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  • From ANON - Anon on January 05, 2007
    What happened in Naruto's apartment and who was behind it? Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - AnA La PaNa83 on January 05, 2007
    Im so glad u updated. I read this story whenever i see it pop up. I'm excited to see where this is going. And i'm glad that Naruto and Sasuke are building something together. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - severedwings on January 04, 2007
    Oi, that was great! But, I have a question....LOL...would that scene be considered a four-some?!

    *Winks*...keep up the great work. I look forward to the next chapter.

    Ja,
    SeveredWIngs
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  • From ANON - XZanayu on January 04, 2007
    Great chapter!!! Hurry with the next one!!
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  • From ANON - Dragon on January 03, 2007
    Grate fucking chapter I love this story is this going to be a Mpreg I hope so Sasuke aka Shiro swould be so cute prego. Hope ypu update soon and keep on writing!!!!!!!


    P.S. Mpreg
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  • From ANON - DevilLived on January 03, 2007
    ONG yay! That as really good, though at first I was like: Why is Sasuke being so touchy-feely? Resting his head on Naruto's shoulder and all.

    But I guess it worked out in the end! I liked how you told the story about why Shiro was sealed in Sasuke and why Itachi killed the Uchiha.

    Great job and update soon!
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  • From ANON - eien no ren on January 03, 2007
    And that, ladies and gentlemen, is a hot, hot, hot lemon for you... *applause*

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  • From ANON - RisaRage on December 21, 2006
    Please oh please oh please oh please UPDATE!! I'm loving this! I love your writing style, it's so descriptive without being prose-y, and ARGH! I'm jealous! I wish I could write like you.
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  • From ANON - Luthien Wildglen on December 17, 2006
    Oh my goodness, this seems to be my lucky week! Several of my favorite fics have finally updated after what has seemed like forever. I positively loved this chapter! It had everything: action, angst, drama, a little comedy, and of course, a dash or so of romance. I think you chose the perfect time to change the feeling of the fic ever so slightly. I like that Naruto has finally admitted his love because if Sasuke had to go through one more chapter, with his heart breaking, I think I would actually start to cry. At first I was bothered by how emo Sasuke was, but then after a few chapters and some thought it occurred to me that after coming back from Orrochimaru, Sasuke would be…lets say emotionally injured. Sasuke’s whole thing about being like a wolf and mating for life was utterly…adorable and romantic and yet sad at the same time.

    I also really liked the addition of Shiro. Putting a….demon? inside Sasuke is original and really adds to the storyline, as well as taking the monotony out of it as well.

    Anyway though, this was fantastic and I love this fic to death. I’m so glad that you updated and I wait with baited breath until the next one. My best wishes for you and your writing.



    Dryad1789@hotmail.com
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  • From nekochannya on December 12, 2006
    great! I was missing an update nyan! Thank you! >....< I loved it! Mates! I'd love to be a fly on the wall to see the Uchiha's face at that little tidbit...nya!!
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  • From ANON - DevilLived on December 12, 2006
    Weee!! Loved it. I really liked how you described the way Kakashi poofed into the scene.

    Very cool.

    I also liked the battle with Shiro. I can't wait till the next chapter. Great job and update soon!
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  • From ANON - mydarkerside on December 12, 2006
    um, Flame Warning?: I consider this constructive criticism because I admire your work so far, but I've gotten the impression from other reviews I've read that any criticism is flaming. eh, well, anywho...

    It is so incredibly refreshing to find a BELIEVABLE Sasuke redemption fic. Kudos to you for pulling that off. I think that the story is brilliant, and coming along very nicely. But I also think that there is some stuff that, yeah, I get what you're trying to get across, but it isn't written out very well. The only reason I bother to say so is because I think it would be worth your time to edit this and fix the little holes and problems here and there. There isn't a chapter missing, is there? Because, for example, when Naruto and Sasuke race and they put up stakes for anything, I don't see the motivation for Naruto suddenly saying, "I want you." Before that, he'd been all 'i hate sasuke, i'll never forgive sasuke.'

    Maw, maw, now that I think about it, the mistakes I'm seeing in the structure and development are the same kind of mistakes that I tend to make. If it helps, I've realized that sometimes what happens is I see things in my head and I start to write them down, but I miss important things that I 'saw' but then fail to relate to the reader. So often, for me, I have to go back to the spot where something's missing, figure out what painstakingly simple and obvious thing I forgot, and put it in.

    Because this is a fanfic and these things are usually more for fun than anything else, I would like to end with saying..

    O.o

    Sqeee!!

    you are totally awesome and I really really love this piece!

    UPDATE! UPDATE! UpDATe!

    ...and now that my yaoi fangirl has been reharnessed, I bid you adieu

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  • From ANON - Anna on December 12, 2006
    Kawaii!!!!!
    Ohhhh I love howo this story is going, and finally Naruto knows about Shiro!
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  • From ANON - drm_fox@yahoo.com on December 11, 2006
    love the story so far. hope it continues and doesn't die a wip. one thing though, i think your japanese is a bit off. ame means "rain", kôri means "ice", so the wolf's name would be shiro kôri.
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  • From ANON - luvd dastory on November 18, 2006
    soory i didn't review for the other chapters but i'll make up for it.. lol
    i luv'd that they call sasuke puppy that is so freaking hmm... lets see *looks up in mind-created dictionary* hot,funny, and most of all CUTE!!
    oh and i couldn't stop cracking up at "kabuto shaves his legs!?"
    keep coming with the chapters please hurry up dammnit! lol hey who keeps attaking sasuke?
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