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Reviews for Kakashi Unmasked

By : xtranew
  • From ANON - kitty on August 22, 2006
    i can't wait for the next update so i can read what happens next this is the first story i've ever read with a itachi/kakashi pairing and i absolutely love it they make a hot pairing and as of now are one of my favorite pairings.
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  • From ANON - DirtyD on August 21, 2006
    Your beta reader missed stuff. I'd offer my help but I'm only so good at english and it's my first and only language, at best I could be sub-help just someone to look over and get some of the obvious mistakes. It's a offer anyway.

    I don't mind malepregs when writer's make them pausible and interesting as you are writing my favorite couple together my interest is piqued, make more chapters! Who can say no to the two hottest Naruto characters together... who?! Can't wait to see more in the future. I am planning a spoof on the pairing myself. More of a comedy story with smutt. Viva La KakashixItachi!
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  • From ANON - seamless on August 20, 2006
    Since the story's only up to the Prologue, I won't say I like or dislike it just yet. However, a few facts are off (spoilers ahead):
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    First of all, Sasori shouldn't have been present since he was killed by Sakura and his grandmother during the Gaara Rescue Ark in the manga. Besides, I don't think Kakashi would have brought him down as easily as he did.

    Another thing is that I doubt Deidara would have been as stoic about his death, they were close and respected each other very much.

    And as of recently, Tobi has been admitted as Deidara's offical partner in the manga.
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    That's it for the spoilers. I still see many remaining grammatical and spelling errors. I could be a part time beta for you, but I must warn you that I'm not very reliable at all. Just email me if you still want my help xD

    So keep on working on it.

    Ps: I think you should consider removing the PWP tag. A PWP is practically all porn and no plot, and your story doesn't seem to be progressing that way.
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  • From ANON - Shiva Ice on August 20, 2006
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  • From ANON - ariala on August 20, 2006
    this story seems interesting, I wonder what kakashi`s bloodline is.
    I can beta-read for you if you want.
    Can`t wait to read more.
    Please update soon.
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