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Reviews for Rise of a Kage

By : russianrocket
  • From ANON - Anon on October 20, 2006
    Well...the kidnapping part i like.
    i imagine hinata doesn't really think that way though...
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  • From ANON - babyish on October 10, 2006
    Aww, I was just getting into this story.. >.
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  • From ANON - CrazyRabidBlonde on October 10, 2006
    Gaara is MAJORLY OOC here. Please fix that, and then you will have a perfectly wonderful and enjoyable fic on your hands! ^^
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  • From ANON - Koi on September 24, 2006
    i love this fic it has a very gooood start to please update it
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 21, 2006
    awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - ramei-chan on September 18, 2006
    wui!! when will you update your fic?? i'm already excited you know... X3
    what will happen next?? what will happen next?! waaaaah!! X3
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 17, 2006
    *moraku
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 17, 2006
    who the hell is maraku?
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 10, 2006
    “I’m sorry, why are you angry at me?” I think that's where I stopped reading. I'm sorry, but... what the hell? This story is just... I can't find any words that won't insult you, so I'll just say what the hell. At first, I thought this was supposed to be sexy or something by the summary, then I changed my opinion to comedy once Gaara kept hitting the top of Hinata's head to knock her out or something (I can just imagine it as something from South Park when Cartman tried to kill his friends with a wiffleball bat and it didn't do anything), but then I realized you were being serious. I have to say I kind of felt bad for laughing when I thought it was comedy
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  • From ANON - BrucesGirl on September 03, 2006
    Hello. ^_^ Don't worry... I'm not a flamer. I like your imagination, and I think that a violent pairing between Hinata and Gaara definitely has some potential, but the fiction itself was a bit rushed to me. Is this your first try? For your first try, it's not overly terrible.

    You might want to try getting a Beta (a person who reads over your fics, helps correct grammar and throws you ideas to make it better, and try getting an MLA handbook and doing some practice runs. Also, Microsoft word has a pretty good grammar checker, and it helps with spelling too.

    Look up some online about Naruto. Do your research on Gaara's and Hinata's personalities. A great site to looks stuff up at is http://www.wikipedia.com They have everything you could possibly want to know about Naruto! Also, try http://www.absoluteanime.com

    Great try...and I'm sure that you'll get better as time progresses. Good luck!

    To the other jerk off reviewers:

    Instead of being asses and telling her what she sucks at with no help, why don't you give her some pointers? Maybe a couple of sites she can visit to help her work out a little? What a bunch of rude ass douche bags. God I'm ashamed there are people like you that read stories on this site. Give a good review for once. God.
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  • From ANON - yuriko on September 02, 2006
    this sucked major ass which is how you probably like it
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  • From ANON - Mic Mic on August 31, 2006
    Ooo it sounds interesting Gaara seems like he's been put into some kind of horny Shukaku mode and poor Hinata is the recipent. I like it though. Great job^^ Continue when u can
    Mic Mic
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  • From ANON - silversnowfox on August 28, 2006
    OK... I dont mean to be rude but... I must agree with the previous reviewer. This is definatly not good.
    I mean, where are you in Naruto? Are you only watching it on cartoon network? Because if so, they you are way behind most as to where the story is. If you are going to go back to a certain point, the say where it picks up at. Other then that, you really need to work on you technique and length.

    Over all, I give it a D-. Not even worth really reading actually. And that comes from a guy who spends a large ammount of his free time reading. To the point where he loves reading almost anything.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 27, 2006
    Dude this really sucks....like bad... how could you write such pathic thing...GOD YOU SUCK
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  • From ANON - BradenIsMyMonkey on August 25, 2006
    I like where this story is going, so please update whenever you can. ^-^
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