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Reviews for Inane Affections

By : boyarina
  • From JadedGothButterfly on July 31, 2008
    P.S.I'm Not Into Yaoi/Yuri And I Haven't Read Even One Fic Without Their Trace.I Don't Know WHat You're Planning But I Won't Mind If You Add A Li'l Yaoi Into It - I'll Just Skip Those Parts.What I'm After Is HinaXNeji and HinaXGaara. *Shivers With joy*
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  • From JadedGothButterfly on July 31, 2008
    I Am SO Loving This Fic!I Find So Few Good Hinata Fics...I Love Her.And I Don't Mind Whoever You Patch Her Up With...But Gaara And Neji?!OMG.Absolute Bliss!I'm Still Trying To Find A HinaXShika Fic.No Luck. =(

    Please,Update Soon!
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  • From thelittleone on July 19, 2007
    You've got a nice story going, but I'd like to point out a few flaws. (If you don't mind of course) The biggest problem I noticed was that you change tenses alot in the middle of a sentence. A story reads better if you stay exclusively past tense or present tense. Another thing I noticed is that you rely on paranthesis too much, it distracts from the plot. The only issue I have with the actual story is that Hinata seems to be a bit OOC, but other than that it seems pretty sound. You might consider getting a beta, it could really help. Hope you don't mind the constructive critisisms. ^_^
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  • From ANON - didi74 on July 07, 2007
    POOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA !!!!
    I love this one it is so FUNNNNNNNNNYYYYYYYYYYYY !
    I can't wait to read the next chapter, I hope there will be more Gaarah fun lol

    could you say you put the next one ? pretty please ?
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  • From Decorinne on February 19, 2007
    Brilliant story so far! I do hope you continue and soon. Is there a list I can get on to be notified when you update? In any cae keep up the awesome work. I love Gaara's amusement and Neji's overprotectiveness. They make me smile :)
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  • From Rianestorm on February 17, 2007
    I hope it's threesome! But, either way the story rocks, I hope you update soon.

    Love!
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  • From ANON - Trin on January 09, 2007
    Hi there!
    That is a promising story, I hope to read more in future.
    One word of advice. I liked it how you changed the POV in the first three chapters, but you should take care. Sometimes it is not really obvious who is speaking if you change it too often. You should take care with the tenses as well, because you keep falling back and forth beween present and past tense... I'd tell the whole story in past tense.
    The characters of Neji, Gaara and Hinata are very well written. Very much in character. Its fun to read!
    Thanks
    Trin
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  • From ANON - Cookie on January 02, 2007
    I like the complex tension between Neji and Hinata Its obvious that Hinata isn’t the ONLY one that needs some kind of physical closure (smirks). Frankly, I don’t know what Neji is going to be able to do about it – at least Hinata has an option (Gaara). Maybe not Hinata’s BEST option, but right now Neji just doesn’t seem to know what to do with himself (lol)! Keep writing – I want to see what happens with these three. Or at least how Neji is going to handle his “problem” with his cousin (lol)!
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  • From ANON - morwen re on December 06, 2006
    yay! another chapter, just as the stupid finals are overly stressing me out! i love this fic and this chapter brought a smile to my face after an especially hard exam! please, please update again soon!
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  • From ANON - You don't wanna know. on December 03, 2006
    I took pity on you and decided to review. I like how your writing this and you have a good writing style. I'm curious about how you're going to continue, and I hope you do soon. Make sure Hinata gets to kick some ass!
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  • From ANON - Kiba-kun on November 29, 2006
    LMAO!! That was halarious with that part about the jeitemono! Okay, serious talk now (somewhat). I really like the way you're developing the emotions and relationship between Hinata and Neji, it was really cute with the one-armed hugs and stuff. *huggles self* I can't wait for the next chappie. Please post it soon! And you were right, the review button didn't bite me or kill me, otherwise I wouldn't be able to write this. haha! I thought it was a riot, at least...... *awkward silence ensues* moving right along....
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  • From ANON - Mittens4memoree on November 26, 2006
    oh, and by the way, I hate how people use the word 'smut' because it's uncivilized, and also, you, and yes, I mean YOU, Mr./Ms. Author-person, should already have a high self-esteem because you have 25--no, wait!!--26 FREAKIN' reviews!!!

    Ok. I'm done now.

    ^-^ reverts back to irresistable Hamtaro-Mode.
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  • From ANON - Mittens4memoree on November 26, 2006
    oops. here's the other eye:
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  • From ANON - Mittens4memoree on November 26, 2006
    I don't like cheerleading much though. Stop that rah-rah thing, Author-person. Pooh! >_
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  • From ANON - Mittens4memoree on November 26, 2006
    Omwah! I like snorting too! ^-^
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