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Reviews for Kakashi Unmasked

By : xtranew
  • From ANON - blisblop on September 10, 2006
    On,very interesting.For some reason this MP does not turn me off at all.Normally I despise them.well I dispise any preg fics at all.I am not a baby person...not at all and I've been there and done that(you are never done however)Your high standards show,this makes sence and flows well.good luck and thank you.Oh,I like this too cause Itachi had a reason to like Kakashi,it was a wonderful hot scene,esp. there third go...Itachi sure is inventive.Ha....and we know who leader is now too..Huge shock!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Evans on September 10, 2006
    I can only hope that Kakashi's baby is a boy. ._. Don't ask me why, I just don't imagine him ever having a girl as a baby. Ahem, this chapter still had some gramatical errors (but despite that, I think you're doing just fine ;]), and it was amusing, reading Kakashi having a sudden epiphany as to why he was so sick. Gee, and he's a genius, shouldn't he have known?

    Ahem, well, I just realized, after re-reading chapter 1, that Sasori couldn't have died so easily. He was a member of the Akatsuki, for Christ's sake--and the grandson of Chiyo, right? So that would've made him virtually impossible to defeat. I know, I know. Sakura kicked his ass, but seriously. I could tell he let her kill him. There was that look in his eyes, that cold, and unfathomnable look that spelt resignation...

    Anyways, wonderful chapter so far and the only suggestion I have: BABY BOY! o.O; If Kakashi is going to have a baby, I would imagine it as a boy.

    Lookin' good so far,
    Evans
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  • From ANON - Evans on September 09, 2006
    I sincerely adore your story. o_O What's more to say, is that I have never read a Kakashi/Itachi fiction. This is the very first one. It surprised me, that you made Kakashi 3 years older than Itachi (so that would make him.. 23? If Itachi was 20 after the arc?). Never really thought of that, but it somehow made sense. What I liked was when Kakashi called Itachi insatiable. ;] I was ready to say:

    "You don't know the half of it."

    I'm looking forward to your next update (mwhahaha, more Uchiha love!)
    Evans
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  • From ANON - Luthien Wildglen on September 09, 2006
    Ok, I'm not gonna lie, that was pretty hot. I liked this a lot, and I'm curious to see exactly where this is going. I would appreciate it you continued this fic, you can't leave us poor readers hangin here! I hope you update soon. Regardless, my best wishes for you and your writing.


    Dryad1789@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - blisblop on September 08, 2006
    better than I thought,good reasoning.i liked the seal bit.Hurrah!
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  • From ANON - maya on August 31, 2006
    *speechless*
    OMG YOU MUST GO ON OMG THIS IS TEH HOTTT! *cough*
    Honestly, this was the hottest smut I've read in this fandom for so long!
    And not only the smut, I like everything! I so want to know what happens after that, please continue, please!
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  • From ANON - maya on August 31, 2006
    I haven't read your fic yet (and I intend to drop a review again when I do) but I just wanted to say that I am so very glad that someone finally actually writes fic about that pairing! *cries* It's so rare!
    So when I read your summary I nearly choked from surprise on the water I was drinking at the time!
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  • From ANON - sam on August 31, 2006
    I really like the story and hope that you update it soon.
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  • From ANON - Suzaku24 on August 30, 2006
    I love your story so far......lots of yaoi.....need to get another chapter up as soon as possible.
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  • From ANON - Lexie on August 28, 2006
    Okay I swear, that was the best fucking I've ever read.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 28, 2006
    I...Cant ... wait ...till...THE NEXT CHAPTER UPDATE SOON !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - nanamen on August 28, 2006
    uuuuhhh... it's hot in here!!!!
    Darn, that's a hot fic! I like this pairing and I like youre story. I'll definetely read the further chappies too. There isn't enough ItaKaka fics.

    Pls keep up the good work

    (can't write a better rewiew... need to take a COLD shower just now)
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  • From ANON - Meemei on August 27, 2006
    Wow. When I first read the summary, I was like 'What!' because, is was such a foreign concept to me. It is so completely original (well not the mpreg pert, but Kakashi being pregnant, by Itachi no less) that I was like 'wow!' I think this will be a fic to read. Your an excellent writer and I must say, you are very original.

    Peace
    Meemei
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  • From ANON - Gwynhafra on August 26, 2006
    Hmm...you stopped at quite a cliffhanger. Update soon. ^^ . It was very nice.
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  • From ANON - KarMegas on August 23, 2006
    This is an interesting fic thus far. You appear to have a strong command on the English language even though it isn't your natural language. I don't know where this fic is going but i'm guessing that you do. I admit that i am a busy person and I can foresee that things wont be much better since college starts on Monday but nonetheless i am willing to try to be a beta-reader for our fic...although i don't believe that you really need one. Anyway, gat to go.
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