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Reviews for Endless Night

By : Cepheus
  • From ANON - blackbloodedkunoichi on September 06, 2006
    Nice, this is awesome just like the rest of your stories!

    If I may, can I ask you to update quicker? ;-; XDXD PLEAAAAAAAAASE? You don't update as often anymore...makes me forget XD;;
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  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on September 05, 2006
    nice chapter. the idea of itachi coming back sounds good to me. i can easily imagine the hell him and naru would have to put up with. the akatsuki!naruto one dpesn't appeal to me in the least. plus it seems like you'd have a lot more work to look foward to if you go that way. like what did naruto join for? could he really ever betray konoha? what is the akatsuki's purpose now that they would have naruto on their side? (assuming all of the other jinchuriki(sp?) were caputured) anyway, looking foward to your next update.
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  • From ANON - littleolmee on September 05, 2006
    Good chapter, liked how you had Naruto try to figure everything out around him that was wrong. The part with the 3rd Hokage was very heart-felt. I also liked how you had Naruto insulting Itachi and comparing him to Sasuke. Hope you keep with it, I'd like to see what you have in mind between those two and what will they do.
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  • From ANON - BrucesGirl on September 05, 2006
    GREAT chapter. ^_^ I can't wait for the next installment. I'm really impressed with your abilities and grammar. Keep up the good work. Looking for the next one!
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  • From ANON - Anna on September 05, 2006
    Well, I would probably lose it if I was on Naruto's position! Greaaat chapter, you definetly got me hooked. And fot the other thing! I prefer the Akatsuki one!
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  • From Genderless on September 05, 2006
    This scenario has so much potential, I can't wait to see where you choose to take it. You have me hooked already.
    So far, Itachi and Naruto are both well written and the picture you're painting is vivid.
    Please write more!
    It's a tough decision, but I vote Akatsuki!Naruto because I hate it when authors absolve the psychos they're writing about. Akatsuki don't have to be nice, and Naruto probably needs to be a little out there, but still, introducing Naruto to Akatsuki seems smoother than bringing Itachi back to Konoha - without use of a body-bag.
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  • From ANON - Zrina on September 05, 2006
    Really interesting so far... :D
    As to where it is going, Ataksuki!Naruto is really tricky given Naruto's convictions, but when done right I like da Evil!Naruto! Something about a badass Naruto just gives me shivers! :D A cleared Itachi is always interesting, but only because I like laughing at Sasuke every once in a while for being a stubborn little shit :D Nothing like having your life goal whipped out from underneath you :D As for the Evil!Naruto, being in the past is an opportunity to remove (through making unintentional changes) the things that made Naruto who he is (ie Iruka, etc). If you go on the linear theory, changes made in the past should start effecting the older Naruto (different memories replacing others whether experienced through nightmares/dreams) and twisting him in the direction you want him to go.

    As for clearing Itachi, if Naruto finds out that he isn't responsible for his clan's death, Naruto could always hide the evidence for later retrieval or make sure it turns up at the Hokage's door. The angst in hiding the evidence so he can find it later would manifest itself in the revelation that perhaps had he not hidden it and turned it over to the past authorities, Sasuke might not have gone on the path that he had... :D

    Anyway, looking forward to what you have planned!!
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  • From ANON - Nyuchan on September 05, 2006
    I hope for your soul you continue this >:) You're the reason why i love ItaNaru..so you have to do something about!

    ^^

    I love this story so far
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  • From ANON - shizu on September 05, 2006
    :D:D:D I dunno if you have more of this posted at FF, but since it's down atm I can't check ;___; but anyway, cool story! That scary chakra didn't sound very nice.. o.o uuh. I wonder when we'll see Itachi. :D

    I'll probably leave a review for this at FF when it's up again too ;p heh. there's always something I forget to say.. :P
    anyway, ja ne!
    shizu
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  • From ANON - fuu fuu fuu on September 03, 2006
    wow that was good, I really liked it and I hope you do update it ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anna on August 30, 2006
    Ok you got me hooked, I hate angst, I really do, but this seems to damn interesting for me to even care, even if it's supposed to be angst!
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  • From ANON - littleolmee on August 27, 2006
    This is a very interesting start, I really like the idea of Naruto traveling back through time. Who are you planning on matching up with Naruto? Okay, since he is healing; it was just so slow, that must mean Kyuubi is still in him. But there is only 4 heads, so how far back did he go? Back to the Yondiame or is he already gone? Well, I do hope you stay with it, I love to see what you have in mind for the story.
    littleolmee
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  • From ANON - losthimagain on August 27, 2006
    O.O Sounds fun! ^^ Please update soon! Can Naru-chan be back to when Yondaime-sama was around?! I love my Yondaime! ^^
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  • From ANON - ItachisHottie on August 27, 2006
    need more!
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