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  • From ANON - FullMetal8977 on August 31, 2006
    Wow this story sounds awesome! I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - shadow light on August 31, 2006
    This is a great story! Please review soon!
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  • From ANON - lala.suki on August 30, 2006
    kyah!! sasuke is sooo in denial!! face the truth damn it!! i hope it doesnt take something really drastic for him to realize and face his feeling. hehe. i like the beginning and it's well written. oh and just to point out to you, when you first introduced sasuke, i think there was a typo saying that hes 'sasuke uchiha San'? is the '-san' one of those japanese honorifics? oh well. i like this story!
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  • From ANON - Monkie on August 30, 2006
    -claps-Ok.This was so much better than the original plan.I like it.Good job.Just some minor mistakes, but that's okay.Continue please.
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  • From ANON - LadyApollonia on August 29, 2006
    Holy shit. But I really like it.
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  • From ladygizarme on August 29, 2006
    hey, this version was much better than the first. i like that you added more description/detail and are fleshing out naruto's interactions with others more, and the ways he reacts to situations.. there were still a few editing mistakes here and there, but not toooo bad (most noticeable was switching from first person to third person for part of a sentence in both naruto's and sasuke's pov--saying "he" instead of "i" i think it was..) i'm also glad you went with just naruto and sasuke's pov, it made reading a LOT easier and less distracting..

    you're still calling shikamaru "nara" though.. you're using everyone else's given names (ie: naruto, sasuke, ino) but you're using shikamaru's family name.. (such as uzumaki, uchiha, and yamanaka are family names --aka "last names" for western/american culture people) is that on purpose or was it a mistake?

    well anyway, glad you're redoing it (i was wondering if you were still going to since you never answered my reply to your email) i look forward to seeing how the future chapters are improved as well, and how the rest of the story plays out ^___^

    ~ lg
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  • From ANON - Rae on August 29, 2006
    Oooh! I can't waity for more of this. It's a good fanfic. The only thing is that I can't see Sasuke giving half a shit if Naruto's gay. That's why it's a fanfic though!
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  • From ANON - Submissive's Slave on August 29, 2006
    Great work little amigo! Can't wait for the next chapter. I haven't read your other one, but I like this one.
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  • From on August 29, 2006
    Yea i like this version WAAAAY better, the other one was good too, but this ones fantastic
    i really hope you update soon.
    i'll be looking forward to it.

    ^_^
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  • From ANON - avila7989 on August 29, 2006
    AWSEOM FIC@!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!
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  • From Kativachan on August 28, 2006
    I like it so far! Sounds like it's going to be an awesome story. Although, there are a few spelling mistakes. You may want to get a beta. I'll even do it for you if you'd like(Email me if you want)! PLEASE DO NOT think of this as a flame! This is just constructive criticism. I love the story and I really want you to continue!
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