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Reviews for Can I Play?

By : punkin02
  • From sakuraharunospussylover on March 15, 2022

    Itachi fucks Sasuke so good. 


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  • From Vague on April 27, 2007
    Hello Author,
    I am a huge fan of yaoi and have started a site archiving all the good yaoi fiction. I am glad to say that your story has made it into the archive. Congratulations on telling a truly moving tale.

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    The archive is nothing more than a site which links directly to good stories. I do not claim your story as my own but rather I encourage others to read and review it as it deserves that recognition.

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  • From ANON - blisblop on December 09, 2006
    This was pretty and very sweet.I liked the way Itachi lost contruol to Sasuke and the way you described the way they made each other feel. i'd like to hear more,esp.Itachi letting Sasuke penetrate,it wouldn't hurt much and its very natural that they would like to feel what pleased the other so, and this is non power play sex but is more sacred play sex( in a manner of thinking,with-in the 'play' of fantasy).You would have the right touch with words to pull this off.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on October 19, 2006
    Weeeeeeeee!So cute!What about"can we play it again?",in a normally public place.Cause these guys are just too kawaii to be left unbothered.

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  • From The2Evils on August 03, 2006
    I really liked it but now i think it would be interesting to see Sasuke teach Naruto the game LOL PLEASE
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  • From ANON - Flippy on August 02, 2006
    It was cute! but don't you think you should have dropped his age cause surly he would have more common sense then that. but the part with "did i pee in your mouth" too cute but too cute for the age of 13. maybe 10 or 11 should have nbeen the age. but it was still good
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