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Reviews for Survival of the Fittest

By : akashicrecord
  • From ANON - Hellagoddess on August 14, 2006
    Please continue. This is very good.
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  • From ANON - emu on August 13, 2006
    I would love to see this story continued. It doesn't seem like it could end in such a way. Hope you do consider continuing it!
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  • From ANON - raefire on August 10, 2006
    very interesting! can't wait to see where this is going!
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  • From ANON - poornmiserable on August 10, 2006
    oh please continue it...it's really really good and well written please please update soon please!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Siy. on August 08, 2006
    I totally love it. I hope you will continue.
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  • From ANON - rissy169 on August 08, 2006
    very interesting! i'd really like to read more, so please update!
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  • From ANON - anonymous on August 07, 2006
    Interesting. I'd like to read more.
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  • From ANON - Siy on August 07, 2006
    Love it! =o
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  • From ANON - krickets on August 07, 2006
    Ahh no !! i think this is actually pretty damn great, so yea AU cause thats fairly unlikely to happen but thats why its FANFICTION.....anything else is just dull.

    So yea pleeeease keep going i really w ant to see more of this, i t would be so great. Maybe a little more interaction between sakura and the brothers would be good, and more dialogue would help fill it out. Some parts seemed to have been dropped and could use more description especially the first three or four paragraphs.
    Then again thats completly up to you.

    Cant wait for the next instalment
    krickitat
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