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Reviews for Make Me Forget

By : Hestia
  • From ANON - akasha on September 04, 2006
    awesome!! i totally love naruto's little quip at the end about taking her face-down. it just seems like something that he would say. i love it! will there be any follow-up on this story? i don't read too much naru/saku stuff, but i like this one.
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  • From ANON - Nowhere Man on September 04, 2006
    lol! That was probably the most graphic, Naru/Saku story I've ever read. Wasn't bad, just very straight to the point. Hope to see more NaruSaku from you. You certainly have a different way of painting it. *^^*
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  • From ANON - Tsukashi on September 04, 2006
    Honestly, I don't know if I'm just a little odd in finding the word pussy vulgar, especially when reading a lemon, but I do. If it were only once or twice it would be ok, but that word popped up about a dozen times. A few alternate suggestions (varying for which part you speak of): nether region, cavern, sheath, sex, bundle of nerves, button, slit, folds.

    Overall, this was an AWESOME read. Hottest lemon that I have read in a long time. There was the unresolved feelings between the two of them, so I am hoping for a continuance. Naruto is obviously feeling/thinking the same way that Sakura is with all the same insecurities. You do a great job of showing that too, btw. I don't even know if your grammar, etc was good or not, ^_- (too caught up in the lemon)

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  • From ANON - narusaku_69 on September 04, 2006
    kick ass! update soon!
    it is an awesome story!
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