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Reviews for After the Bridge

By : Hellagoddess
  • From ANON - kitsuki on August 24, 2006
    yah, so one-shots don't tend to get many reviews... I wouldn't sweat it. It was good, really, as in really good. =) If only that had happened...

    I do pray you write more.

    *smile*
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  • From ANON - Steph on August 24, 2006
    I liked your work!
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  • From ANON - lilac_flower on August 24, 2006
    I really like the story. It had an interesting starting plot, though not altogether unexpected and I thoroughly enjoyed it. :) Jaa.
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  • From ANON - Cassandra on August 24, 2006
    I liked your story. It showed the truth about how things can really be and how they can really happen. Good work.
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  • From ANON - Rdoujima on August 24, 2006
    WOW that was very nice. very well written, good grammer. I can't wait to read more of your fics. keep up the good work. :D
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  • From ANON - lo on August 24, 2006
    Not bad, you are off to a very good start. Try being a little more disriptive when it comes to actions. Sometimes it took a lilltle too long for me to actually visualise what was happening. But I think the more you write the better you will get so, don't give up.
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  • From ANON - Nyuchan on August 24, 2006
    It's very sweet but i don't like the idea that the kids are about 12 years old in this fic..

    Love it anyway ^.~
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