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Reviews for Let Me In

By : emeraldfire84
  • From ANON - Dark Phoenix on October 30, 2006
    Don't lose heart, sugar. Maybe readers are a little stumped as to what to say.

    Hmmm... For this chapter I like the details you went into how Sakura's mind was being broken. Sure the Inner Sakura bit was rather quickly done away wit, but otherwise, it was very detailed. It makes it easy to see and empathize with what would otherwise be a standard plot device (brainwash one friend into kiling another). So... Good job! Hope to see the upcoming confrontation.
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  • From ANON - Geda on October 30, 2006
    *Huuuugs*
    Beautiful
    Wonderful
    Addicting
    Please write more!
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  • From ANON - Nasis on October 30, 2006
    *feeds the author* I really love this story, and I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - aidem on October 30, 2006
    This is actually my first time reviewing a fan fiction so I don't really know where to start ^^"

    Well I've just finsihed reading all 5 chapters in one go ^__^ What I can say is that your text flows nicely. I haven't noticed any annoying (excessive) repetivness of words or phrases. You're cabable of varying your sentences and that keeps the text alive. The creative story line also ads to this story's benefits. Another thing I like with good fan fiction is that I actually recognize the characters by behaviour not just names, meaning they're not out of charachter. Oh and I shrieked at the Rule #1 situation it was hilarious !

    Well, I can't really think of anything more than this.

    Looking forward to your next chapter! Hope you find loads of inspiration for it.


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  • From ANON - Snidne on October 30, 2006
    SO.... DAMN.... AMAZING.

    .... and if I wasn't so sleepy, I'd write more good things, like how richly the detail is and how actiony and well paced it's moving along... Not to mention how well you put each of the characters into position.

    But as it is... Carry on.
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  • From ANON - me on October 27, 2006
    i love it. I love all your stories. Theyr wonderful. Theyr amazing. I worship you. Your a god. hahah, sike..but honestly, yu have a way of writing smut that makes me tingle all over. I love you. lol, well, update soon.
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  • From ANON - Dionysos on October 13, 2006
    man that was so good! hot and funny!!!! i love ur fics!!!i can't wait till the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Dark Phoenix on October 13, 2006
    Ooops, forgot to enter my nick. That was me just now. About Kakashi and the sharpest sticks thingie.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 13, 2006
    I totally understand your frustration with the last scene.... Trying to pull one over ol' Kakashi WOULD be like pulling teeth, especially for the likes of Naruto and Sasuke. Let's face it, those two aren't the sharpest sticks in the box when it comes to strategems, top rookie or not. I'd think Kakashi secretly knows and is going along with it.
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  • From ANON - Nelly on October 13, 2006
    Yay! An update! Jubilations! I've been checking back like a madwoman... that's how much I like this fic! Keep up the good smutty work!
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  • From ANON - Anonie on October 08, 2006
    I really hope you do continue this one! I've really enjoyed it!
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  • From ANON - Phoenix Alchemist on October 08, 2006
    I really enjoy this fic. Please continue it.
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  • From ANON - Nelly on September 30, 2006
    I love the story! Grabbing and fresh. I especially like how everyone is kept in character without much exaggeration. I definetly can't wait for the continuation. Right now I'm tempted to continue the story myself but I will refrain from doing so!
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  • From ANON - squall's girl on September 25, 2006
    i love the story! please update soon..*sigh* wanting the next chapter to be up soon
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  • From ANON - Kyuubi Fanatic on September 14, 2006
    really good fic, keep it up and update soon.
    I don't know why everyone makes Itachi such a hateful/sadistic guy, he appears more stiotic to me. hate's a strong emotion and it fits sasuke waaayy better than Itachi. But it works well for your fic so keep doing what yur doing.
    8)
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