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Reviews for Pet Sitter

By : Shosuro
  • From ANON - asds on December 31, 2006
    HOLY SWEET MACARONI!!!!!!!!


    That was great < especially chapter 3 > ! You are really great at writting the sex scene ..I mean REALLY!

    Keep up the great work...and HAPPY NEW YEAR!
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  • From ANON - eien no ren on December 31, 2006
    Lovely perverted imagination... yeah... um, you can always bring Orochimaru knocking down Sasuke's door wanting him back... and Itachi bring him nightmares that he doesnt want Naruto to know about. Guilt can push him towards seeing his brother's face everywhere... say he killed the family or something equally nasty to merit his wanting to kill his own brother... so he is constantly blowing hot and cold with Naruto. He doesnt want to taint Naruto with his darkness but needs Naruto's sunshine to conquer his darkness and inner pain. Meanwhile, Naruto can find Sasuke's attitude weird and worrysome as he struggles with school. You can bring Iruka and Kakashi back, make Kakashi hear a conversation between them that's plenty suggestive and when he blows you can have him dominating IRuka and getting them mad. Orochimaru can try to get his revenge in both fronts... Sasuke and Tsunade... while Naruto meets Itachi in a pet sitting stint. There are many things to be done as long as I get to read a fisting scene between Sasuke and Naruto... *blush* yeah, I am that perverted too. Lemme know if my suggestions were helpful somehow, ne?
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  • From Androgyny13 on December 22, 2006
    I just love all your story’s, There all so deliciously Sweet!!
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  • From ANON - not telling on December 21, 2006
    Really great job on the new chapter^-^ I prefer Naruto being seme but you did a really great job with Sasuke^-^ and I almost never like Sasuke being seme so... YOUR STORY IS SO GREAT! Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - TimeFlys on December 08, 2006
    First off- I love your story. The smutt is wonderful and I like how you added to the plot of S.P. and mad it your own. As for the suggestions. I have a few. Maybe sasuke isn't the only 'pet' out thier maybe naruto's next job is with a nother one of these 'pets.' Like a raccoon mabye. (Sorry I;m a big Garaa/Naru fan. lol) Then you can have a little bit of smutt but have naruto turn whoever-it-is down because he has sasuke. That would make the new pet confused and give him reason to seek naruto out again. Hence giving you at least two chapters! XD Well I hope you like these idea's or if nothing else help you get out of this writers block. Can't wait till your next chapter! XD
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  • From ANON - VII on December 06, 2006
    I liked the shower scene...(Very kinky and hot).... also the Sasuke on top... hot also (Naruto is going to feel that in the morning!! XD)

    VII
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  • From ANON - frizzy197 on November 07, 2006
    holycarp!! awsome fic and awsome smut. if u still need some help with the plot you could always throw somthing in about itachi coming back or getting out of jail or wherever he's been and stalking naruto, like in the anime and stuff. so then sasuke and naruto are forced to join together in the power of love to defeat itachi and his evil minions and stuff. ok....maybe that;s a bit too cheesy...just throw in some blood and a rape scene and it's not so bad. if you want somthing more original, i'm out of ideas.
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  • From promise2003 on October 31, 2006
    Hee-hee...I had to go and download Sensitive Pornogragh after reading this...great fic.
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  • From ANON - mel on October 30, 2006
    WOW. OMG . HOT. Do I need to go on? I love the smut . You do it so well. Who needs plot when you can write good smut . Hope you get over your writers block and can write what you wont . I will come ack for more no matter what you wont to write. Thanks for taking the time to write and post this.
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  • From ANON - Black Iris on October 27, 2006
    As a proud owner of the actual movie Sensitive Pornograph I have to say this story was absolutely amazing! A sensual recreation of a beautiful movie! Very well done with my favorite pairing of all times. Hope to read more from you soon.
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  • From AgniDragon on October 27, 2006
    if you don't have beta readers, I'd be willing to beta for u. I have msn, aim and yahoo. Tho I'm normally on msn only.

    email me and i'll give u the msn account if yr interested.
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  • From ANON - Mmm Naruto's so hott! on October 27, 2006
    I just luuuuuuuuuurv Naru/Sasu pair (smut). Yummy yummy! I hope you find the inspiration to write more soon!
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  • From ANON - Beca on October 27, 2006
    Bwhahaha! Oh you're so uber, like, that was such an awesome take on Sensitive Pornograph. Naruto and Sasuke are much more in character in the second chapter, but that's only 'cause of the quotes in the previous one, and wow they were some good fecking lemons. :]

    Beca
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  • From ANON - Lynn on October 25, 2006
    Wow!!! This is a GREAT story so far. I've really enjoyed reading it.
    For suggestions on your story....umm maybe you can have Sasuke's old Master come back and try to take him back by offering him the "power" that he needs. Also, you could have Sakura trying to get inbetween those two. Well those were just a few suggestions. I hope they help.
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  • From ANON - silveryami on October 25, 2006
    I am really happy you are gong to continue this story... but chapter three was a bit of a disappointment. I really like NaruSasu, and your first two chapters were SO good! I was really looking forwards to more. Please write more NaruSasu?
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