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Reviews for An Elegy of Candles

By : Celaris
  • From ANON - Emise on September 11, 2006
    Wow, great job. This is excellent and in character. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - calen on September 10, 2006
    “And bless your naïve, sociopathic soul if you think I’ll let you stay in my home by yourself.” *love*

    This is probably the most in-character Naruto fic I've ever read. No one-dimensional characters, no character bashing, it's terrific. Sasuke is that fucked up- I'm so glad you didn't whitewash over it. Your Sakura breaks my heart. A lot of people really hate her, but you do a good job of showing her strengths. Poor girl. And Naruto has layers, which is great because so many people write him as a grinning idiot whose only character traits are 'loud' and 'obnoxious.'

    As for saying you need a beta... your writing is, like, miles better than that of most fanfic-ers. Seriously. There were a few typos, but nothing distracting. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. :)
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  • From ANON - Tara on September 03, 2006
    i'm enjoying it so far please keep updating
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  • From ANON - Miara on September 03, 2006
    I love the setting and the idea it's very orginal! Good job please update
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  • From ANON - CMG on September 02, 2006
    Really like your story and hope u update. It is by far the most realistic as Sasuke wouldn't come back on his own and he certainately wouyldn't be nice about it if he ewas dragged back.
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  • From ANON - Sahara on August 30, 2006
    I'm enjoying it so far, keep going!
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  • From ANON - Myst on August 29, 2006
    Good story, keep writing. I like the plot so far. Update soon
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  • From ANON - Sas-uke on August 29, 2006
    I like it, and thus plan to continue reading. One note... mayhap you should consider your thesaurus to replace the word 'defection'.
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  • From ANON - Pandora on August 28, 2006
    I really like where this is going~... I loved how much details you put into everyone, and how IN character everyone is too. And it looks like Sasuke's gonna have to hard to gain back Naruto's trust, but I like it like that. Because I mean, getting over your best friend trying to KILL you isn't supposed to be easy.

    xDD Kakashi called him a bitch, I loved that.

    Please continue this, and update soon~ ^^
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  • From ANON - Sailor Kismet on August 28, 2006
    (It seems like I might be the first to review your story. that's never happened b4.) I really love the way this story was thought out. I can't wait until the next chapter. I wanna know what you have planned for Sasuke and Naruto and eventually I want to see what will become of Team 7.
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