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Reviews for Carpe Jugulum!

By : xxdedxx
  • From ANON - lo on December 07, 2006
    This is so much fun. This last chapter(5) was funny, it made me grin. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - XZanayu on December 07, 2006
    Cool story! I love it already. Please continue!!
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  • From ANON - innerchild on December 07, 2006
    yeah! u updated. this chapter was cute. bringing in kakashi was perfect. i can't wait until the next chapter!

    -inc
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  • From darktoy on December 07, 2006
    i loved it! Sasuke such a pervert, and following clearly Kakashi's steps!
    and I do find it a little IC cause... Well he has only 2 weeks ne?

    Hope you update soon.
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  • From UzumakiLover on December 07, 2006
    Wow I read this on TONFA...I wanted to say its one of the best vamp fics I've ever read! Hell one of the best out there, its so hard to find really good ones and I fell in love with yours! Its more than worth reading six or maybe seven times! A real master piece so cookies for you! Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Stacy on December 07, 2006
    Hurrah!! I'm so excited that you updated!! Pleaseeeeee don't make so long next time...this is one of my fav stories!!
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  • From ANON - Warui J on November 29, 2006
    ... Okay. So, straight up? YOU OWN. Majorly. I can't help but fall in love with a vampiric Sasuke. e_e; This coming from a guy that HATES Sasuke. :D Good job, you do well. ^.^ Onto the actual critique~

    I really really like the idea of this story. The description is great and you're doing a wonderful job of portraying the characters. I love your use of vocabulary; mixing in the small Japanese bits and uncommon English words is just... refreshing. Very much so. There are little to no typo's that I can point out - a few grammatical errors, such as punctuation and stuff (but we all know that the comma and semi-colon is America's worst enemy ^^;;) but that's just about as far as that goes.

    If you're ever interested in a beta, I gladly offer my services. I'm rather fast about editing and I do an efficient job of it; that, and this story makes me happy in the pants. n_n Soooo... just some food for your thought. My offer stands, and you can accept it or refuse it.

    Again!! I love this story so much. Just... everything. The storyline, the background history, how you're able to get right into Naruto's head even in third person~ not to mention the title caught me right away while I was browsing. I just thought "Seize the jugular? Sounds vampir---- aha, it is!! Joy! -click-" and you had me hooked with the first paragraph. .___. No lies, my friend.

    Sorry for the long-winded review, but really, ya gotta know that I'm like, a devoted fan now. Even though I just stumbled across this story today. ^^;

    Keep up the good writing, and let your muses dance for you!

    ~J
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  • From ANON - Miharu on November 14, 2006
    Oh lord, this story like the first chapter, actually scared me enough that I had to turn my light on and shit! lol great job! Love it, always have loved vampire stories! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOON!! *begs*
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  • From ANON - dragonslayer1 on November 13, 2006
    OH MY GOD I LOVE THIS STORY I WISH YOU WOULD UPDATE FASTER, BUT I RATHER HAVE LESS CHAPTERS AND BETTER QUALITY!!! PLEASE CONTIUNE!!!
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  • From ANON - yks on November 12, 2006
    Its really really good - plot and writing - and like most of your fans I wish it was possible to tie you up to your desk and chair so you'll have to constantly write for our entertainment...of course it is only a thought and I have NO wish to really bind you to furinture (depends where the story goes...LOL). Anyways, I felt I HAD to comment because of how you incorporated Iruka in the story. I am a BIG BIG fan of Iruka and Naruto's paternal/faternal relationship, and I encourage more of that storyline. Can't wait to read your next update - and hopefully that will be soon. ciao, yks
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  • From ANON - innerchild on November 12, 2006
    hehe, iruka heard them. i wonder how he's gonna keep sasuke from violating naruto. hmm....

    update soon, please?

    -inc
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  • From ANON - lo on November 12, 2006
    That was fun, nice job! You combined the whole vampire thing and school setting nicely.
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  • From ANON - Nomme de Plume on November 12, 2006
    i've been waiting for an update for this story! oh, and now mother-hen iruka's got it in his head that naruto doesn't want what's going down. tsk, tsk. anyway, great chapter! i can't wait for an update! you know, i would suggest posting this puppy in the male/male category. they have AUs there (hell, i have AUs there), and i think you'd get a lot of feedback there.

    anway, keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - HellzAngel on November 06, 2006
    Love your story, I love vampire stories. Can't wait for it to get all hot between the two. Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter, hope it's soon.
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  • From ANON - aria on November 05, 2006
    OMG! poor Naruto!!lol
    i love your story.
    can't wait untill you update, keep up your great work!
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