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By : Shosuro
  • From ANON - yosh! on October 25, 2006
    I fucking love

    LOVE

    sensative pornography

    itmakesmehot
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  • From ANON - OMG!! on October 25, 2006
    Much love for shower sex.
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  • From ANON - teodora on October 25, 2006
    i love you... you made my day. that.was.the.best.sex scene i ever read. you're amazing.this story is amazing. well.. for the plot. you can put whatever you want as long as you have that wonderfull smut in there :D oohhh and maybe you can do somethin' like a party with embarassing scenes . and dirty dancing :D that would be quite funny and nice in my opinion. but hey you're the author. so . i can't wait . good luck with your writing :D
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  • From ANON - sadistickiss on October 24, 2006
    *pat pat*

    That was some hot smut ^^. Bathroom smut is so... steamy... *daze*... I have to ask though, whether it's necessary to have so many exclamation marks attached to the end of one sentence XP.

    Great chapter XP. Keep feeding =3.
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  • From ANON - Rasengan22 on October 22, 2006
    Uh..yeah, that was freaking hot as hell. You write really great lemons or maybe I'm just a sucker for dirty talk and sex in the shower, but damn it!
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  • From ANON - Pepp on October 22, 2006
    *pats back* Writers Block is a normal infection, my dear author... lol I really liked this one... After reading your first chapter, I went around the internet trying to find where I could watch SP... And I found it on youtube... only the first part tho... And half of this part of SP that you have in your story... *sighes* it isnt there anymore, but I have to say it was HOT when it was there... lol And I loved the chapter! Sweet, but at the same time hot and smexy... lol ^^

    And Sasuke, I hate to say, is the better seme, in my opinion! XD lol In all fanfics, I usually read him as seme... Every now and then, he's uke, but mostly seme.. Naruto just gives off the better uke-vibe, you know? lol But I love this either way anyways... Just wanted to give my opinion.... Sasu/Naru/Sasu is great all around, you know? lol

    *glomps* Well, I hope this isnt over! And I cant wait to see what you'll do next!
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  • From ANON - macy on October 21, 2006
    *coughs and chokes on drool*

    oh my. that was suuuuuper hot. yum yum all the way. i really like this. heee~~~
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 21, 2006
    omg could you write more Top!Naruto and Uke!Sasuke maybe perphaps with chains or toys? just a suggestion!
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  • From ANON - Dace on October 21, 2006
    yeah i know how that feels, i have 3 stories on ff.net that are ummmm dead at the moment and it makes me feel SOOO bad. but hey, when there is nothing then there isnt. but anyhow... a plot line. well lets see, ano, orochimaru (sp) *stupid creepy snake...* i dont think that he would give up on sasuke that easily, and there has to be a reason as to why he took him in, i mean he didnt and as far as i know doesnt give a shit about itachi. and hmmm why would he be demanding another rabbit anyhow? but then again what better way to get back at sasuke than destroying or at least damaging the reason for his leaving. hint hint *Naruto* since you made him out as being so innocent and well yah different from everything sasuke knew, wouldnt he be the perfcty means of destroying sasukes resolve? or maybe itachi pops into the picture, since naruto doesnt know about him, but lets say that itachi knows about sasuke and sanke guy and sasukes plans for his untimely death and gets mad * i mean who wouldnt?*, so then he knows about naruto, so yah once again a *lets get at sasuke through naruto* plan. you never know, abduction, torture, as used before rape, umm i dunno about murder that might suck, but hmmmm what else could yah do... well i shall leave yah with that then lol.

    see the peoblem i have is that i have a never ending supply of plot bunnies, but i am either a) to lazy to write the story b) decide that it suxs half way in c) lose interest/ inspiration or d) just dont have time.

    well i hope this helps yah out if not let me know and i shall go a hunting and find yah some more ideas! *arg must leave too many bunnies running at me with plots!!!*

    dace
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  • From ANON - aria on October 20, 2006
    yay, another great chapter! i'm glad you updated this story.
    the last chapter is SO HOT! i need a cold shower...lol
    i'm a big fan of NaruSasu, but i like possesive Sasuke!! great job!(^_^)
    you are a trlented writer, i hope you can get over your writer's block as soon as possible.
    but keep up your own pace...i'm looking forward to the next.

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  • From ANON - Sekre on October 20, 2006
    Cute ^^
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  • From Jackee on October 20, 2006
    The first chapter was hot! The second one much hotter!! *fans self* the third one......was disappointing. :( Mostly because i hate SasuNaru... -_-;;

    (how i wish there was half as many strictly NaruSasu fics as there are SasuNaru ones...sigh)

    well, other than that...good fic! :) You have quite a number of typos though, so getting a beta and revising the chapters is very recommended. You also tend to overly use !!'s even when you don't need them. That's the only constructive critic i can think of atm.. good fic, hoping to see more NaruSasu! ^_^
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  • From Sammei on October 20, 2006
    Very nice! There were a few errors, but nothing major that took away from the story. Nicely done and hot. ~_^ Now I'm curious, though; where DID this plot come from??
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  • From ANON - Dragon on October 20, 2006
    Love this chapter the shower scene was HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! love sasuke as the uke and Naruto as seme. I can't get enough of this story it fucking grate. Hope you get over your writers block soon so you can update with a another fantastic chapter.
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  • From ANON - mel on October 07, 2006
    I loved the first chapter now I have to go watch the novie agian . Please give up another chapter soon . I like how you have Sauske turn from his asshole self into a nice submisive uke .
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