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Reviews for The Best Man: Part I of the Concurrence Arc

By : Erisabesu
  • From ANON - LemonsLuver on September 07, 2006
    I have no other words to discribe this fic
    wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow
    well ok more than one...HOTT man can you say UBER HOTTNSS...This has got to be like OmG...(to me)
    This is a very thought out......I JUST LOVE IT....
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  • From ANON - clowangel on September 07, 2006
    Hoootttnesss!!! Loved it! :) Kinda suspected it was a game halfway through but XD it still managed to surprise me at the end. :P Loved it. Hope you write Neji and Hinata's wedding too. :) I'd love to see their game played again. ^^
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  • From ANON - meeksins on September 05, 2006
    nicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenice~ ^-~
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  • From ANON - kaesaku on September 05, 2006
    whoa~
    that was hot!
    some kinky game those two were playing..
    heehee.. ;p
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  • From ANON - comxgrrl on September 04, 2006
    I usualy don't review a lot, only when I read a story that is really good. Your story is very well writen and very cute. I had an inkiling about the end, and was glad I was rigth. Your story is coherent and well writen. It flows very well and the dialouge is not akward at all. Lovely short. Thanks.
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  • From ladygizarme on September 03, 2006
    haha!! i had a feeling they were each other's boyfriend when they first started talking at the reception, but you still kept me second guessing myself right up to the apartment lol!! very beautifully done, i loved their little roleplay game and the flirting that came with it ^__^ and top it all off with that hot hot sex at the end *drools as she passes out from nosebleed* i also love the idea that they'd only cheat on each other with each other :p *happy sigh* great story
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  • From ANON - cfox on September 03, 2006
    Oh do I need a cold shower now. I like how you played out this story . It was fun and cute. I will look forward to more hopefuly as there is still Neji's wedding to attend.
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  • From Trollmia on September 03, 2006
    Yay!! You posted it here too!! Wonderful... Just wonderful... I love this story. Can't tell you that enough...!!
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  • From ANON - DreamWyvern on September 02, 2006
    Ahahah that was so nicely done! You should polish and re-polish this one (not that I found an actual error!) until it screams perfection, and then post it on every damn yaoi site there is. (That's what I'd do!) It's so very original -- it had me going for a while. I'm tellin' you, I think this one is a classic. It'll stick with me for a goooood long time. ^^

    Kudos for creativity, and wow for your talent! ...okay so it was hot too, shhh.

    - DeeDubya
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  • From ANON - Ran-chan on September 02, 2006
    WOW!!! That was great! You just made my day!
    For me there is nothing better then some good NaruxSasu smex ^__^
    I will definitely keep it as a favourite.

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  • From DemonBlaze on September 02, 2006
    That was a fucking delicious story! I loved it so much. The idea of Naruto being an exhibitionist was great. I could totally see him liking that.
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  • From ANON - burr on September 02, 2006
    aww it was great! :) there's nothing better than a good spicy narusasu *nod*. is this a one shot? hopefully not... :)
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