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Reviews for Stolen Innocence

By : Kennaki
  • From Hasu on October 03, 2006
    *moans* Aishiteru.....you just had to stop writing ^__^
    I really really *whimpers* like this....a lot.
    Continue onegai.
    Though I am a little afraid of what Temari is gonna do.
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  • From promise2003 on October 03, 2006
    The last two chapters were really cute. I liked them a lot and I hope you update again soon :)
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  • From ANON - Koea on October 03, 2006
    I was so excited to see you updated!!! I loved the new chapter!!!!! Gaara doesn’t seem like such a jerk to Lee now. Great chapter this is defiantly one of my favorite GaaLee fics. Keep up the wonderful work!!! =^.^=
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  • From ANON - Shinigami24 on October 01, 2006
    *evil grin* Lee, if you are going to show Gaara how to love the right way, you need the book-Kama Sutra. Ask your friends where you can get a copy. Or try asking Kakashi, since he seem to know all about that stuff...
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  • From ANON - Shinigami24 on September 29, 2006
    *winces* Hoo boy, I just realized something-Tsunade and Sakura BOTH fit the victim profile. Look they are both strong and capable of fending off any creep! Tsunade has her ANBU gaurds in case something goes wrong. But someone should warn Sakura to be on the lookout and extra careful! As for Naruto's joke in the 1st chapter, well someone really should have taught him some tact, and some things are NOT jokeworthy! Preferably when he was younger...I know Gaara's not the only strong ninja. The Jonins and possibly some chunins are capable of taking the women by surprise...Orochimaru possibly, but I doubt it's him, since i heard he's a gay pedophile...
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  • From Kennaki on September 28, 2006
    Weird! Nearly my entire comment was cut out! Grr...oh well I guess I'll have to rewrite this.

    Shinigami24: I plan to update sometime within the next few days. If possible I'll work on it today, but at the moment I don't have the time. In the upcoming chapter I plan to include more interaction with Kakashi and the other shinobi. And I will also put in more information regarding the serial rapist(I don't want to ruin the story for anyone, even though you already know in your mind whats going on).

    This seems to be the kind of story that you have to read the entire thing before you truly understand it. Personally movies like this (such as the Butterfly Effect) annoy me. I really didn't do it intentionally, but as long as readers don't lose interest in the early chapters then I'll be happy. :3
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  • From Kennaki on September 28, 2006
    Thanks for the reviews guys! I really appreciate each and every one.
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  • From ANON - protogirl on September 28, 2006
    read this part as well; interesting concept and how things are turing out! (*realizes that her say of words are....crappy* -___-;;;;)

    but yeah, it makes sense that gaara really wouldn't understand the concept of love ^_^ and I like how lee is handling it.

    cannot wait to see more; also like how the title reflects the chapter as well as the lemons XD

    wouldn't mind seeing like an aftermath story/chapter or how things fall into place
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  • From ANON - Shinigami24 on September 28, 2006
    *muses* Interesting. So when will you be updating next? I'm on this site because for some reason I cannot access Fanfiction.net at the moment, much to my everlasting annoyance. Yes, I like both sites. Fanfiction.net has really good crossover fanfics, but for the some reason the authors ALMOST never finish them! And there are some other kinds. My favorite fandoms at the moment are Naruto, Ranma 1/2 and Shaman King...Anyway, Hangover is a strange title for this chapter, but i see your point. So who is the rapist? I find it hard to believe Gaara would rape those women-well I explained my reasons. And I have other one-the sand-Leaf alliance treaty would fall apart. And i doubt he would risk that.
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  • From ANON - protogirl on September 28, 2006
    god I am lazy....to sign in..but it's me protogirl from AFF.net ^_^

    anyway, the second part was a bit confusing...did Gaara really do it? I was expecting something like, "Yeah I did it because I need love and affection, and I dunno how to express it!" or something something

    this so could have been a gailee XD

    but still the lemon was nice and I really want to see more

    ....which is why I am reading chapter 3! XD
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  • From ANON - Koea on September 28, 2006
    Fantastic job! I love it so far! You’re a very good writer, please update as soon as humanly possible!
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  • From promise2003 on September 26, 2006
    I think that it is a great start, and I did enjoy the story a lot. I think the one critique that I would have is that there wasn't enough time in my mind for Lee to grow to love Gaara...I think it was too fast and not angsty enough. As much as angst can be a hinderance, it can also be effective in a story like this.
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  • From ANON - Niko-chan on September 26, 2006
    Ooo you guys are giving me really good ideas.
    dmismine: I can work that really nicely into my story! And it can help work around with the whole serial rapist thing, too.

    I can't reveal anything big here xD But I'll just say that the outcome in this story will probably be a pleasing one and won't dissapoint most of you. (Hopefully) At the moment I'm writing chapter 3 but I'm at a loss for words so it might be a day or two before its up. But you never know~
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  • From ANON - dmismine on September 26, 2006
    well i didn't see it coming but i certinly dont mind it

    can i ask you to write a last chapter where the others find out whats going on?

    i love stories like that^-^

    did he rape those women???

    great job!!!
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  • From ANON - Shinigami24 on September 26, 2006
    *gawks* No I didn't see that one coming! *puzzled look* But-Gaara didn't answer Lee's question! Still, last I checked the rapist was targeting women, and blindfolding them. And if I recall my mystery novels right-a criminal NEVER changes his/her methods! So I find it hard to believe that Gaara is the rapist...Look-he went after Lee and let him see Gaara! And Lee is a guy! Gaara's NOT the only strong ninja! There are others! For all I know there could be a missing nin hiding out, in Leaf, but isn't it kinda risky to go around raping women, since the attacks seems to have drawn notice!
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