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Reviews for Inane Affections

By : boyarina
  • From ANON - Isane on November 25, 2006
    I have now sucsessfully clicked on the 'submit review' link.

    I like your fic, both hinata and neji are abit ooc somtimes, but considering the time skip, it dosen't really matter. I'm (as always) looking forward to the next chapter.

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  • From ANON - Pastel on November 25, 2006
    Really nice chapter. Neji is so cute.
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  • From ANON - padoopadoop on November 24, 2006
    I'm happy to see that you haven't abandoned this story. It's very fun, and I really am enjoying the quirky nature of your writing. Please continue.
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  • From ANON - Donedin on November 24, 2006
    OMG! You actually posted. You ACTUALLY posted. Yes I know you said that you didn't even think that you would be able to, but WOW! Man, I thought you died or somthing. SOOO glad you posted, please try and do it more often. I beg you, ill be waiting for the next one! ^_^
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  • From ANON - frizzy197 on November 24, 2006
    awsome fic! can't wait for next ch.
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  • From ANON - babyish on October 10, 2006
    OoOoOoOoh! Lol, cool story
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  • From animekid on October 09, 2006
    weirdest pairing...ever

    but I am gunna read it...XD

    still it's interesting even though I HATE hyuugaincest (but not as much as uchiha incest -___-;;;;) and I love rare pairings

    mmm..keep it up..I promise to make constructive critism next time

    you actually got me hooked with your writing so far ^_^
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  • From ANON - lindsei on October 07, 2006
    what are you talking about...your a wonderful writer. this story is so cute. i hope that you write the rest of it
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  • From ANON - Johnnycake on August 30, 2006
    ...It confused me a little bit.
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  • From ANON - Spirit of the Chihuahua on August 30, 2006
    Alright an update. Neji's cute getting all jealous and over protective. I love it.
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  • From ANON - lanier on August 29, 2006
    Awe that chapter just ended way to quickly. I cant wait to see more. Heh heh.
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  • From ANON - Ino on August 29, 2006
    My GOD! GET TO THE SMUT ALREADY!
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  • From ANON - Nixxi on August 29, 2006

    I really like your story and your grammar is fantastic except that you don't stick with one tense.
    EG:

    She would like to thank Neji-niisan for saving her from Gaara-sama (a.k.a. the scary kazekage-dono, in her head) but she would very much like to bash him too for divesting her of a leisurely storll.

    Right now she could do neither. He is marching her off LITERALLY (if you are within ten feet distance from them, you would hear the slapof their slippered feet against the marbled ground) to her room, his hand firmly clasped on her elbow.


    You keep switching between present, the imperfect, and past tense. The story would flow better in the imperfect/past tense.



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  • From ANON - Because I Can on August 29, 2006
    Lol neji's going crazy.
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  • From ANON - cheh on August 21, 2006
    Hmm i like it 8D i hope to see the next chap soon
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