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Reviews for Maid Of The Mist

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  • From ANON - Ryu on September 16, 2006
    What? Nooo... I'm NOT going to find out how they're going to react when they find out?????? *cries* Okay.. maybe I will survive..maybe.If you didn't get it I reaaallyyyy liked this one. Poor boys they're so in denial. I really liked the fact that it started with the "Hey I'm not losing to you in this!" -attitude. Is there a chace for a sequel? Like what happenet afterwards? Just a really short one, please? Okay i'm going to stop begging but you did a really good job in my opinion. Keep it going!

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  • From ANON - roxaroni on September 16, 2006
    o.o Sorry... I was just randomly looking through this story's review page... and urm I KNOW that the person above me is never going to read this and I'm being a jerk, but WTF!? I don't understand why the person on the bottom HAS have some certain personality for it to work, it's SEX, for god's sake! You don't need to take a personality quiz to have sex. Real life that doesn't work that way, besides usually people switch. I believe her ASSUMPTION is unrealistic. I hate to look at things black and white with this whole seme/uke factor. It leaves so little room for creativity and realistic situations.

    Besides in your fic, they've only had sex ONCE, so how does she know that they're not going to switch positions? Isn't that what SasuNaruSasu means...? Both SasuNaru or NaruSasu? That's what I thought it meant, anyway.

    GAH. Sorry. This review is so pointless and hateful. It's just a random rant that came to mind and wouldn't let go.
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  • From ANON - Bookworm51485 on September 14, 2006
    This is a NaruSasu only story. You have it labeled as a SasuNaruSasu, which it isn't. For PWP, I was liking it up until the part where Sasuke was the uke. I know it's an AU story, but I can't buy Sasuke being the uke. It's just extremely unrealistic to me given his personality and his issues. But beyond that I wish it hadn't ended so abruptly, without any real conclusion between Sasuke and Naruto. Though the internet buddy thing is an interesting twist. If you have any interest or desire, it wouldn't be worthless to continue the story and add a bit more of a plot.
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  • From ANON - roxaroni on September 14, 2006
    OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG

    This is the BEST ever! I love, love, love it! I must admit the chat lines popping out of nowhere made me confused, but I soon caught track, the last line is the best line ever! This is great! (Continue, pretty please with sugar and Naruto on top...?)

    ...sorry... just so good. I love it.
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  • From ANON - Lina on September 14, 2006
    Oh my God!!! I love this story!! Any chance of an edit where we get to read Naruto and Sasuke's online convo? : wink wink : Haha anyway...AWESOME story! Four thumbs up- two from me and two from my sister! : goes to check out more of your stories :
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  • From ANON - DevilLived on September 13, 2006
    WAa!! That was really really good! Oh my God, I loved the ending. Awesome job! The lemon was very well done too (wink). I really liked how this story was thought out, great job!!!

    Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - vixenia on September 13, 2006
    XD now thats ironic. this story was so freaking awesome. i loved it. your the best. i hope you write even more awesome stories like this later
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  • From ANON - Cindy on September 13, 2006
    This ROCKED! What fun. I love the twist of them being internet friends. THANKS!!! :D
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  • From ANON - clowangel on September 13, 2006
    omg. OO; Hot! and the end of this chapter was so funny! XD You had better write another chapter to this.
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  • From ANON - Tsuki no Kitsune on September 13, 2006
    I don't know what everyone else think... but I honestly think you have an extraodinary plot going on. It's genuine and alluring.
    If, that is to say if you want to, you have time and more ideas I'm most certainly sure I'll read any sort of sequel!!
    You ended the story perfectly, yet so damn teasing that as a reader you want to know what happens after.
    I think you can really produce a wonderful story here... more chapters and plotdevelopment. At least another heated rendevouz between the two soulmates. ^^

    As for the story itself; man... i really loved it. From casual comments between themselves, such as that slug creature that kept reappearing, and very explicit descriptions of feelings and thoughts.
    You really made this a joy to read.
    Please, write a sequel!

    /Tsuki no Kitsune from FF.net
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  • From ANON - Inuki on September 13, 2006
    that was amazing for a first time >_< sooo cute too lol
    i hope you do make it into a three part one-shot or a three-shot.
    whichever you choose, but i hope you do it lol....plz update soon if that's going
    to be the case, i'll be waiting..
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  • From ANON - meeksins on September 05, 2006
    so damn funny! i luv it! hope this still continues yoh!

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  • From ANON - Jeni-chan on September 04, 2006
    GAH! I love it! I can't wait for more! This is such an interesting plotline...teehee
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  • From ANON - DevilLived on September 03, 2006
    Great story so far, I love the idea. I've never been on the Maid of the Mist myself but I have been to Niagara Falls.

    Poor Sasuke, he does one little good deed and gets stuck with Naruto. Ah well, he'll realize that that's a good thing soon enough!

    Graet job so far, update soon, okay?
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  • From ANON - aria on September 02, 2006
    it's very interesting story,i love it!!
    can't wait for the next chap.
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