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By : Houseki

From ANON - Rei on September 10, 2006
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I already read this chapter XD
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From ANON - severedwings on September 07, 2006
*Smirks*...teehee...I was actually away on vacation! Sorry I missed your posting, but it was quite the treat to come home to! I went to a convention, Dragon*con to be exact. I had such a blast! You should check out the web site... www.dragoncon.org . It's an EVERYTHING convention! This year I went, for one of the days, as Itachi! I had my contacts special ordered to be ready for the con...DAMN they hurt for a bit, but once the outfit was completed the pain was nil compared to the results! Email me sometime, if you like, and I will be able to show you the piccys of the fox! Her name was bones...lol...she was all bones when we got her.

*Inhales deeply before I pass out from rambling*...now ON WITH THE PRAISINGS....DAMN girl, it was hot and great....and I soooo want to throttle you for stopping it. BUT, I do respect your reasons for ceasing...the action per se. In so many fanfics I have read, it's a rarity to see the dreaded 'M' word. Morals, lady's and lad's, morals. It's good of you, not to mention refreshing, to read them in this fic. *Grins impishly*...although I cannot say I complain about the hott shounen action, it's just always nice to someone think when on the way to sex. Go you! *Lazily licks fangs*...but, just remember...I will throttle you next time if they don't.... X_X funk!

Ja na for now!
SW

AND THANKS! ANOTHER SHIPMENT OF RAMEN AND ICE CREAM IS WELL ON IT'S WAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - digi-girl on September 05, 2006
This was a very nice chapter, so conflicted, i like. ^_^' Poor Sasuke wants to get more intimate with Naruto, but his consence just won't let him. Shame on Naruto though, wanting to have an affair, but that is what the story's about, and boy does it make for a good read.
Your weekend sounded totally fun, much better than mine wich consisted of working and horrible headaches and sneezing due to allergies. Stupid country air and it's pollen, it's pretty all right, but it'll be the end of me one day.
Any way, I'm looking forward to the next chapter, and hoping it'll be up relativly soon.
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From Redwitch05 on September 05, 2006
So I JUST got around to reading your fanfic, and guess what? I LOOOOOOOOVE It ^^ You got me so hooked that even when I'm rediculously busy with school work I think of your updates. I think I started reading the other day. So I was so happy to see you have updated after coming home from school. I'm really sorry for not giving you a comment the other day. But the site was having one of its downtimes and I had to go work on my Sociology. Plus is was raining so I turned off the computer incase the power decided to go out on me. Reading your story makes me want to leave you so many comments, but alas, I don't have the time. Too busy b/c I have two exams coming up. Firstly, the way you have Sasuke formed into this great guy makes me melt. Gah, I love you. and Shikamaru truly is the type to be bi. And what is this? They also have Tsunade that crashes with them sometimes? Damn awesome. And holy cow, all those animals sound incredibly hectic to deal with. I, for one, am a HUGE fan of repiles. But my mom.....geez. She's terrified of them. I had to hide a garden snake (a baby) in my pocket for the longest time just so my mom wouldn't make me get rid of it. (how do you tell if it's a boy or a girl? O.o) Anyways, I was ten years old. But I've had a couple of other snakes afterwards. I'd love to have a cobra. They seem so cool. My mom hates lizards, so I don't think I'd ever get one of those. I use to have dogs, but we had to give them away for some reason. Let me tell you where my biggest love lie. Felines. I went through so many cats that it's rediculous. There was this stray pregnant cat that had come to me around the time that my two other cats were pregnant and she had her babies in my backyard. A stray mother from before had recently abandoned two kitties with me, so my family and I had no choice but to mother the poor babies. One of the mommy cats had a litter of 7 kittens, the other 5, and the stray, 5. The stray mommy stayed and we kept her along with her kittens. Now, incase you're not keeping track of the number, that's 19 kittens and three mothers. Well, put that aside, we had recently lost our poor Grandma (we called her Faded Mama b/c of her light golden coat. She was attacked by these two visious dogs (she was protecting her two kittens). We were so devastated (mainly my mother, my neighbor, and I) Faded Mama had been with us through about 6 Cat generations. Every litter she'd have 7 kittens until the very last before she died. She had two. So that's 24 cats now. Well, one of the cats were sick so my neighbor took her to the vet that she's been going to for 6 years. In short, b/c I realize that my comment is becoming a life story -.-, the kitten was constipated and the damn vetenarians didn't know that, and she ended up dying. Poor thing was only two and a half weeks old. T.T So that goes to 24 cats. Btw, that is NOT including Buttercup, Monkey, Pumpkin, Brian, and 6 other cats that I can't remember their names b/c they're in my neighbors house. Moving on, since Faded Mama died and soon after one of her TWO kittens followed, the depressing toll got the best of us and we put in a newspaper that we have kittens that we'd like to give away. (We have so many dogs that surround our neighborhood that it's not safe to have any cats around.) After about a month and a whole lot of interviewing (b/c we don't just give out our cats to whomever. We interview them and ask them trick questions) we gave away every single cat. But not the house cats. They stayed with my neighbor. and btw, my neighbor left that Vet that she went to b/c of what happened to Faded Mama's kit. so sad. I have a new cat now. And I don't plan to have my neighbor find out. Otherwise she'd probably try and find him a home, and I don't want that. I want him to stay with me. he's a real cutie with fluffy gray hair. You know the type that have those really puffy tails. It's so gorgeous. Anyways, he's kinda shy when he's around me b/c I recently started trying to communicate with him (he's a stray. I think we just attract strays. Or maybe I do atleast. They always somehow fine me) Anyways, I call him Kakashi b/c he looks like a lazy cat with a scarecrow kind of hairdue. We also have about 15 different kind of fish. None that I'm too big on. I really want a Japanese Fighting fish. Not really a reason why besides the fact that I heard they're really neat to have. Hmmmm, I should really look them up.

