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Reviews for The Affair

By : Houseki
  • From ANON - Ayeshagirl on August 12, 2006
    I agree with Naruto, anime shows are not cartoons! I mean, if someone insulted Gravitation like that I would definetly get into a slagging match with them!

    Amusing story, not enough to make me laugh or chuckle out loud but it has the potential, humour is hard to write on a constant basis. I mean, TV shows hire people to make up jokes! Unfortunately as an unpaid author you have to rely on your own skills.

    Hopefully we will get some hints towards the actual 'affair' soon and Hinita will die in childbirth leaving Naruto and Sasuke to raise the kid because she annoys the hell out me! Especially that twiddly thing she does with her fingers and how she always blushes when Naruto so much as looks at her!
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  • From ANON - Tom on August 12, 2006
    Great character development, love the way ytou take real life experiences and transpose them into your stories. Adds realism and depth, I enjoyed it!
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  • From DemonBlaze on August 12, 2006
    The story is great so far and I really love it. I love Sasuke's personality, as I've few AU stories that change his personality from what it is on the show. I agree with you that without all the 'brother-killing-clan-thing' Sasuke would probably have a personality something like the one you've presented. He's cool. Love Naruto too! He's kinda cold about Hinata. What's up with that?
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  • From ANON - nippondaisuki on August 11, 2006
    awwwwww man i love this fic *gives giant thumbs up* and why does sasuke have to be so mean to his employees? i mean its not very nice to throw flee medication at people..... my store manager neer throws fish bowls and air pumps at me ( not that i would want him to) but yeah is hinata pregnant 'cause i remember u sayin something bout them expecting ? or something like that and wouldnt she like confront him about totally blowing her off? but anyways i geuss im just rambling ....keep up the good work.^.^

    ---N.P
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  • From ANON - melissa elliott on August 11, 2006
    I loved the story. It had a very real feel to it. you go girl!
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  • From ANON - Tora on August 11, 2006
    waa!..Woot for Nauto/Sasuke ..bonding?..lol
    Poor poor Hinata...never thought she would be that clingy..but it's ok...cause no one likes her...ok I do a little bit but, pssh it's still only Hinata.
    and how 'bout that airline food...what's up with that?..o.o'

    --sorry..just rambling..another review..so you update faster ne?..hehe ^-^
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  • From Genderless on August 11, 2006
    Ah! That’s so mean for Hinata! It makes me cringe. But I'm gonna trust that there's more to it then you've so far written.
    Naruto was so cute with the water bed, and then the silly little argument over the typing.
    It's little things like that, that make a story for me; it's not just the big scenes but the slightly eccentric, attractive moments that happen when everything's normal - relatively speaking – that keep you reading a fic. You have that down to a fine art.
    Please write more.
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  • From ANON - Rei on August 11, 2006
    That was wonderful ^-^ it keeps getting better and better.

    Gods men are such pigs!
    See I was playing volley ball in Gym and this guy kicks the F-ing ball right in my tit!

    Guys think just because they have balls and chicks don't it don't hurt well there dead ass wrong....sorry...*twitch*

    Also Major Game freaks who arn't anime otaku's and only like a few anime...are asses to...a friend of mine I was ready to ring his neck I might add was like people who right Anim Fanfiction arn't anime Fans at ALL!

    ok sorry but seriously your fic is getting better and better and I look forward to always reading more.
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  • From ANON - Heidi on August 10, 2006
    This story is soooo yummy! And it's written well, too! Can't wait for the next chapter!

    Happy Writing!

    ~Heidi
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  • From ANON - Tora on August 10, 2006
    awwww....My poor cheerleader got like....blown up T_T
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  • From ANON - Tora on August 10, 2006
    Woot for side fics! *o/*
    | yay
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    hehehe...hope you write more soon..cause I luffs it x3
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  • From Genderless on August 10, 2006
    I really love the direction this stories taking - I'm not really sure what to expect.
    The little ficlet was cool; it would be nice if things worked that way, at least for some.
    I really enjoy the way you write the characters, and though they are obviously different from the manga and anime, it's more like what they could have been, which is perfectly right. The only issue I have is with Hinata - I hope you don't hurt her to bad.
    The way Naruto and Sasuke interact is wonderful - the relationship feels familiar even as it's new, to them and the situation.
    Please keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Skyrail on August 10, 2006
    Mooooore! I love this n__n
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  • From ANON - nippondaisuki on August 10, 2006
    hey i love this fic and i just think the story is kinda hilarious and the fact that everyone is an anime fan make it better and next time i have a beer i will definatly have to see if it smells like pedigree.lol>
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  • From ANON - Kitsune_19 on August 10, 2006
    Wow that was really really good and i love the way your building up to the main event. I cant wait till Naruto cheats on Hinata with Sasuke. I hope you update your next chapter really soon. Oh and did i say -I LOVE THIS STORY-. lol bye.
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