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Reviews for The Ties that Bind

By : Twylight
  • From ANON - Ann-chan on October 03, 2006
    Grr. Cut off half my review -.-'

    ANYWAY, what I was saying was that I loved the ItaSasu as well! Silly Itachi, raping his impressionable little brother and feeling no remorse over it whatsoever :o And silly Sasuke for liking it. xD

    And the NaruGaaSasu was delicious too! I loved how Sasuke tried to make Naruto jealous. It's so him. Such a wench. xD

    Great job, Catesan, I'm looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - Ann-chan on October 03, 2006
    EEE!!!

    OMGANGRYSEXLDSFJkdfjk!

    Yeah. I had to get that out.

    Regardless, chapters two through four were absolutely delicious as always. I admit I have a preference for 2.5, just because it was, well, angry sex between Naruto and Sasuke.
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  • From ANON - Sekre on October 02, 2006
    -pounces-

    AHHHHHH!!!!!!!! Sasuke uke!!! I love you!!! xD

    So many SasuNaru fics out there.. makes my head hurt =3 I just, I could never see Sasuke top, and I hate how all the fics that have a million reviews (meaning they're super) are SasuNaru -cries- I'm so happy I came across this fic!! It's really good and the characterizations are great. Sasuke is a brooding bitch (what's new, eh? lol) and Naruto is just hilarious - I love how he's all rough and jealous ... hehe, not to mention totally enamoured. And Gaara, wow, he had fun. But he's right, Sasuke and Naruto do have some serious problems. -snicker-

    Though the majority of the fics I read are ItaSasu, this fic has really inspired me to go out and find some more NaruSasu, as daunting as the task is (I know, it's not THAT bad...but I'm lazy...I want all the NaruSasu fics to come to me, damnit! ) Hehe, anyway, lovely fic so far.

    Awaiting the update.
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  • From ANON - Shosuro on October 02, 2006
    That was some good smex!! Totally hot! I love it! Can't wait until you update!
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  • From ANON - Anna on October 01, 2006
    Yay! *hugs you* you wrote it!! But I admit that I'm a little pissed of at that Oroxhimaru bastard, how dare he touch Sasuke!! But anyway, Naruto was jealous! And it was Gaara's first time, wasn't that sweet? I'm impressed he didn't pass out after fuck and being fucked by those two fine male specimens (I'm sorry for the vocabulary but my mind isn't properly working after reading that and I can't find a better way to say it!)
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  • From ANON - aria on October 01, 2006
    Bad Sasuke! he just enjoyed seeing Naruto jealous!!
    Sasuke has to receive a lot of punishment for it, i think...Hehe...
    but, your NaruGaarSasu scene is SO HOT and very well-written.
    even if i'm a big fan of NaruSasuNaru, i enjoyed it .
    so, i'm so glad to hear you were a Japanese student. i'm Japanese!(^_^)
    you always use Japanese terms effectively.
    can't wait for the next chap, Gambatte!!

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  • From ANON - eien no ren on September 30, 2006
    Ohhh... jeez! I love this story! it's so sexy and unusual! I was hot and bothered while reading it. Please continue soon!
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  • From ANON - Aeirlys on September 29, 2006
    yurk I hate threesome >_
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  • From ANON - Cindy on September 29, 2006
    OOO HAA~! got me now - I'm a sucker for Naru/Sasu/Gaar
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  • From Jackee on September 29, 2006
    when I first read your author notes i couldn't hold back my excitement! A NaruSasu fic that would be of better quality than the few ones already existing, perhaps even beating the crap out of the ones who unfortunately are SasuNaru!

    I like your fic, but it's not as mind-blowing that I had hoped. The thing that annoyes me the most is that you put numbers after practically every word that any self-respecting Naruto fan already knows, and instead of having the desriptions at the end of the fic, you have it in the middle of it all. It kinda breaks of the rhythm.

    You don't have to get a beta reader, just look through the text before updating. There's quite a few missing words as well as not-needed words.

    Don't take this as a flame, please! i like it and the sex scene in chapter one was hot!! (yay for SasUKE!! XD )
    now off to read chapter three... ^__^
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  • From ANON - angel_queen on September 28, 2006
    i liked that a whole lot . i can't wait to see what happens next please UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From DemonBlaze on September 28, 2006
    The chapters (2 and 2.5, or whatever) were great.
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  • From ANON - Hellagoddess on September 28, 2006
    This is awesome! Update soon please! I appreciate the effort you've gone to to keep all the respective shinobi in character...
    For a self-beta-ing job you are also doing very well...I've spotted a few mistakes but if you proof-read closely i'm sure you'll be able to pick them up - mostly in chapter one. If you need any help, I do beta occasionally. You can contact me on hellagoddess@hotmail.com if you are interested.
    I also enjoy your use of Japanese. Many people are afraid to use the language excessively, choosing to avoid angering/confusing the people who do not understand it. I, however, am a Japanese student, and therefore quite pleased to see it popping up on frequent occasions. I feel that it lends the story more...genuineness.
    All in all, very well done and I am looking foward to further chapters in this story!

    Hellagoddess
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  • From ANON - snow_angel on September 28, 2006
    just from what you implied would happen with garra i now relize that I have a thing for him as well. Thank you so much! :p can't wait until you update, hopefully it will be just as intriging as it starts...btw this chapter was really really really good! Pls update soon.
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  • From ANON - sharingan.swirl on September 28, 2006
    Hot Damn!! *drooling* You're damn good! I love your writing style. I hear you on the too many poorly written fan fics, but I have to say that sometimes people just wanna write something to get their 'idea' out of their head and see what happens with it. I'm by far NOT the greatest writer, but I've been working on something and lord knows that my characters are WAY OOC... the only thing going for them is that they LOOK like Sasuke and Naruto. I was just thinking about changing the names and descriptions. But I digress.

    I'm very much looking forward to your next chapter, for obvious reasons. I know that life gets in the way, so no pressure. I truly enjoy your writing, not just for the sexy parts... though those are amazing! One of my favorite parts actually was when Kakashi told Naruto he was late. Talk about role reversal!

    Also, I don't know if you have a beta yet, but i'm more than willing to help out with that.

    Until next time,
    sharingan.swirl
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