Any who, ummm, I don't think I'm going to get any rabbits only b/c ever since my rabbit, Burberry, was killed by a cat (my dad let him out of the house to get his exercise and he got attacked a few hours after), I was left utterly depressed. And I mean it. I was on my roof late at night watching the stars and all of a sudden I hear this screechy sound and I thought it was a rat at first b/c I never heard how my rabbit squealed. It only about a second before my brain came up with "Burberry". And I'm telling you. The moment my brain registered that it was my bunny I jumped my ass off that roof (I live in a story but jumped off the patio) and began running blindly in the dark (I have a HUMONGOUS backyard.) I caught up so fast that this Big stray, black, cat dropped my gray bunny and jumped over my neighbors fence. I didn't realize till I sat down on the grass and held my rabbit in my lap that Burberry had a broken ankle and pierced holes in his neck. I began sobbing and trying to pet him and I was just so terrified to lose him. I mean I was on the verge of a breakdown. It didn't take till 15 minutes later that my rabbit began shaking hard before he froze stiff. I swear....on pure instinct, I was going to drop him and get away from his body. It just....it terrified me. The stiffness...the shaking. Most of all, knowing that he was gone b/c I had had him for over a year. I'm still sad whenever I think about the story. It happened about 7 years ago, but I .....it feels like it happened too recent for it to be that long back.

Oh wow, this is supposed to be my comment on your wonderful story and I turned it into a drama filled biography about myself. XD I'm sorry. What can I say about it? It's so wow. Why isn't Naruto more talkative when he's around Sasuke? It seems like he's always bored or something. Is it b/c he's just crushing on him so bad that he never knows what to say? That last chapter with him attacking Sasuke with his body drove my brain out the window till the chapter ended with them sleeping all cuddled up. It was so hot. I congratulate you. And you also had Sasuke try and stop Naruto, telling him that they can't do what they're doing and that he had Hinata. Sasuke's conscience is such a realistic touch to add. I mean, I wouldn't want someone who is known to cheat to get their hands on me. Personally, I don't trust Naruto. Not in your story anyways. I don't like players. They seem like they're only after sex. Even making Naruto, my favorite character EVER into this jerk, will make me hate him. So I'm glad that Sasuke didn't use his bad jugements and allowed his self to just bathe in the hotness of it all. (But let me add that the making out was so fucken hott and I want more ^^) *cough* I did NOT just say that. Where was I? oh yes, I don't like Hinata. She doesn't like the ppl that Naruto work with b/c they're girls and she doesn't like Sasuke b/c he's gay. What's her problem? She can't judge a person like that. So cruel. But still, she's pregnant, she's allowed to have her moods. But Naruto ain't allowed to just pounce on the next hot ass that he see's. Is that why he picked a guy? He doesn't want to worry about getting someone else pregnant? Does Neji come into this at all? That IS his cousin that's pregnant, after all. You know, I�m truly lost. There isn�t any kind of a win/win thing going on. Naruto can�t just leave Hinata. It seems so wrong. He needs to get married to her and raise his kid. And it doesn�t help that he�s already cheating�� I am soooo sorry. This is what happens when you take Sociology. GAAAAAAAAAH *pulls hair*

��.*sighs* Gomen nasai. You are doing a terrific job and I love it to death. And I love the smut. (Hopes to see more in the future) *cough*
Man, I truly cannot wait for another update. I know you hear that a lot, and I�m sorry. I should be working on my own chapter, but dammit, this story is amazing.

I�ll end my essay of a comment now, or in fear that you�ll be terrified to ever hear from me.

