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By : emeraldfire84
  • From ANON - Decorinne on September 13, 2006
    WOW. You are such a good writer! I hope you plan on continuing this series! E-mail me when you update if you can.
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  • From ANON - Dark Phoenix on September 13, 2006
    Woah. That was incredibly hawt. And not completely WIP. Woah. Yes. Update. Please.
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  • From ANON - Kinomoto Neko on September 11, 2006
    This story is soooo good! I can't wait for the next chapter! But if you misspell Itachi or Shikamaru again I may have to hurt you! It's Shik A maru! Ita C hi! *eye twitches and gets ready to command her plot bunnies for attack*

    Neko
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  • From ANON - Tsukashi on September 11, 2006
    You are switching between spelling Itachi's name as Itachi and Itashi. I am sure it is just a typo, but it is in there a LOT the wrong way. I am glad that she wasn't dominated immediately.
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  • From promise2003 on September 11, 2006
    This is a really well written story. I like it a lot so far. I hope Sasuke beats the holy living hell out of Itachi. I don't like him having Sakura, the stupid bastard.
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  • From ANON - MissNin on September 10, 2006
    Awesome story! Love it. ^^ This is by far one of the best Itachi/Sakura fics I have ever read, and with a plot too :P Update soon and continue the great work!
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  • From ANON - Kinomoto Neko on September 06, 2006
    Oi! We want more! This story is awsome! Update soon please?

    Neko
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  • From ANON - belle on September 06, 2006
    i absolutely love it. especially the insinuation of sasuke's attraction. just the entire idea, magnificent. i really enjoy your writing style and the fact that the characters were kept 'in-character'. Most stories lack that. Please continue. Were you planning on having Sakura completely fall for Itachi and vice versa or were you planning on perhaps giving it a twist and in the end returning to sasuke after itachi's death as he apparently cares. am i crazy? yeep. ok. well, just wanted to say i really enjoyed this story! and you're right! this one actually has a plot!
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  • From ANON - jennjennr on September 05, 2006
    Ooh, I loved this chapter, the smut and really just the whole idea was great. The whole thing about her not really being in total control of her compasities was so great, it added so much to the whole mood of this chapter, and really added to Itachi's personality. I really can't wait to see what happens next, and I can't wait to see Sasuke's and Naruto's reaction to her dissaperance. Thanks so much for updating, and please do so again soon.
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  • From ANON - Nasis on September 04, 2006
    Awesome, I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - teamplayer on September 04, 2006
    wow, I have to see whats gonna happen next.
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  • From ANON - Tsukashi on September 04, 2006
    I don't intend to get into a lengthy argument over how to spell Japanese words in English. Since Japanese is written in an alphabet that is NOT roman lettering, there is debate over how to spell what. There is no right or wrong way to spell Japanese words, only what is commonly accepted. I quote this from Living Language's Conversational Japanese. I have always seen and always spelled the word Chakra. HOWEVER, whatever way YOU choose to spell the word, is UP TO YOU.
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  • From ANON - Tsukashi on September 04, 2006
    First off, I see you as a mature person. I am speaking to you as someone I respect as a fellow author, so don't take anything I say as negative.

    Constructive Crit:

    Well, it was kind of a slow start, I had a hard time getting into it. I knew it had to be good with the amount of reviews its recieved in such a short time, plus your other story was awesome. But once things got moving, it was really good! Aside from a few typo's - which were words, so spellcheck didn't catch them, i.e. redundance rather than redundancy (which I may have spelled wrong, no spellcheck, but you get the idea) - everything seems to be in good order. One other thing stuck out at me, you mentioned Sound a few times as if Itachi/Akatsuki was associated with Sound - they are not. Overall spelling, grammar, punctuation, tense usage, etc are all very good. Keep up the great work!

    Ideas(possible suggestions):

    I don't think Sakura should just roll over and give up to Itachi this easily. Sakura is a strong character. While she is not as strong as some, like Naruto, she is still strong. She is physically strong, she is determined, and while Sasuke is her weakness, I think in the light of morning, Itachi would be surprised to see some of that strength and determination surface. I'll concede that Sakura does have a lot of weaknesses, but Tsunade has taught her for several years to focus on her strengths so her weaknesses will no longer be a liability for her.

    Remember to give Itachi some flaws. While he is hot & seemingly perfect, he is human. (The suggestion of his arrogance in thinking he has completely moulded Sakura to his will, only to find that she's not as completely malleable as he first thought could potentially show a flaw in Itachi's thinking.)

    In closing, this story looks great and I can't wait to see where you take it (with or without my suggestions) I look forward to updates and any other stories you will be posting!
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  • From ANON - Rista on September 04, 2006
    Wow that was HOT. Please be careful about your spelling though. There have been several times that you have misspelled Itachi's name as Itashi.
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  • From ANON - Panty_girl on September 04, 2006
    oh yeah, and someone was trying to correct your spelling but they are also wrong - its chakara.
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