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Reviews for The Affair

By : Houseki
  • From ANON - renaru on March 31, 2008
    ahhh.. finally. even though i read this last night, it is still hot to me.
    Its nice to have been a part of this fic the whole time and all, but i am kinda sad that it is over
    its been a good fic, and i really look forward to the epilogue. its gonna rock. just like you do.

    awesome dude...glad you finished it.. now it is time that you work on another fic...TTAATT. or BP... mmm BP...or Rain? lmaoooo
    pick one

    love ya
    ren
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  • From ANON - Keri on March 09, 2008
    Ok, so here it is...my review! Just like I promised!

    I can't believe you ended it there! *fan girl squeel* omg! That last chapter was very intense. I really enjoyed this fiction so far (you'd better be finishing!). You had just the right amount of raw dirt that it was exciting/hot rather then down right overbearing dirty wise. The story is cute, light and yet still has the right amount of mounting sexual tension that made this last chapter...so satisfying? lol I did enjoy hearing the story from Sasuke's point of view. Although I don't read a whole lot of fan fiction, it was still interesting to see Sasuke as 'human' being with a wide range of real emotions and quirks. (rather then his dark, moody and agonzing depressing self shown in the anime)You've inspired me to start writting again:) And that in itself should tell you how much I have enjoyed this so far. I hope Sasuke finds the love he's been waiting for, god knows he deserves it:D

    Cheers!

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  • From ANON - Miranda on January 04, 2008
    *cries* It's been so long since The Affair's been updated; please don't go on hiatus! TT_TT I really, REALLY love your story. I seriously check it every time I turn the computer on. I know it must take a lot of your time, but I'm sure there are many of us fans who would die the most horrible death (death by lack of amazing fanfics) without you!~ ;__; *grovels*
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  • From 757 on September 29, 2007
    Awesome chapter!

    I want to know what will happen next!
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  • From novaline on September 09, 2007
    This story is just sooo good =D Although i feel sorry for Hinata but Sasuke and Naruto are just totally hot together. Looking forward to more of this story and keep up the good work.

    A really great story that it very well written. Thank you for sharing
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  • From ANON - ren on August 26, 2007
    yeah.. i snuck on, and thought... i gotta read it...
    ok...
    so...
    there were a few parts in this where i dropped my fork. (currently eating chicken salad and mac and cheese...mmmm) and a few parts where i literally bit down on my fork...and you KNOW i hate that feeling/sound...but it wasnt in a REALLY bad way.. i was just...ahem....picturing certain situations and whatnot.. naruto is a sly soul isnt he? and poor sasuke...got to get off and then just go to bed...tough life.

    but i love it sista.. please write more when you get the chance.. between your training classes and extra work.
    much love
    renaru

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  • From on August 19, 2007
    YAY U UPDATED!!!!!!!!!! ^O^ now more pwease and get rid of hinata shes getting in the way of them. poor naruto
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 08, 2007
    I fuckin LOVE this story!!
    I love Sasuke, Naruto, how Shika's Sasuke's roommate and especially your writing!
    I know, morally speaking, I shouldn't want Sasuke and Naruto together, but... well, they're two (Sasuke being IS the hottest) of the most fucking hot characters ever and the way you write just... *takes deep breath* they HAVE to get togeter!
    I can't tell you how much I can't wait for you to update!! So, please do your best and thanks for the story!
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  • From ANON - fangirl on August 06, 2007
    Wow...this story is pissing me off!! Not your writing or anything...it's VERY well done. What's pissing me off are the choices the characters are making, because it's SO believable. Naruto is a downright selfish jerk (isn't Sasuke the usual one with that role...it's awesome that you switched it up!) Hinata knows there's a problem in the relationship, and instead of kicking him in the balls, it sounds like she's doing the whiny naggy thing that causes most people to drift even further away. And above all, Sasuke, I think I'm maddest at him because he KNOWS that this is BAD and he keeps inviting Naruto back. Hinata is in Naruto's bed and Sasuke lets Naruto into his. WTF?!?! So, like I said, the story is so aggravating because I know where Sasuke's coming from and how hard it is to push someone that you're so comfortable away even when you know it's the right thing to do. I can't wait for more updates and see where this is going to go. I like you're writing style and how realistic you've made everything. Well done!
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  • From TFizzle on August 05, 2007
    I have just come across this story and read thru all *13*Chapters and I must say.....
    I looooove this story!!!!!I like what you have done to Sasuke,even his *girly* side...
    But,just out of curiousity,I have to ask 'whats the back story with Hinata and Naruto?'
    Is he really a big slut?Was the baby a trap to keep him interested?Just wondering why
    Naruto is going elsewhere.....Like I said,I'm loving what you have done with the characters
    anyway......But,I hope that you get rid of Naruto's *discomfort* soon,LOL!!!!!!!!!!
    UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Lila on August 03, 2007
    KEEP GOING and update when u can :)
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  • From Silkylove on August 02, 2007
    Gah, totally in love with this story. Mind you i'm going stupid Naruto doing stupid things, Choose damn you!!! but if it was quick and easy, it wouldn't be real and would be no point to the story, so as much as i hate the suspence and the torture I am enjoying the story completly. Can't wait for your updates! *.*
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 02, 2007
    That was disappointing. Awaiting the next chapter.
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  • From gaara89 on August 02, 2007
    Please update this soon!
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  • From ANON - Rei on August 02, 2007
    OMG HAWT!

    But for once I can't help but hate Hinata in this fic!
    I usually love sweet poor innocent hinata and you made her some horrible fiend
    from hell...kinda like how people make Sakura and Ino the fangirls from hell...
    Oh well please update sooner next time.
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