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Reviews for Take Care of You

By : AiSCrim
  • From Hestia on December 01, 2006
    Tense, you expect us to focus on verb tense when you've got Kakashi whimpering and tied up by Iruka? Sorry, but I was too busy getting aroused to pay the slightest attention to tense. Use the pluperfect if you want--whatever. Yummy! Thanks for sharing!
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  • From ANON - kiss_me_deadly on December 01, 2006
    Stylistically, it wasn't confusing at all. I write like that too. The thing that threw me, and maybe this is just a personal preference, but I just hate it when people call each other "pet." For some reason, it just grates on my nerves. But aside from my personal pet-peeve, it was an enjoyable read, funny in some parts.
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  • From ANON - Mytha on December 01, 2006
    This was some of the most delicious and steamy smut, Iruka was very sexy and Kakashi was so gullible, I can't believe he was played so easily. I thought it was really well written and you should definitely write some more!
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  • From ANON - sadistickiss on August 12, 2006
    ^^ I've gotta admit I'm more of a Iruka-uke fan *he's so adorable*. But this was fantastic *soooo hot*. It was ingenius of Iruka to continuously make Kakashi feel guilty with his tears.

    Lol, I've got a question regarding the position though. Maybe I'm just incredibly naive, but is that position possible? "..and his mouth keeps itself occupied on the upper part of his body."

    If it is... HOW SUPER!! XP!!

    Thanks for writing this!
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  • From ANON - llewellynprince on August 03, 2006
    Finally an Iruka seme!!!

    I liked.

    Good job!
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  • From ANON - Yummaoi on August 02, 2006
    It was great i think i liked Iruka as seme,and though i usually have bad time trying to understand stories written in English i had no such problem reading yours.And scenes was gorgeous for someone who has no experience in sex-well i have no experience either ^_^-
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