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Reviews for Kakashi Unmasked

By : xtranew
  • From ANON - taki on October 10, 2006
    Gotta love this one! It's a rare treat to find an Mpreg fic that was not only readable but also made senses. At first, I'm a little hesistant to read because the pairing (ItaKaka) was... kind of unusual. But now I'm glad that I've given it a chance. Lovely characterization, lovely smut, and overall lovely fic! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Horong on October 08, 2006
    WOW! What would I like? Ah hah! Since he's having twins, a baby boy and a baby gal! Wahahahah! I loved your idea of this fic! FINALLY an MPREG ItaKaka fanfiction!!!!
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  • From ANON - Horong on October 08, 2006
    I just finished the chapter where Kakashi 1st puked and I just can't help to come here and KYA!!! It was amazing! Thanks goes to your beta-readers as well. Rock on!
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  • From ANON - Levii on October 07, 2006
    This is very good. I can't wait for you to update. You took such an interesting turn with the Mpreg. Also, I like the Kaka/Ita pairing. It's unique and, in my mind, very possible. Itachi put too much effort into torturing Kakashi with the Mangekyo when they fought. There has to be something behind it. I cheer you on and present you with cookies! Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - adam on September 29, 2006
    Well written as always. Interesting primise and not so unbelievable. I can tell that you have put a great deal of thought into this story. That is a rare quality. So, lets see where you take this and have some fun.
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  • From ANON - miriam on September 29, 2006
    Your last chapter was good. As for this one, I liked it as well. I'm definitely interested to see what happens next! Can't wait for the next great update!
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  • From ANON - itachi's lover on September 27, 2006
    What can I say? Good job, I liked it a lot. The descriptions are perfectly written and not overly explained. You've done each character justus by capturing their characterization properly, especially Itachi, many fanfic's writers described him as insane, pyschotic, etc. They didn't try to dwelve in his chara further.

    I love how you add the detail throughout your story. You gave a reason for Itachi (sort of) drawn to Kakashi. Best wishes for you and your writing! Though in the end you leave me wondered when Itachi would make a comeback?
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  • From ANON - matsumoto on September 27, 2006
    This has got to be one of the best stories I've read with Kakashi as main chara (and uke ^^). I'm very impressed, normally mpreg putting me off because they tended to be unreasonable and exaggerated. At first the pairing (ItaKaka) kinda baffled me, but I'm now very glad that I've decided to read it till the very end.

    I love your writting style and how you have made this whole story flows.

    Can't wait for the next chapter. *rub hands in suspense*
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  • From ANON - heartless on September 25, 2006
    Love it so far!! Your writing style is flows really well and I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - essenceofthedark on September 25, 2006
    again :( (oh and I vote for twin boys ^^

    wow me liked this please update soon onegai?

    oh... and I wondered, could you please e-mail me when you have updated? I wanna read the continuation, but I'm not on this site too often... ;.;

    oh well, anyway (you don't have to, just a plead) good work and I'm looking forward to next chapter... Itachi will accept the kids, won't he? ne, ne?
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  • From ANON - essenceofthedark on September 25, 2006
    >.< it didn't let me post my whole review ;.; let's see if it works this time?

    wow me liked this
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  • From ANON - essenceofthedark on September 25, 2006
    wow, me liked this
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  • From ANON - Oztan on September 25, 2006
    This story is great. Twins too even better, double the trouble. I wonder how Itachi is going to find out his the going to be fathers of twins.

    I'm also voting for Twins Boys.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 24, 2006
    =) don't be worried this chapter was great!!!! Ahaha I really didn't expect the twins part though. Great idea! Would it be a boy and a girl? ohhhhh i can't wait till you update! >_< KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! =D
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  • From ANON - Sai on September 24, 2006
    Great chapter and story overall ^^. If I have one problem with it it's your use of italics, they are really REALLY off the mark. Most of the time you don't even need them, just something to consider.
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