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Reviews for Darkness

By : sexydaisukekun
  • From Vague on February 28, 2008
    Hey there, I was reading your story and found that you have amazing talent as an author. This is why I am taking some time to invite you over to my website Laefe E-Publishing. I’m looking for young talented authors who have it in them to make creative original works.

    I know that you will automatically think that this might be a scam so to help ease your worries you can either check out my own profile on this site so you can see that I am the real deal, or you can add me to Windows Live Messenger that you can ask me any questions that may come to your mind.

    Laefe is a new online epublishing and you are among the first group of authors invited over to the site. I hope that you will consider it. You can find Laefe at http://itsuwari.com/bookstore/. My name is Emilia Baptiste, you can call me Emi when we talk on msn @ waterempath@hotmail.com. All the information you will need will be on the website and anything that is not clear you can ask me.

    All I ask is that you give Laefe a look and see if it might be where you would like to further progress in your quest to writing your ultimate story. Thank you for your time and I do hope to hear from you soon.

    Emi Baptiste
    Admin of Itsuwari.com and Laefe Epublishing.

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  • From on August 29, 2006
    DANG!!!! this is gettin hot lol.
    i've been sucked in so far it's just too late to
    go back...lol....i really really like it. i was a little disappointed
    cuz you din't update as fast as usual, but i understand...it's cool
    we've all got stuff to do...anyway i digress, i do hope you update soon.
    Plz email me when you do okay

    ^_^
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  • From on August 25, 2006
    This is getting real interesting.
    i was pretty surprised when Sasuke hit Naruto, it kind of hurt.
    but i was even more surprised when Naruto submitted to Yuki, isn't that considered cheating on Sasuke..
    ooo i can expect lots of drama from you huh? it seems almost as if theres going to be a bit of KakaSaku. Is there
    I'm not particularly fond of that pairing but i like it WAY better than SasuSaku. And what about this silver haired guy?
    i thought it was Kakashi at first but something is telling me it's not. ALthough i could be wrong. Well I'll be looking forward to
    your ending, and i'll definately keep commenting. Bye the way, i'd greatly appreciate it if you'd read my own publishing and tell me what you think. I kind of had the same problem as you and put too many chapters up at once, i'd like to get more reveiws before i continue. Anways i dgress lol...
    so like i said, Keep up the good work....i'll be waiting.. *Winks*

    ^_^
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  • From ANON - Ayame Yoshikawa on August 24, 2006
    o.O um i thought that Sasuke called naruto Baka no Kitsune (stupid fox) or just baka... not boku... boku is like saying "I"
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  • From ANON - Inuki on August 20, 2006
    By the way, what exactly does, boku no kitsune, and boku no usa mean,
    i've never heard those phrases before, not that im an expert i mean i freakin live in japan haha
    i've just never heard it..
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  • From ANON - Inuki on August 20, 2006
    OKAY that is one BADASS CLIFFHANGER...
    MAN...so 10 chaps in 2 days haha thas a hella lot. it took me like 6 weeks just do to 7 of my own.
    but that's prolly cuz i have to share the P.C with my brother and my uncle, and they're both World of Warcraft fans so they stay on for forever...ANYWAY!! i digresss...i do hope you decide to continue...i'll put like a million reveiws up if thats what it takes, you just say the word and i'll do it lol, cuz the show must go on, or in this case...the fic, haha
    don't let me down k
    i look forward to chapter 12

    ^_^
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  • From ANON - j_narusasu_c on August 19, 2006
    Please continue your story! i love it! GO! Dont get discouraged! GO!!
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  • From ANON - xBunni on August 19, 2006
    Ma ma~!! Please continue!! Ne~? OO I know it's a lot of hard work for daisuke-san to have gotten out 10 chappies in just 2 days, demo even if not all of us readers say it, we do all appreciate it greatly~ ^^ It's really refreshing and pleasing to see a writer who's willing to update so much in such a short time, it's quite rare as sometimes ficcies may take a month to update. Dakara, please continue, ne~? ^^ And it's not selfish of daisuke-san to want reviews. It's feedback that encourages people to continue as it allows them to know what they're doing right and wrong so that they can keep improving and experimenting with new styles, I feel the same with my deviations on my DA account~ ^^ Ja, gambatte ne, daisuke-san~ ^^
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  • From ANON - ladyfiend on August 19, 2006
    EWWWWWWWWW! i really need to get to sleep...that post i did above makes no sense...well, it does but it's really jumbled. i keep repeating myself and everything. ew. sorry about that. if you do end up updating, i'll try to have a better quality review up for you.

    til then.

    heart.LF.
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  • From ANON - ladyfiend on August 19, 2006
    i do find the story very interesting, but when you update so much in such a short span of time, you're not going to get as many hits. believe me. a lot of time, people pick up on a story because they check the site out every few days and don't normally have time to come on so frequently (which means they'll be like five or six chapters behind if your update rate is that high...an I know that I don't noramlly have the chance to sit down and read an entire set of chapters all the time). pace your self and you'll see that your reviews increase because most of the time, it's someone saying 'oh, this is really good. now update.' but they're not going to if you're going at such a fast speed.

    anyways, again. i found it interesting and a pretty good read. i'd like to read more, but ultimately that's up to you.


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  • From ANON - dana on August 18, 2006
    i was really surprised about the doggy-style, that was a new one. please take some vitamins, down an energy drink and keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 18, 2006
    Oh this is interesting. Naruto's little shower scene was HOT! Sasuke went from nice to evil quickly. I wonder what's up with that? Please update.
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