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Reviews for Unexpected Predicaments

By : BerserkZero
  • From Danse on February 13, 2007
    I love this fic, please write more to it or another one with Neji and TenTen, there is so many writers and not many NejiTen stories out there, well not great stories like this one :o)
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  • From ANON - AnimeGuy on January 06, 2007
    I agree with Tsukashi, good fic but several errors. As I could see, they were mostly just word substitution errors and not any big deal really. But yeah, going through it and correcting each error individually would make it a lot better. Anyway, I'd like to see some more chapters too. We need to see Neji take Tenten up on her offer to be on top. ;)
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  • From ANON - Cleo on October 13, 2006
    this story rocks u should really update it and post atleast 2 more chapters
    like everyone else is saying please update soon
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  • From ANON - gone insane on October 13, 2006
    please please please update this fic i love it so much i just keep reading it over and over again i can get enough of it

    update soon
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  • From ANON - Tsukashi on September 26, 2006
    My constructive critisism is: You have a lot of mistakes in here. Either re-proof it or have someone beta it for you. It detracts greatly from the story when you are trying to figure out why it says light until it clicks that the word is supposed to be like. Your chapters are short enough that you could combine them all and make this into a oneshot.
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  • From ANON - Jon on September 26, 2006
    u have to update soon i cant get enough of this story

    please please please update soon
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  • From Hestia on September 23, 2006
    Very cute! Love the conversation at the end!
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  • From ANON - lulu on September 21, 2006
    please keep writing this fic, theres never enought Neji/Tenten fics out there and this ones great. please update soon and keep writing
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  • From ANON - TaMmIzZ on September 17, 2006
    Please make a 4. chapter!!!
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  • From shariahxhaikuforever on August 20, 2006
    that was cute
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  • From ANON - mel on August 19, 2006
    Pretty neat. I hope that you continue the story.
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  • From ANON - prinlita on August 17, 2006
    I just finished chapter 2 the cliffhanger was so smart and yet so evil. Please update soon!!! I love the way you're writing about tenten and neji. Most fics don't have them treat each other as equals, and I like the comedic elements of your fic too. Keep writing, and I hope to see the next chapter soon.
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  • From ANON - misty eyes on August 17, 2006
    im soooo loving this fanfiction right now please updat soon i cant wait to read what happens
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  • From ANON - neji/ten fan girl on August 14, 2006
    omg dont stop writting this fic i love it
    PLEASEEEEE UPDATE SOON
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