~Ria ^.~

*scans the comment from top to end. *whistles* I think that�s long enough for someone that is just getting to comment, ne? Hope to comment you later Houseki ^^ =huggles= Keep up the wonderful work and ignore whatever that I may have said that seemed negative towards what Naruto is doing, even if we both know that it�s incredibly wrong and bad and frowned upon, etc*

***Much Love***

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From Genderless on September 05, 2006
Damnit, you're pitting almost my two favourite pairings against each other! How am I supposed to decide who I want to win out?
And plus, Naruto isn't coming off too well in this � cheating jerkass.
But once again, it's all utterly captivating and enjoyable.
I'm so glad that Sasuke got back in bed with him, though Naruto has some explaining to do.
Write more soon.
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From ladygizarme on September 05, 2006
ok, everything i said in IM while i was beta'ing still applies, plus: damn i'm glad i worked in a 24 hr store so we never had to "close" and i didn't hafta put up with *my* supervisor/manager bitchin me out over shit.. i'd have barely kept my job for my "attitude" coming out at that.. nope, couldn't work for a sasuke.. and DAMN naru really is a lush.. and ewwwwww off-off brand vodka *blacks out from just thinking about it* omt and then drunken-horny-hotness dude.. ok, you already know what made me lmao in that bit, but other than that, putting it in the context of the actual FIC *cough* it was *so hot* gahh and i know it's awful of me but damn sasu's conscience there >.> but then.. err.. considering what naru had to go and do next.. i'm glad more make out didn't ensue after *gags* err so.. lol it's been awhile since i rev'd on aff instead of tonfa.. post this chap there already woman!!

*huggles*

~ crys
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From DemonBlaze on September 05, 2006
That was great! And yeah, Naruto was way more handsy in this chapter. Was it just the alcohol, or was it something else? Because, before, there was no alcohol involved. Hmmmm, very interesting.
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From loche606 on September 05, 2006
O.O............O.O wow.. ok then. *ahem* ummm you know who i hate? Shika... and you know why??? cause his punk ass always seems to be gone... wtf is goin on with that dude? Troublesome.
you know what else? Sasuke... would make me quit a job due to bitchiness.. that would make me crazy... anyone who can reprimand me for 10 minutes and isnt my parent...yeah, wouldnt deal with it well...

but anyways... awesome chapter... always is... you rock it out baby! *hands on head* KAWAII.. funny! hot! yeah, you know.. all that jazz...
well, it is time for bed now
oyasumi nya
-s.n.
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From ANON - Rei on September 05, 2006
It was freakin awsome!

So here I am 2:30am no 3am in the mornign and can't sleep on a school morning/night
and No matter what I do I can't fall asleep I ever tried warming up milk XD...

But one thing came out good me reading your new chappy ^-^

oh good news...
soo teh freshmen at my school look like boble heads (cracks up)
they ahve like these overly huge heads on these little stick bodies and then they carry around like two ton book bags....

I know I was a freshmen only recently but still....I was playign volleyball one day in gym and these freakin immature idiotic bobble headed freshmen took out ball so I ran after the shortest one and screamed like a little girl and dropped the balla nd ran (cracks up) it was freakin hilarious!

Oh and this story is gettign better and better every time I read it ^-^
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From ANON - Mimi Hyuuga on September 05, 2006
*drools* Oh damn that was HOT, lol. Wow. Ok, I must say that I for one am loving the direction the story is going in! This was a really great chapter, if only Sasuke's conscience hadn't ruined everything
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From ANON - saiika-chan on September 05, 2006
I didn't realize this was an AU fic when I first decided to read it. Something interesting about me and AU fics...I've tried reading a few over the years, but I didn't like them. Was weirded out by them, really. I figured Hell would freeze over before I actually found an AU fic that I liked. Well, Satan's upping his thermostat right now, because I am HOOKED on this story. I don't think I've even read a non-AU Naruto fic that I liked more than this...so, I don't what it is about this story that I love so incredibly much, but I am eagerly anticipating an update for this wonderful fic. *applauds* Well done!
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From ANON - eepmonster on September 05, 2006
So I'm reading this and I'm like...HP, pets, plants, adult swim, anime, screwdrivers, and APC???? Man these are my kind of people. Hahaha. Anyway, I'm loving the story, very well written. Thanks so much! Especially if you're working and have little spare time...*hugs!*
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From ANON - Singyoursorrow on September 05, 2006
all i can say is HOLY SHIT THAT WAS A GOOD MAKE OUT SESSION BIT. above average...mmm. anyway i think that this story is pretty good, but you seem to be giving a little more oc leverage to Sasuke then i'm used to seeing, but i'm digging it, so it's ok.
P.S I WANT SASUKE IN MY PANTS. and naruto wouldn't be to bad either.
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From ANON - Hestia on September 03, 2006
Well you beg so prettily for reviews, have to write one. I'm a fan of more adult stories, but you managed to get me to read 9 chapters without even a kiss or grope yet, so I have to say you're a good writer. But I don't like Naruto as a slime ball so much--can you think about giving Hinata some better fate? I guess Naruto has to be slime to keep the tension going, but Hinata is pregnant and deserves a break. What can I say--I like NaruHina as well as the two Naruto and Sasuke combos. Seriously though, should Sasuke be getting a bit more aroused by the tickling? I guess he's too proud to let himself get turned on . . .
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From ANON - digi-girl on September 03, 2006
hurray for the new chapter! Naruto's getting daring but Sasuke's still weary, it's getting intresting. I'd say more but I've got one nasty headache. So with that I say nice chapter and I'm looking forward to the next installment.
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