaara/Lee pairing, but for me, the story was off a bit. Lee is a bit OOC in the story which irked me a little just because I'm so used to him being a certain way, and then, all of the sudden, he does a 180 and is completely different. Lee doesn't lay down for anyone, and he would have rather died than give anyone an inch. The true Lee would have died defending himself.

    Also, Gaara finds emotion, human touch, and affection unneeded. If you truely want the psychological reason for rape, the explanation is that rape is a power trip and that's all. Obviously, Gaara has enough power with the bloodlust of Shukaku, so what would drive him to do something so extreme?

    Just a few thoughts for you. On the other hand, your grammar is excellent, and your format is restful to the eye. I've truly enjoyed reading your work if just for the fact that your KNOW your English. I look forward for new works from you. ^_^

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  • From ANON - Shinigami24 on September 05, 2006
    Okay, I can live with your reasons. I know Gaara had a troubled past. But i really cannot see him being a serial rapist. I've read mystery stories before, usually criminals never change their methods. Gaara might have attacked Lee, but i highly doubt that Gaara is the serial rapist. Most likely Gaara heard of the rapist, and decided to copy his methods abeit differently...PLS have Lee show Gaara how to show love and his needs the right way!
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  • From ANON - Niko-chan on September 04, 2006
    Hnn, I thought the reasoning behind Gaara's behavior would be obvious to everyone so I didn't really explain it.
    Well, Gaara grew up scared and alone. He does not know how to love, nor show affection.
    Everyone has sexual needs and desires, and when Gaara feels this he just well...doesn't know what to do. In real life, rapist are often those who were abused as children, and feel pleasure in making others feel pain. With that logic and reasoning, Gaara becoming a rapist shouldn't be a surprise. ok, I didn't want to do this but looks like I'm gonna have to give out some spoilers on my story. Gaara is "in love" with Lee. Later on in the story Lee is going to confront Gaara, in order to see if he is the mysterious serial rapist, and question why he raped him. Trust me, I can turn this into somewhat of a romance. Long story short, Lee is going to teach Gaara affection and they'll live hapilly ever after.
    @Shinigami - It's only been two days. And this is just the first chapter. Of course the others had noticed a difference in Lee(like Sakura for example) but my main focus in this story will be the relationship between Lee and Gaara. I don't necessarily plan on showing the emotions of all of the other shinobi as well. And about your "bad guy" comment, thats your opinion. I happen to be a Gaara fan, anyway. Of course I don't sympathize with rapists in real life, but knowing Gaara's story, his past, his pain, and the fact that he is fictional, should envoke feelings of pity for him, not just him being labeled "evil".
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  • From ANON - Starscream'sGirl on September 04, 2006
    This story really caught me off gaurd here. I really hope it is a ninja impersonating Gaara using a transformation jutsu. If it isn't, I wonder what would happen to the alliance between the Sand Village and the Leaf Village. Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - mel on September 04, 2006
    As you can see, Yes, I did read your story. I would like you to continue, it will be interesting to see the psychology behind Gaara's attacks, and why he chose Lee. What will the effects both long term and short term on Lee. Please continue, I'd like to see what you come up with next.
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  • From ANON - Luthien Wildglen on September 04, 2006
    Wow, for someone who likes Rock Lee you sure were mean to him. To be honest, Lee/Gaara is one of my favorite pairings, but I don't know if you could develop this into a romance without it seeming forced and unnatural. If it were to turn into a romance, I think I would almost prefer that someone was impersonating Gaara, and it hadn't really been Gaara that had forced himself onto Lee. I know it’s in Gaara's personality to be dominating, but he also strikes me as the type to have honor. I will definitely read chapter two, but the idea of Gaara being a rapist just isn't appealing to me. I'm curious to see where you will take this fic.


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