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Reviews for Make Me Forget

By : Hestia
  • From ANON - TheEndOfAllThingsGoodAndBad on February 13, 2007
    Is this complete now?
    30 out of 30. You rule the school of hot.
    Gangbangupjob mate
    And very funny too, poor Hyuuga girl though. I like both NaruSaku and NaruHina, so it always puts a frown on my face when that happens..

    And that gives me an idea.. Someone needs to do a NaruSakuHina!!!!
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  • From murdoc on January 21, 2007
    This fic was awesome. I liked how you make Sakura so aggressive. I also liked that you didn't make Sakura a slut that has slept around a lot of times (I don't like those kinds of fics) I liked the ones that Naruto takes her virginity.

    I really hope you make a sequel or at least make another NaruSaku fic.
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  • From ANON - Storm on November 29, 2006
    This would be yet another reader who hates the word pussy. It isn't romantic AT ALL. It's crude, blunt, and not at all in sync with the otherwise romantic air of your story. Cunt is even worse.

    Center would work as an alternative. Find a thesurus and search alternate terms that are less crude. Also, variation is a good thing. You used the same word over and over, which just gets old.

    Really, aside from that, the story itself was good. You're a good writer. Just that word made me cringe, every time.
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  • From nekochannya on November 22, 2006
    I am trying hard not to cry from laughing so much as I write. This was hot and funny! I loved it! Very, very much! I didnt see anything wrong with your vocabulary. Pussy and cunt are two words that feel right when you are in the mood for them. The people not seeing this, really should try to get in the mood themselves. There is such a thing as repressed you know. I think the use of those words was correct given her highly aroused state and the savage hunger you described she had. So, it was all good!
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  • From Lyndsay on November 13, 2006
    That.... was amazing *_____* I think it's the second time I've read it, but I think it was very well written, and the plot... well.... we don't really need plot, but what plot there was, was well placed :D!

    Great Job, totally adored it~! :D

    ~Lyn
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  • From ANON - dasdeke on October 08, 2006
    Nice! One of the few lemons I liked! Very um...hot and heavy...! Very very nice and it showed Sakura has an inner freak! Nice entering of the Sai comments! Naruto might feel a bit self conscious after that! Sakura/Naruto always my favorite pairing! I thought Sakura might be a bit more aggressive, but hey works for me!
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  • From on September 26, 2006
    is that really the ending? (cries) ahh well it was nice! ^_^ i will now watch you! kuu kuu kuu! im retarded i know..
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  • From ANON - mel on September 24, 2006
    Great ending! I really enjoyed this story. Good job.
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  • From ANON - Kyuubi Fanatic on September 18, 2006
    oh god...that was the best...I WORSHIP YOU!!!!!!!!
    (seriously, there aren't a lot of good narusaku fics around despite how much people complain about there being too many, and you did great, AWESOME!!) This is undoubtatly the best Naruto/Sakura fic i have ever read, and one of the best fics period. Keep it up Hestia!!!
    (I'm biulding a shrine for you now, my beloved Hestia ^_^ )
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  • From ANON - dino on September 17, 2006
    ah man this was a GREAT fic i was laughing and its HOT too! write more fics with Naruto clones!!!
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  • From ANON - Because I Can on September 09, 2006
    lol that story was great. I can't believe he almost killed her with sex. well anyways i lafed.
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  • From ANON - solar phoenix on September 08, 2006
    A good ending. Very much so.
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  • From ANON - narusaku_69 on September 08, 2006
    nice story keep up the work on the great narusaku stories
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  • From ANON - Josh on September 08, 2006
    I hope you don't stop it here. It is a good story make it more. I want to see it become something more than a short story. Or you could make a Nruto, Hinata pairing for another story....
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  • From yf17 on September 08, 2006
    Wow, amazingly written in 3 days! It had all the workings of a superb PWP. More could be desired from the ending though. Perhaps taking a bit more time with plot development might be desirable?

    BTW, if you are ever interested in collaborations, let me know via email. ^^
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