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By : boals4
  • From ANON - Yuri MoonFire on February 13, 2009
    i understand the plot and i can understand why you seem to have writer's block. If i were you i would just put it off to the side and think about it for a little while. Go back aad revamp the whole thing. But if you need help with it or anything if you deicde to redo it yourself you can drop me a line at my email. jazztaylor08@aim.com. Or of you would like me to take it over you can drop me a messege.
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on June 29, 2007
    you really shouldnt have stopped it is such an amazing story and you write it so well :( :( :(
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  • From Rosebud on June 27, 2007
    Well, I like this story. I’m not so sure that I’d be the best person to write it though. I’ve only been writing for about a year now. But if you’d like to consider me (and I’d be in no way offended if you turned me down) you can e-mail me at: MyCrimsonRose13@aol.com

    As far as writing goes, I have an account here at AFF, and one at FFnet under the same name. My style usually differs, depending on the story -since every story had a different feel to it and I like to add a lot emotion into my work.

    My flaws are that I use too many collage words when writing -apparently!(That‘s what several people have told me before...I don‘t know.)O.o Anyway it‘s an expendable flaw. Also, I don’t work well under pressure, so updates don’t happen as fast as I (or the reader) would like.

    My pros are that I have co-written pieces before. So I’m comfortable in writing specific things if you had certain events that you wanted to happen in the story (even though you‘d be no longer writing it). I can either work with you idea’s or create my own, it make’s no difference to me. Also, I’m a bit eccentric with my plots. Most of the time I like to add a little twist to the story that makes it stand out (that way it’s not too monotonous). Moreover I have the tendency to write in detail; though I’m not sure if that’s a pro or a con??? (laughs)

    So, yeah. If your interested let me know. I could even type up a quick prototype of the next chapter if you wanted. That way you could see first hand how I write (my style/skill) and if you’d feel comfortable enough in letting me continue.

    Until later... or not ^^
    Crimson2006
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  • From DiRtYwRiTeR on June 06, 2007
    Oh, this story is really good. You should finish it!!!!
    It's ok if you don't update all the time, just work on it when ever you can. ^^
    I would really love to read more.
    Still, if you can't then I understand.
    Good luck on finding someone to help you!^_^
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  • From ANON - Inus_Kagome_Forever on September 15, 2006
    good, sad... mean, but good! So very intriging! I like it! And I hope you'll update soon. This is good.

    Inus_Kagome_forever
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  • From ANON - LemonsLuver on September 07, 2006
    woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
    Must conitue!!!!! Sasuke You just realized you were gay?!?!?!
    How troublesome.....I WANT MORE...XD
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  • From ANON - Muraki Asato (ff.net) on September 05, 2006
    OK, I like your story but something is bothering me, the names.
    Here, Last Name First Name:
    Uchiha Sasuke (This is right and Naruto too)
    Uzumaki Naruto
    Nara Shikamaru
    Hatake Kakashi
    Umino Iruka
    (And just in case they show up later...)
    Haruno Sakura
    Yamanaka Ino
    Akimichi Chouji (or Choji)
    Aburame Shino
    Hyuuga Hinata
    Hyuuga Neji
    Inuzuka Kiba
    Rock Lee
    ____ Tenten (She doesn't have a last name)

    Email me as JakotsuHajime2@aol.com if you need any more, I've got them all. (Sorry for being a pain in the ass)
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  • From ANON - Submissive's Slave on September 04, 2006
    I loved Naruto in the boy's bathroom. I kept wondering if the janitor would walk in on him or someone else. Then when it went to Sasuke's point of view and he was in the locker room watching Naruto shower, I spit my drink and almost died. I love that. I wanted him to join Naruto in the water, but you probably have something planned.

    Good work on this second chapter. Seriously liked it a lot.

    I'm worried now on what's going to happen to Naruto.
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  • From ANON - hiei_jagenshi on September 04, 2006
    i like this story
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  • From ANON - avila7989 on September 04, 2006
    AWSEOM FIC!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!
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  • From Kativachan on September 03, 2006
    Oh wow! This is magnificant! I love this story so much! You're soing such an amazing job on it!
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  • From ANON - nicole on September 03, 2006
    this is the best story iread at aff
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  • From ANON - rAiNwAtEr on September 03, 2006
    Your story looks promising. I like this new twist to the whole "Sasuke and Naruto" romance. I like a healthy does of angst. It is good to see that these two are not going to just jump each other. I am so sick an tired of reading stories where both Sasuke and Naruto are secretly in love with each other and all other used plots. It is good to see that at least one of them habors animosity (for now anyway LOL)

    I wish you the best of luck with this story and hope you update as soon as you can. I'll crazy if you don't update soon.

    If you can, could you send me an e-mail when you update this story?
    justice02908@yahoo.com

    Please and Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 03, 2006
    I love how this is going so far! Poor Naruto thinks he'll never be loved. And Sasuke is totally in denial! But he was watching Naruto shower and getting hard over it. And he still denies. Thats so funny! I loved it when Naruto was having problems paying attention in class cause of his thoughts. That was funny too! I really like this so please update!
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  • From ANON - yaoilover on August 31, 2006
    that was really good cant wait tell chapter 2
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