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Reviews for The Affair

By : Houseki
  • From ANON - digi-girl on August 09, 2006
    Hmmm, intresting...A Sasuke PoV story. I like it, really I do. Maybe it's beacuse even though Sasuke's still a bastard, he's a anime fan like so many of us reading; or maybe because the story has the promise of an affair, i love reading about affairs. How is it that i can hate real-life affairs, but love them in storys? Eh, who cares? It just gives me more of an incentive to read the up coming chapters.
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  • From ANON - Rei on August 09, 2006
    Don't worry about the chap not comming out yesterday
    I wouldn't have been able to read it anyways I had
    my four year old nephew over...XD

    And Today is great timing heh....this whole waking at 5:30am
    is throwing my 'I'm all here' thingy....
    and I'll tell you when Im tired I can act pretty damn wierd.
    To much Sugar makes me *rolls wrist* slutty.
    Caffine Makes me tired.
    Sugar little or not depending on my surroundsing doesn't make me hyper.
    and
    Tiredness makes me...wierd/slutty/pissed off....

    a wonderful way to start the day..

    Can't wait for more ^-^
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  • From ANON - Pic's Pixie on August 09, 2006
    Ohhh i so love this story, very interesting idea havn't come across it b4, and so true about that whole 'anime not cartoon' thing, and i absolutely love how adorable sasuke and naruto were being at the end all cuddly and stuff, hope to see more of that , maybe so more then cuddling action :P *wink wink* but i do wonder? who's seme? i'm a huge sasuke being seme fan but i like both please update soon, loves it muchly
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  • From ANON - aimee on August 09, 2006
    such a cool story, i no they're ooc but i still love it, its nice to see them in different settings once in a while. i never normally write these things as i don't know what to say without sounding completely lame-ass about it, but decided that this def needed some recognition and i cant wait for the 'cute lil shits' ^_^ to get it together!! aimee, x.
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  • From ladygizarme on August 09, 2006
    lmao! now you know how hard it is for me not to ramble on for a page when i do my rev' rep's! esp. to people i know, or my fav reviewers! it's funny to see you do it too *giggles*

    anyway, yay for you putting ch4 up *happy dance* i totally giggled at the cartoon vs. anime thing, and sasuke's guilty pleasure bein' reading/writing fanfics XD aaannnd *ahem* i can totally relate to sasuke's need to sink his teeth into somethin w/vamp movie.. though as you know, gender wouldn't/doesn't deter ME muwahahahahaa (only my *excellent* self control can save you there heheh)

    and now.. yes, you should write ch6... and ch7!! and.. lol however much else.. nyaaa i need to get my ass to work on ch5 then, eh? weeeell.. i will soon! got a few more up'ds to read nya..
    *huggles*
    ~ lg (lmao caught myself almost signing my real name, like on icaf posts *facepalm*)
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  • From ANON - Shikan on August 09, 2006
    This is very good! I hope you'll continue soon. One question: the baby that Hinata is expecting...? O.o Isn't that an obstacle...?
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  • From ANON - katwingz on August 09, 2006
    Not logged in right now, but after reading your rant, I thought I'd do the honorable thing and bestow upon you my appreciation and admiration for your fic, and your generosity in uploading three chapters in one day. Not too many people do that; mostly, I think, because the majority of people tend to write their fics chapter by chapter, and that can be somewhat...time-consuming. I myself have been unable to write anything for over a year now.
    If it's any consolation to you, I've watched as other authors put up fics and had no one review them for DAYS, even though the stories got a decent number of hits. So obtaining 8 (not counting this one and the three others that have been added since) in one day is pretty darned fantastic, if ya ask me. Here's hoping that you don't abandon all hope like so many of us have - keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - leasan on August 08, 2006
    Hmm... I like it even though not much happens. I guess it is supposed to go slow at first, so it's fine with me. I like the tiny hints you put here and there, like Naruto riding around aimlessly when he should spend time with Hinata, but it's obvious he prefers to be with Sasuke. I like stories that demand that I use my braincells :)
    I really, reeeealy like the casual, down-to-earth style you keep the narration in. It's Sasuke's POV so it should be expected. I miss humour a bit because I just always considered him to be a dry humour guy. But hey, maybe he just need to loosen up a bit? let's give him some more time ^_^
    But there's one thing that seems a bit off to me. Sasuke is a bit too amiable and outgoing, not because I care about canon, no, no! Don't get me wrong, I'm sick of avenger-boy characterisation! What I'm pointing out is that he's so nice that the fact he doesn't have many friends doesn't seem all that plausible you know?
    But all in all I like it and I'm very curious what's going to happen next, so hopefully you'll get tons of reviews and you'll update soon :)
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  • From ANON - Germaine(too damn lazy to sign in) on August 08, 2006
    The plot is interesting...but you know..you ought to re-read the whole thing...It's really confusing in some places...Sometimes I can't really tell who's POV your writing in until you mention someones name...you might get more people reading the fic that way...

    You can always send me an email or something if you want any help(not that I would be much help but either way)
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  • From ANON - ladygizarme on August 08, 2006
    hmm.. yeah dude, i went to check your reviews this morning *being nosy beta again* and i was like :( no new reviews :( :( *sigh* so i hope you get some more today so you'll put up ch 4!!

    anyway, still lmao at the cowboy boots trippin naru up :p and his 'oh-so-convenient' habit of driving around near sasuke's house.. *cough* can't wait for you to put up next chap!

    *sends subliminal message to all readers* reviewreviewreviewreview

    lol.. not so subliminal :p
    *hugs*
    ~ lg
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  • From ANON - Rei on August 08, 2006
    Dude I love you not only to you update fast but
    you have such a good taste in what you write...
    anyways I hope tehre will be a new chappy when I get home from school tomarrow gods knows I probably be having computer/fanfiction with draws until I get to my baby *pats computer*
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  • From ANON - Cindy on August 07, 2006
    I thought it was Naruto living with Shika and Kiba with Hinata!
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  • From ANON - Rei on August 07, 2006
    Its getting better and better everytime.
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  • From ANON - Tora on August 07, 2006
    Waha!....Sasuke likes Harry Potter!...~imagines sasuke in a wizards hat and robes~...seems like he'd fit right in at hogwarts...meh Xp...did I sound like too much of a nerd there?...ah well. Great story though..hope to read more :3
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  • From ladygizarme on August 07, 2006
    lmao dude, you DID post it!! (at least ONE of us posted today like we said) it was so good dude, i loved it.. and yeah, sasuke OOCness, but i still love it and can see him being this way if he was more mellow, so it's all good.. and lol, naruto was very naruto *cough*

    ..so good i completely didn't do any beta-ing lol,*forgot*, so mayhaps i shall go do that and leave edits in our IM as per usual (got some tenses to watch, my dear ;D) so now, i MUST read more!! and i wonder when *ahem* kakashi comes into all this.. heh :p but anyway, i'm so glad this lil story seems to write itself, so you better continue on this roll cuz i don't wanna hafta wait some BP-like-months for more, tezzie dammit!!

    ok, /rant
    lol
    *hugs*
    ~ lg
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